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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: In ''Problem Sleuth'', there was no reason to believe they weren't just stylized humans like most of the cast. Here, they're part of the humanoid Carapacian race.
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* ARiddleWrappedInAMysteryInsideAnEnigma: From WV's [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003313 point of view]], anyway:
-->You are somewhat mystified by the fact that she is be more impressed by your silly drawings than your amazing technology.
-->You are somewhat mystified by the fact that she is be more impressed by your silly drawings than your amazing technology.
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* AmbidextrousSprite: [[ExploitedTrope Exploited]] hilariously.
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* AmbidextrousSprite: [[ExploitedTrope Exploited]] hilariously.when he needs to use the barcode tattoo on his arm after it got cut off. To get around this he flips his own sprite so that the tattoo appears on his other arm.
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** "Wait, that was awful. [[IncrediblyLamePun Really really bad]]. You're sure you can do better than that."
* CarryABigStick: [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=005517 Welcomed into a home,]] Slick wields a SimpleStaff while [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=005518 attacking Doc Scratch,]] Dragon to [[BigBad Lord English]] of the Felt, the Midnight Crew's ArchEnemy.
** Later begins to carry Lord English's Golden Cuestaff after he leaves it behind.
* ComplexityAddiction: On review, his heists seem more convoluted than they really have to be.
* {{Cyborg}}: As of the [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006571 2nd intermission of chapter 6]] he's starting to resemble the Bunny: he's got one [[ElectronicEyes Electronic Eye]] and an EyepatchOfPower, both arms are robotic, and metal plates cover the top of his face.
* CarryABigStick: [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=005517 Welcomed into a home,]] Slick wields a SimpleStaff while [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=005518 attacking Doc Scratch,]] Dragon to [[BigBad Lord English]] of the Felt, the Midnight Crew's ArchEnemy.
** Later begins to carry Lord English's Golden Cuestaff after he leaves it behind.
* ComplexityAddiction: On review, his heists seem more convoluted than they really have to be.
* {{Cyborg}}: As of the [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006571 2nd intermission of chapter 6]] he's starting to resemble the Bunny: he's got one [[ElectronicEyes Electronic Eye]] and an EyepatchOfPower, both arms are robotic, and metal plates cover the top of his face.
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* DisneyDeath: A page showing all the dead characters has a question mark next to him, making his fate ambiguous. Hussie's [[http://mspandrew.tumblr.com/post/12680094125/answers tumblr]] also stated that he's taking care of Slick. This seemed like a joke, until it was [[TrollingCreator remarkably]] [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006571 confirmed]] at the beginning of Act 6 Intermission 2.
** However, unlike other characters who had undergone similar circumstances, Slick had to undergo an EmergencyTransformation and is heavily mechanical now.
** However, unlike other characters who had undergone similar circumstances, Slick had to undergo an EmergencyTransformation and is heavily mechanical now.
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* DisneyDeath: A page showing all the dead characters has a question mark next to him, making his fate ambiguous. Hussie's [[http://mspandrew.tumblr.com/post/12680094125/answers tumblr]] also stated that he's taking care of Slick. This seemed like a joke, case of TrollingCreator, until it was [[TrollingCreator remarkably]] remarkably [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006571 confirmed]] at the beginning of Act 6 Intermission 2.
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** However, unlike other characters who had undergone similar circumstances, Slick had to undergo an EmergencyTransformation and is heavily mechanical now.
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: When Karkat doesn't calm down after Sollux dies, Jack eventually starts slapping the crap out of him.
* GoodScarsEvilScars: Gets one across his eye.
* HeroKiller: He manages to be the cause of Dirk's death twice, it's only due to Dave, Terezi and Jane that neither death sticks.
* GoodScarsEvilScars: Gets one across his eye.
* HeroKiller: He manages to be the cause of Dirk's death twice, it's only due to Dave, Terezi and Jane that neither death sticks.
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: When Karkat doesn't calm down after Sollux dies, Jack eventually starts slapping the crap out of him.
* GoodScarsEvilScars: Gets one across hiseye.
eye after his encounter with Snowman.
* HeroKiller: He manages to be the cause of Dirk's deathtwice, it's twice. It's only due to Dave, Terezi and Jane that neither death sticks.
