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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Because it took over a month to conquer Mira dungeon, and both he and Lydia were lacking in rations, he slimmed down, and then because his diet was healthier than the cheap fast-food his family had him eat, due to budget problems, he became far more fit.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Even if we put all her other, well-justified, hang-ups aside, she was raised in modern Japan, where monogamy is the norm, and enforced by law. Winding up in an alternate world that sees polygamy as the norm, and finding herself in a harem, even though she's doted on like crazy, it's still hard for her to wrap her head around the fact that she has to share Deek's affection with others.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Since this new world has apparently no concept of contraception or ovulation cycles, and Deek engages in frequent sexual intercourse without any precautions, sooner or later he was bound to get one or more of his girls pregnant, even if he had equipped his [Pervert] job which has an inherent lower fertility rate. She just so happens to be the first.
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* ShoutOut: When assassins come after Deek in Chalm, she shouts "GET OVER HERE!" and yanks out one of the assassin's souls. Deek internally proclaims [[VideoGame/MortalKombat "that she pulled a Scorpion."]]
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* ShoutOut: When assassins come after Deek in Chalm, she shouts "GET OVER HERE!" and yanks out one of the assassin's souls. Deek internally proclaims [[VideoGame/MortalKombat [[Franchise/MortalKombat "that she pulled a Scorpion."]]
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* CreateYourOwnVillain: In addition to his antics in the Fae continent turning one of the fae princesses from GoodIsDumb to OmnicidalManiac evil, some time travel shenanigans, as a result of being dragged into a time-warping dungeon anomaly has turned one of his own daughters self-righteously evil, and he learns, to his horror, that several of his strongest enemies became the way they were when he fought them as a direct result of him being dragged into the past.
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* GagBoobs: She makes a point of drawing people's attention to her breasts to emphasize that she's the leader of the Big Breast sect. She even slams them on her table when she has Deek in attendance explaining the splintering that the church is facing.
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* DeathBySex: Almost. She nearly gave Deek "death by vagina." Yes, it's played for laughs.
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* OutWithABang: Almost. She nearly gave Deek "death by vagina". Yes, it's {{played for laughs}}.
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* AnAxeToGrind: Fights with a large two-handed war-axe.
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: He is a good and noble character. and he doesn't just have sex with his ladies, he makes love to them. As such, they insist on coming back for more all the time, even if they have to dog-pile him into an orgy to do it.
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** '''Patience''': He's very long suffering with a long fuse, provided his love interests aren't offended.
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** '''Diligence''': He's hard working and doesn't stop until his task is done, even if he's not expecting a reward.
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* SexGod: He doesn't just have sex with his ladies, he makes love to them. As such, they insist on coming back for more all the time, even if they have to dog-pile him into an orgy to do it.
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* KnifeNut: Her primary weapon is a pair of knives.
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I attempted revising part of this.
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* BastardBoyfriend: He wooed and seduced a human princess, just so he could have a pretext to start a genocidal war, then murdered her when her role was over.
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* SuicideByCop: Attempted but averted. With Deek's special soul-reaping blade coming for him, King Roth desperately taunts Deek's harem, trying to provoke them to murder him instead in their well-justified fury. They're too smart to fall for it. Deek proclaims that Roth was trying to get one or more of Deek's ladies to kill him so he could hide his soul in Chalm's dungeon and work to take it over. Roth winds up becoming DeaderThanDead when Deek's blade shreds his soul like parmesan cheese.
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* DemonicPossession: Her part of the "get the harem back together" arc involves being tricked by her own tribe to return to Dioshin where she winds up as part of King Roth's immortality experiments. Originally under a cat-kin amoral scientist, later retconned to a fellow fox-kin, said scientist transforms her entire soul into a dungeon, taking over her body and marching it down on Roth's political rivals, so he can engage in a bit of EngineeredHeroics. Though Deek manages to rescue her and most of her unwitting victims, this has long-term consequences that are still being assessed.
* ShoutOut: When assassins come after Deek in Chalm, she shouts "GET OVER HERE!" and yanks out one of the assassin's souls. Deek internally proclaims [[VideoGame/MortalKombat "that she pulled a Scorpion."]]
* DramaticIrony: In the wake of Kaia's rampage, she throws herself into her work to cope with the loss of her child, thanks to being stabbed in the belly by a soul-reaping dagger. Calypso had saved her child without her knowledge. Said child becomes the dungeon core of Chalm's dungeon. Deek tries to inform her that their child is alive, well, and absolutely adorable, but she rebuffs him, refusing to let him tell her.
* AnimalJingoism: Lions and tigers in the wild absolutely hate each other, despite both being species of cats, and will fight to the death for little reason, or no reason at all. This lion beast-kin ordered the extermination of the tiger-beast kin tribe, to the last child, and winds up dying under the claws of a tiger beast-kin.
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* BlamingTheVictim: When he talks about disposing of women who can't measure up, he's not talking about just simply killing them. He feeds them to his dungeon and they come back as generic zombies. When Deek calls him out on it, he says it's their fault for not being more "distinctive."
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* BlamingTheVictim: When he talks about disposing of women who can't measure up, he's not talking about just simply killing them. He feeds them to his dungeon and they come back as generic zombies.zombie-like beings, though not as undead. When Deek calls him out on it, he says it's their fault for not being more "distinctive."