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* AnAxeToGrind: Boxcars has quite the [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003119 impressive collection]] of battle-axes (along with a [[CarryABigStick mace]] or two). Ironically, while he goes on to decapitate another character (Eggs), it's... not by using an axe.
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* AnAxeToGrind: Boxcars has quite the [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003119 impressive collection]] of battle-axes (along with a [[CarryABigStick mace]] or two). Ironically, while he goes on to decapitate another character (Eggs), it's... not by using an axe.
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* BrickJoke: At one point in the first intermission, he is "clocked" into a Horse Calender by Cans. Come Act 6's Third intermission, Meenah finds a horse calender that Hearts Boxcars is "still farming."
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* BrickJoke: At one point in the first intermission, he is "clocked" into a Horse Calender Calendar by Cans. Come Act 6's Third intermission, 6 Intermission 3, Meenah finds a horse calender that Hearts Boxcars is "still farming."
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** "YOU HATE TIME TRAVEL YOU HATE TIME TRAVEL YOU HATE TIME TRAVEL [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003151 YOU HATE TIME TRAVEL...]]"
* EvilCounterpart: While at first it may seem he has no clear analogue in Team Sleuth's three man band, Hearts Boxcars is pretty similar to the Hired Muscle that was payed to work with Team Sleuth until his eventual death.
** Possibly also an analogue to AD as well, in that he is freakishly strong and angry often.
* EvilCounterpart: While at first it may seem he has no clear analogue in Team Sleuth's three man band, Hearts Boxcars is pretty similar to the Hired Muscle that was payed to work with Team Sleuth until his eventual death.
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** Possibly also an analogue to AD as well, in that he is freakishly strong and angry often.
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* ImAHumanitarian: Poor Eggs.
** Possibly [[{{Foreshadowing}} foreshadowed]] by [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003120 this page]]. His favorite candy is wax ''lips'', and he would ''eat the eyeballs'' of anyone who tried to steal them.
** Possibly [[{{Foreshadowing}} foreshadowed]] by [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003120 this page]]. His favorite candy is wax ''lips'', and he would ''eat the eyeballs'' of anyone who tried to steal them.
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* ImAHumanitarian: Poor Eggs.
** Possibly [[{{Foreshadowing}} foreshadowed]]Defeats Eggs by [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003120 this page]]. His favorite candy is wax ''lips'', and he would ''eat the eyeballs'' of anyone who tried to steal them.biting off his head.
** Possibly [[{{Foreshadowing}} foreshadowed]]
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** Or maybe he just hates wimps.
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The Midnight Crew were originally non-canonical characters from ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth'', wherein they were Team Sleuth's [[PsychoRangers Psycho Ranger]] counterparts, waging grand warfare against the protagonists through donation-funded commands. In the ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' universe, they were apparently [[BreakoutCharacter so popular]] that the ''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures'' site that the characters visit features a Midnight Crew adventure as the followup to ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth'', something which Creator/AndrewHussie [[MythologyGag apparently considered in real life]] after abandoning the all-Flash version of ''Homestuck''.
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The Midnight Crew were originally non-canonical characters from ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth'', wherein they were Team Sleuth's [[PsychoRangers Psycho Ranger]] counterparts, waging grand warfare against the protagonists through donation-funded commands. In the ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' universe, they were apparently [[BreakoutCharacter so popular]] that the ''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures'' site that the characters visit features a Midnight Crew adventure as the followup to ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth'', something which Creator/AndrewHussie [[MythologyGag [[WhatCouldHaveBeen apparently considered in real life]] after abandoning the all-Flash version of ''Homestuck''.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: He sticks a time bomb under Doze's hat. While this was ordered by Diamonds Droog, he didn't seem too sorry about it, considering how he was 'interrogating' [[color:#2ED73A: Doze]] previously.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: He sticks a time bomb under Doze's hat. While this was ordered by Diamonds Droog, he didn't seem too sorry about it, considering how he was 'interrogating' [[color:#2ED73A: Doze]] Doze previously.
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: He interrogates [[color:#2ED73A: Doze]] Doze by [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003078 lightly tapping him on the knee]] and [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003081 swapping hats with him.]]
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* TheChessmaster: He was able to, using the forensics evidence of some destroyed clocks and a single lost tooth, figure out exactly when [[color:#2ED73A: Fin]] was going to try and bite him from the past, and fill him full of lead instead. Meanwhile, he used knowledge of The Felt's temporal abilities, Clubs Deuce, and a time bomb to redirect Trace, who was attacking from the future, and kill off both him and Doze at the same time. Pretty safe to say that Droog is the smartest and the best planner.
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* TheChessmaster: He was able to, using the forensics evidence of some destroyed clocks and a single lost tooth, figure out exactly when [[color:#2ED73A: Fin]] Fin was going to try and bite him from the past, and fill him full of lead instead. Meanwhile, he used knowledge of The Felt's temporal abilities, Clubs Deuce, and a time bomb to redirect Trace, who was attacking from the future, and kill off both him and Doze at the same time. Pretty safe to say that Droog is the smartest and the best planner.
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* WildCard: Slick had been working his own agenda ever since the Intermission ended, generally doing whatever he pleased. The only reason he gets involved in the final fight is because he wants to get revenge on Lord English, and Lord Jack is the closest thing to him getting that revenge. As such, despite both him, the Striders and Terezi all wanting to defeat LJ, he instead attacks both sides so that he may take care of the alternate, not caring if he has to kill the third group in the fight to do so.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Despite Prospit and Derse being programmed into Sburb as enemies, both Prospitans and Dersites seem to find each other attractive (Spades Slick and Ms. Paint, for example).
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* BerserkButton: Don't mess with the mail. No, seriously. ''[[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003849 Do not]] mess with [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003853 the mail.]]'' Even more of a berserk button? Killing her friends.
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* BerserkButton: Don't mess with the mail. No, seriously. ''[[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003849 Do not]] mess with [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003853 the mail.]]'' Even more of a berserk button? Killing her friends.]]''
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* NotInThisForYourRevolution: He's firmly against Lord English for his own personal reasons; he's only there to fight Jack English in Collide for revenge, not for the kids' greater plans, and has no qualms hitting Dirk, Dave, or Terezi out of the way during the fight.
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The Carapaces were cloned, to my knowledge. Outside of Ship Tease, there's no official indication that WV and PM are a thing.
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* KilledOffForReal: AR, WQ, and WK. The White Royalty may return after a fashion as the post-scratch session's new royalty, but it remains to be seen.
* OfficialCouple: WK and WQ. PM and WV are hinted at throughout the comic.
** Appears to have been confirmed as of [S] Act 7, when PM and WV repopulate the planet with carapaces.
* OfficialCouple: WK and WQ. PM and WV are hinted at throughout the comic.
** Appears to have been confirmed as of [S] Act 7, when PM and WV repopulate the planet with carapaces.
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* KilledOffForReal: AR, WQ, Just before the Exiles can escape the desolate Earth to another universe, the demon who destroyed their kingdoms ambushes and WK. The kills the White Royalty may return after a fashion as King, the post-scratch session's new royalty, but it remains White Queen, and the Aimless Renegade. Although the narrative then moves on to be seen.
an alternate universe where versions of each of these three characters should exist, the alternate White King is killed before having a single line of dialogue and the counterpart for the Renegade is never encountered, leaving them as two of the only ''Homestuck'' characters without some counterpart living by the ending.
* OfficialCouple:WK The White King and WQ. PM Queen, as co-monarchs, are husband and WV are hinted at throughout the comic.
** Appears to have been confirmed as of [S] Act 7, when PM and WV repopulate the planet with carapaces.wife.
* OfficialCouple:
** Appears to have been confirmed as of [S] Act 7, when PM and WV repopulate the planet with carapaces.
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* FilmNoir: The Midnight Crew is a parody of this genre, with their internal narration and faces framed in shadow.
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* CanonImmigrant: The Midnight Crew was originally a four-man PsychoRangers group created for a donation request during ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth'' that spent most of their time having non-canonical skirmishes with the main characters. However, in ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' they actually play a more relevant role in the plot.