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* LastOfTheirKind: Her race is extinct, and she's the only known living member.
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* LastOfTheirKind: LastOfHerKind: Her race is extinct, and she's the only known living member.
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* LastOfTheirKind: She's the last of the known Deep Dwarf race.
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* DareToBeBadass: When she returns to Deek's side, she calls out the rest of the harem for falling apart while he was away and expecting him to carry them through the battle with Roth's harem army. They respond by going OneWingedAngel and stomping Roth's harem to the ground. Roth retaliates by backstabbing Deek as he's trying to catch his breath.
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* BrokenPedestal: His top haremette "First" held him in such high esteem that she called him "a real man" despite all the abuse and torment he put his entire harem through, and loathed Deek for not wanting to be like him. Then she saw how cowardly he really is when he fled with his tail literally between his legs the moment Deek looked like a legitimate threat, and retaliated by kicking him into a pool of deadly miasma, twice, the moment she had the chance.
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* HatedByAll: He is so odious, everybody on both sides of the fourth wall loath him, and he has people serving him only out of fear of his might.
* {{Hypocrite}}: He calls Deek a "cheater" for performing a successful soul-fusion with Lydia, after he cheated in the fight by teleporting behind Deek and backstabbing him when it was agreed to be a contest between their respective harem ladies only. Deek calls him out on it as Roth is getting a well-deserved NoHoldsBarredBeatdown.
* {{Hypocrite}}: He calls Deek a "cheater" for performing a successful soul-fusion with Lydia, after he cheated in the fight by teleporting behind Deek and backstabbing him when it was agreed to be a contest between their respective harem ladies only. Deek calls him out on it as Roth is getting a well-deserved NoHoldsBarredBeatdown.
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[[folder: King Diorite]]
The king of the Deep Dwarves, found by Deek as he's searching for Rubee and Terra.
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* CircularReasoning: He "knows" humans are greedy, ruthless, and untrustworthy, waiting to strike at the first opportunity, so when Deek appears in his throne room to talk things out peacefully, he magically '''compels''' Deek to fight him with a "Provoke" spell and then gloats "self defense" when striking back against a Deek he gloats is compelled to attack him, even though he knows Deek doesn't stand a chance in a head-on confrontation.
* DugTooDeep: He freed the ObliviouslyEvil goddess "Twilight" from her prison when leading a mining team into the deep, dark corners of the world.
* KnightTemplar: HIS view is the only "right" view of the world, no exceptions.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: When he realizes that he destroyed a fragment of his daughter's soul with his own two hands after learning that Sapphire, the Banshee Queen, was not the "dungeon created mockery" he thought, but a fragment of Rubee's soul that was left behind as she was fleeing to the surface.
* RedemptionEqualsDeath: He lets Twilight control his body, knowing full well Deek will use a soul-lore bomb he gave him to end his existence, forever. Just to buy time for the surface to prepare for Twilight's eventual return.
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! GODS
[[folder: Twilight]]
The boss Deek finds in the Deep, from whom he has to rescue Rubee and Terra.
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* DarkIsEvil: She's darkness incarnate, and she's the epitome of stagnation and decay.
* TheEvilsOfFreeWill: She is genuinely confused and enraged that people don't think being trapped in her LotusEaterMachine is a good thing, and decries free will as useless and worthless.
* FinalBoss: The final and ultimate threat Deek will have to face.
* LeakingCanOfEvil: After Diorite broke Gaia's seal, all he managed is to hold her back a while by collapsing mine entrances in her way, and even his "master plan" of using Deek's soul as a bomb would have only bought a few weeks' time.
* LotusEaterMachine: She traps all her victims in one.
* ObliviouslyEvil: She genuinely believes she's the epitome of good and righteousness, but if her will came to pass, the entire planet would be a quagmire, trapped in eternal stagnation and decay.
* TautologicalTemplar: She believes that bringing an end all pain and suffering is a noble goal, so whatever she does towards that end is itself noble. Who cares if everyone is stuck in permanent stagnation and decay? What good is learning, growth, and free will anyway?
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[[folder: Gaia]]
The source of all life on the planet.
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* GoodIsNotNice: She maintains life on the planet by shredding the souls of the departed in a blender and scattering them.
* HolyIsNotSafe: Direct contact with Gaia is immensely painful and can damage the soul.
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* VillainsWantMercy: When it finnaly dawns on him that Deek has all the advantages and has his soul at his mercy, he begins pleading for his life, even using Feyna as a hostage, proclaiming that only he knows where the poor elf was sent. Deek retorts that he does indeed need that information, but Aberis is TooPowerfulToLive. Cue an extremely agonizing rending of Aberis's soul from his stolen body.
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* VillainsWantMercy: When it finnaly finally dawns on him that Deek has all the advantages and has his soul at his mercy, he begins pleading for his life, even using Feyna as a hostage, proclaiming that only he knows where the poor elf was sent. Deek retorts that he does indeed need that information, but Aberis is TooPowerfulToLive. Cue an extremely agonizing rending of Aberis's soul from his stolen body.
* FaceHeelTurn: When she returns to the story, she has gone full-tilt evil, loudly proclaims humans are a "virus" that needs to be exterminated and brags about killing Demetri after luring him to the peace table, protesting that he had no right to expect fair treatment.
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