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: Courtyard Droll[=/=]Clubs Deuce is an [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} idiotic goofball]]. He's also killed the most (that we see) of the whole Midnight Crew, with his body count including the majority of the Felt.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Part of the reason Andrew Hussie gave Spades his name was simply because it sounded cool.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Part of the reason Andrew Hussie Creator/AndrewHussie gave Spades his name was simply because it sounded cool.
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* ClonesArePeopleToo: almost all exiles (those with [[ScannableMan barcode tatoos]] on their wrists) are cloned carapacians from the facilities in the Veil.
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The Midnight Crew were originally non-canonical characters from ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth'', wherein they were Team Sleuth's [[PsychoRangers Psycho Ranger]] counterparts, waging grand warfare against the protagonists through donation-funded commands. In the ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}'' universe, they were apparently [[BreakoutCharacter so popular]] that the ''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures'' site that the characters visit features a Midnight Crew adventure as the followup to ''Webcomic/ProblemSleuth'', something which AndrewHussie Creator/AndrewHussie [[MythologyGag apparently considered in real life]] after abandoning the all-Flash version of ''Homestuck''.
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*** [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=007211 Her delivery is justice, and as you know all too well, nothing stops the mail.]]
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* VoiceWithAnInternetConnection: They use various computer terminals planted by Skaian to direct Sburb players.
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* VoiceWithAnInternetConnection: They use various computer terminals planted by Skaian Skaia to direct Sburb players.
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** There's also the matter of the [[FreudWasRight BULL PENIS CANE]].CANE.
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* FakeBand: Both the [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/album/midnight-crew-drawing-dead-2 Midnight Crew]] and the desert [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/album/the-wanderers wanderers]] both.
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* {{Leitmotif}}: [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/explore-2 Explore]], for all of them.
** [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/vagabounce-2 Vagabounce]] for WV.
** PM does not have a specific theme, but is heavily associated with [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/sburban-jungle-2 Sburban Jungle]] [[note]] Her appearance in Cascade coincides with the only appearance of the riff and the only song identified as being solely about her on the Wanderers album is [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/litrichean-rioghail a remix of it.]][[/note]]
** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqs4yf_Fs4I Tomahawk Head]], a bonus track from The Wanderers, for AR.
** [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/riches-to-ruins-movements-i-ii Riches to Ruins Movements I & II]], shared between WQ and WK.
** [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/vagabounce-2 Vagabounce]] for WV.
** PM does not have a specific theme, but is heavily associated with [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/sburban-jungle-2 Sburban Jungle]] [[note]] Her appearance in Cascade coincides with the only appearance of the riff and the only song identified as being solely about her on the Wanderers album is [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/litrichean-rioghail a remix of it.]][[/note]]
** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqs4yf_Fs4I Tomahawk Head]], a bonus track from The Wanderers, for AR.
** [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/riches-to-ruins-movements-i-ii Riches to Ruins Movements I & II]], shared between WQ and WK.
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* {{Homage}}: WV and PM are seen by many to be one to ''WesternAnimation/WallE'' [[note]]Post-apocalyptic non-humans (one dirty and goofy but endearing NiceGuy and one cute {{Badass}} shiny white girl, both of whom are on Missions they pursue beyond all logic or limit) meet up and develop a relationship. The shiny white girl ends up doing drastic things to save the life of the boy and is ultimately successful. That description could apply to WV and PM or WALL•E and EVE.[[/note]]
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* {{Homage}}: WV and PM are seen by many to be one to ''WesternAnimation/WallE'' [[note]]Post-apocalyptic non-humans (one dirty and goofy but endearing NiceGuy and one cute {{Badass}} and powerful shiny white girl, both of whom are on Missions they pursue beyond all logic or limit) meet up and develop a relationship. The shiny white girl ends up doing drastic things to save the life of the boy and is ultimately successful. That description could apply to WV and PM or WALL•E and EVE.[[/note]]
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* {{Badass}}: Throughout the course of the Intermission, it becomes increasingly clear that you do not fuck with the Midnight Crew under any circumstance.
** BadassNormal: He fights the Felt and does pretty well. Though, to be fair, some of their 'powers' are straight-up disadvantages.
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* {{Badass}}: Throughout the course of the Intermission, it becomes increasingly clear that you do not fuck with the Midnight Crew under any circumstance.
**BadassNormal: He fights the Felt and does pretty well. Though, to be fair, some of their 'powers' are straight-up disadvantages.
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** [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/vagabounce-2 Vagabounce]] for WV.
** PM does not have a specific theme, but is heavily associated with [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/sburban-jungle-2 Sburban Jungle]] [[note]] Her appearance in Cascade coincides with the only appearance of the riff and the only song identified as being solely about her on the Wanderers album is [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/litrichean-rioghail a remix of it.]][[/note]]
** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqs4yf_Fs4I Tomahawk Head]], a bonus track from The Wanderers, for AR.
** [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/riches-to-ruins-movements-i-ii Riches to Ruins Movements I & II]], shared between WQ and WK.
** PM does not have a specific theme, but is heavily associated with [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/sburban-jungle-2 Sburban Jungle]] [[note]] Her appearance in Cascade coincides with the only appearance of the riff and the only song identified as being solely about her on the Wanderers album is [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/litrichean-rioghail a remix of it.]][[/note]]
** [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqs4yf_Fs4I Tomahawk Head]], a bonus track from The Wanderers, for AR.
** [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/riches-to-ruins-movements-i-ii Riches to Ruins Movements I & II]], shared between WQ and WK.
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* {{Leitmotif}}: [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/vagabounce-2 Vagabounce]].
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* {{Leitmotif}}: [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqs4yf_Fs4I Tomahawk Head]], a bonus track from The Wanderers.
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* {{Leitmotif}}: [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/riches-to-ruins-movements-i-ii Riches to Ruins Movements I & II]], shared with WK.
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* {{Leitmotif}}: [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/riches-to-ruins-movements-i-ii Riches to Ruins Movements I & II]], shared with WQ.
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* KilledOffForReal: The Intermission ends with only Spades Slick alive, after traveling to a timeline where the other three are dead. Later on he kills Snowman, ending the universe and himself.
** Or so it seemed, until Andrew listed Slick as "?" instead of dead in [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006189 this panel]]. Slick is later confirmed to be alive behind the fourth wall.
** Or so it seemed, until Andrew listed Slick as "?" instead of dead in [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006189 this panel]]. Slick is later confirmed to be alive behind the fourth wall.
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* KilledOffForReal: The Intermission ends with only Spades Slick alive, after traveling to a timeline where the other three are dead. Later on on, he kills Snowman, ending the universe attacks his alternate self and himself.
** Or so it seemed, until Andrew listed Slick as "?" instead of dead in [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006189 this panel]].is decapitated by Dave.
* {{Leitmotif}}: The Midnight Crew does not have identifiable themes, though they are all associated with dark jazz. They do however have instruments, seen rather than heard.
*** Spades Slick islater confirmed to be alive behind the fourth wall.associated with pianos.
*** Diamonds Droog is associated with saxophones.
*** Clubs Deuce is associated with oboes.
*** Hearts Boxcars is associated with cellos.
** Or so it seemed, until Andrew listed Slick as "?" instead of dead in [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006189 this panel]].
* {{Leitmotif}}: The Midnight Crew does not have identifiable themes, though they are all associated with dark jazz. They do however have instruments, seen rather than heard.
*** Spades Slick is
*** Diamonds Droog is associated with saxophones.
*** Clubs Deuce is associated with oboes.
*** Hearts Boxcars is associated with cellos.
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Adding quotes and images; I used quotes that had the Midnight Crew's names in them, except for CD, because the bull penis quote sums him up better than anything else.
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* [[AfterTheEnd After the Reckoning]]: After abandoning the Incipisphere, their lives take place in the planet of the players they guide.
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* [[AfterTheEnd After the Reckoning]]: AfterTheEnd: After abandoning the Incipisphere, their lives take place in the planet of the players they guide.
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* BigGood: PM
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* FiveManBand:
** TheHero: WV, before becoming TheChick.
** TheLancer: AR
** TheBigGuy: PM, before replacing WV as TheHero.
** TheSmartGuy: WQ
** TheSixthRanger: WK
** TheHero: WV, before becoming TheChick.
** TheLancer: AR
** TheBigGuy: PM, before replacing WV as TheHero.
** TheSmartGuy: WQ
** TheSixthRanger: WK
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* FiveManBand:
** TheHero: WV, before becoming TheChick.
** TheLancer: AR
** TheBigGuy: PM, before replacing WV as TheHero.
** TheSmartGuy: WQ
** TheSixthRanger: WKFiveManBand: The Wanderers roughly fit this. As a bonus, they have their own [[https://homestuck.bandcamp.com/album/the-wanderers album]].
** TheHero: WV, before becoming TheChick.
** TheLancer: AR
** TheBigGuy: PM, before replacing WV as TheHero.
** TheSmartGuy: WQ
** TheSixthRanger: WK
* TheHero: For the Exiles as a whole.
* BigGood: For the Exiles as a whole, especially after ascending.
* TheBigGuy: PM is quite adept with her REGISWORD, making her this in the Exiles' FiveManBand.
* TheBigGuy: PM is quite adept with her REGISWORD, making her this in the Exiles' FiveManBand.
* TheLancer: AR acts as this to WV's [[TheHero Hero]].
* TheSmartGuy: WQ makes a plan to help the Exiles escape the dying universe and restart civilization elsewhere.
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-->''Soon the WRIT KEEPER will awaken and serve his new queen. It is then that her work may begin.''
-->''Soon the WRIT KEEPER will awaken and serve his new queen. It is then that her work may begin.''
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-->''Sure are a lot of them today. They must be getting more desperate.''
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* PornStash
* QuirkyMinibossSquad
* QuirkyMinibossSquad
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* PornStash
PornStash: Each of them has a their own unique stash.
*QuirkyMinibossSquadQuirkyMinibossSquad: They served this role in the Troll session before Vriska exiled them.
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-->''Your name is SPADES SLICK. You are the leader of a notoriously vicious gang of mobsters called the MIDNIGHT CREW. A rival gang known as THE FELT recently knocked over one of your favorite casinos. Your long quest of revenge has finally taken you through the front door of the mansion belonging to their loathsome boss, LORD ENGLISH. ''
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** {{Cyborg}}: As of the [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006571 2nd intermission of chapter 6]] he's starting to resemble the Bunny: he's got one [[ElectronicEyes Electronic Eye]] and an EyepatchOfPower, both arms are robotic, and metal plates cover the top of his face.
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*** EmpoweredBadassNormal: Come Act 6, he's just a straight up {{Cyborg}}.
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** IncrediblyLamePun: "Wait, that was awful. Really really bad. You're sure you can do better than that."
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** IncrediblyLamePun: "Wait, that was awful. [[IncrediblyLamePun Really really bad.bad]]. You're sure you can do better than that."
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* ComplexityAddiction: On review, his heists seem a bit convoluted.
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* ComplexityAddiction: On review, his heists seem a bit convoluted.more convoluted than they really have to be.
* {{Cyborg}}: As of the [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006571 2nd intermission of chapter 6]] he's starting to resemble the Bunny: he's got one [[ElectronicEyes Electronic Eye]] and an EyepatchOfPower, both arms are robotic, and metal plates cover the top of his face.
* {{Cyborg}}: As of the [[http://mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=006571 2nd intermission of chapter 6]] he's starting to resemble the Bunny: he's got one [[ElectronicEyes Electronic Eye]] and an EyepatchOfPower, both arms are robotic, and metal plates cover the top of his face.
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** DoNotTauntCthulhu: Lord English is coming to finish off Slick himself.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: In-spite of all of his development, Slick is ultimately killed with little fanfare. He's decapitated alongside his Jack English incarnation who was nothing more than a snarling monster to be slain.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: In-spite of all of his development, Slick is ultimately killed with little fanfare. He's decapitated alongside his Jack English incarnation who was nothing more than a snarling monster to be slain.
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillain
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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: PlayedForLaughs; at the end of Act 6, Spades Slick suddenly has a rocket ass and an actual, functioning cybernetic eye. [[LampshadeHanging Hussie is pretty incredulous]] to [[AssPull these sudden developments]], and notes how they actually spit in the face of ''Homestuck'' canon.
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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: PlayedForLaughs; at the end of Act 6, Spades Slick suddenly has a rocket ass and an actual, functioning cybernetic eye. [[LampshadeHanging Hussie The narration is pretty incredulous]] to [[AssPull these sudden developments]], and notes how they actually spit in the face of ''Homestuck'' canon.
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* OffWithHisHead: In [S] Collide, Dave slices off his head along with those of Dirk (who gets better thanks to Jane) and Jack English. Seeing as Hussie was busy fighting Vriska in a Dreambubble and Jack English's own head explodes and vaporizes about 90% of the planet they're on, it seems unlikely that Slick's coming back this time...
** Though given that Die was seen with his doll, there's still a possibility of reviving him.
** Though given that Die was seen with his doll, there's still a possibility of reviving him.
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* OfficialCouple: With Ms. Paint, after Andrew declared their ship canon [[LampshadedTrope in-universe]].
* OffWithHisHead: In [S] Collide, Dave slices off his head along with those of Dirk (who gets better thanks to Jane) and Jack English. Seeing as Hussie was busy fighting Vriska in a Dreambubble and Jack English's own head explodes and vaporizes about 90% of the planet they're on, it seems unlikely that Slick's coming back thistime...
** Though given that Die was seen with his doll, there's still a possibility of reviving him.time.
* OffWithHisHead: In [S] Collide, Dave slices off his head along with those of Dirk (who gets better thanks to Jane) and Jack English. Seeing as Hussie was busy fighting Vriska in a Dreambubble and Jack English's own head explodes and vaporizes about 90% of the planet they're on, it seems unlikely that Slick's coming back this
** Though given that Die was seen with his doll, there's still a possibility of reviving him.
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* PerpetualFrowner
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* PerpetualFrownerPerpetualFrowner: Frowns by default and only smiles upon coming closer to killing Lord English.
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* ShipTease: With Ms. Paint.
** OfficialCouple: After Andrew declared their ship canon [[LampshadedTrope in-universe]].
** OfficialCouple: After Andrew declared their ship canon [[LampshadedTrope in-universe]].
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Licorice Scottie Dogs
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Licorice Scottie DogsDogs.
-->''Everybody out of the god damn way. You got a hat full of bomb, a fist full of penis, and a head full of empty.''
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* [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Attention Deficit... Ooh, pretty clocks!]]
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* [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Attention Deficit... Ooh, pretty clocks!]]AttentionDeficitOohShiny: He spends more time admiring clocks, cleaning his inventory and tracing his own steps to focus on killing the Felt.
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: He has a BULL PENIS CANE
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: He has a BULL PENIS CANECANE.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis
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-->''You suddenly remember you are Diamonds Droog. Whoever took your hat is about to discover he's the unluckiest man on earth. He better hope you find him dead. What you're gonna do to him will be much less painful that way.''
*AwesomenessByAnalysisAwesomenessByAnalysis: He's able to observe his surroundings in order to use the Felt's own time powers against them.
*
* NotSoStoic: He flails around with his Ultraviolence Cuestick when Trace punches his past trail and he also had to resist the urge to scream "Oh yeah" when Cans crashes in through the wall.
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* TheStoic: Even when he's angry, he doesn't show it.
** NotSoStoic: He flails around with his Ultraviolence Cuestick when Trace punches his past trail and he also had to resist the urge to scream "Oh yeah" when Cans crashes in through the wall. He also smiles a grand total of once, praising Aradia for [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown utterly demolishing Vriska]].
** NotSoStoic: He flails around with his Ultraviolence Cuestick when Trace punches his past trail and he also had to resist the urge to scream "Oh yeah" when Cans crashes in through the wall. He also smiles a grand total of once, praising Aradia for [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown utterly demolishing Vriska]].
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* TheStoic: Even when he's angry, he doesn't show it.
** NotSoStoic: He flails around with his Ultraviolence Cuestick when Trace punches his past trail and he also had to resist the urge to scream "Oh yeah" when Cans crashes in through the wall.it. He also smiles a grand total of once, praising Aradia for [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown utterly demolishing Vriska]].
** NotSoStoic: He flails around with his Ultraviolence Cuestick when Trace punches his past trail and he also had to resist the urge to scream "Oh yeah" when Cans crashes in through the wall.
-->''You stop not being Hearts Boxcars. You have made your way to the Felt's SECRET VAULT. It's bigger than you were expecting. You doubt you will be able to rely on your usual safe-cracking method, which is prying it from the wall with your bare hands. You'll have to think of something else.''
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* PerpetualFrowner
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* PerpetualFrownerPerpetualFrowner: His default emotion seems to be anger.
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* FlatCharacter[=/=]SatelliteCharacter: Only a few Exiles in each group receive much focus. For the wanderers this is WV and PM. For the Midnight Crew, it's Spades Slick. For the starving Dersites, they have their unnamed leader.
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* FlatCharacter[=/=]SatelliteCharacter: FlatCharacter: Only a few Exiles in each group receive much focus. For the wanderers this is WV and PM. For the Midnight Crew, it's Spades Slick. For Slick.
* InsistentTerminology: Averted. Technically, thestarving Dersites, they have correct way to refer to them would be as "The WV" or "The PM", but that sounds a bit silly so nobody does.
* InUniverseNickname: Jade refers to WV and PM as "Mr. Mayor" and "Miss Mail Lady", while Dave and Karkat simply refer to WV as "The Mayor". Fans extend this to the rest of the exiles.
* MeaningfulRename: Their names change to fit theirunnamed leader.current roles, while keeping their initials.
* InsistentTerminology: Averted. Technically, the
* InUniverseNickname: Jade refers to WV and PM as "Mr. Mayor" and "Miss Mail Lady", while Dave and Karkat simply refer to WV as "The Mayor". Fans extend this to the rest of the exiles.
* MeaningfulRename: Their names change to fit their
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* NominalImportance: Of a sort for the desert wanderers. They don't really have names, they only have initials. They're still important though, WV especially within terms of the game. Averted for the Midnight Crew, though it was played straight back when they were agents.
** InsistentTerminology: Averted. Technically, the correct way to refer to them would be as "The WV" or "The PM", but that sounds a bit silly so nobody does.
** InUniverseNickname: Jade refers to WV and PM as "Mr. Mayor" and "Miss Mail Lady", while Dave and Karkat simply refer to WV as "The Mayor". Fans extend this to the rest of the exiles.
** IHaveManyNames[=/=]MeaningfulRename: Their names change to fit their current roles, while keeping their initials.
** InsistentTerminology: Averted. Technically, the correct way to refer to them would be as "The WV" or "The PM", but that sounds a bit silly so nobody does.
** InUniverseNickname: Jade refers to WV and PM as "Mr. Mayor" and "Miss Mail Lady", while Dave and Karkat simply refer to WV as "The Mayor". Fans extend this to the rest of the exiles.
** IHaveManyNames[=/=]MeaningfulRename: Their names change to fit their current roles, while keeping their initials.
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* NominalImportance: Of a sort for the desert wanderers. They don't really have names, they only have initials. They're still important though, WV especially within terms of the game. Averted for the Midnight Crew, though it was played straight back when they were agents.
** InsistentTerminology: Averted. Technically, the correct way to refer to them would be as "The WV" or "The PM", but that sounds a bit silly so nobody does.
** InUniverseNickname: Jade refers to WV and PM as "Mr. Mayor" and "Miss Mail Lady", while Dave and Karkat simply refer to WV as "The Mayor". Fans extend this to the rest of the exiles.
** IHaveManyNames[=/=]MeaningfulRename: Their names change to fit their current roles, while keeping their initials.Exiles
** InsistentTerminology: Averted. Technically, the correct way to refer to them would be as "The WV" or "The PM", but that sounds a bit silly so nobody does.
** InUniverseNickname: Jade refers to WV and PM as "Mr. Mayor" and "Miss Mail Lady", while Dave and Karkat simply refer to WV as "The Mayor". Fans extend this to the rest of the exiles.
** IHaveManyNames[=/=]MeaningfulRename: Their names change to fit their current roles, while keeping their initials.
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* VoiceWithAnInternetConnection
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* VoiceWithAnInternetConnectionVoiceWithAnInternetConnection: They use various computer terminals planted by Skaian to direct Sburb players.
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** HarsherInHindsight: [[InvokedTrope Invoked by Andrew]] in supplemental material; ''The Wanderers'' contains many upbeat songs and art of the Exiles being happy, which came only a few months before three of them were KilledOffForReal.
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* BadassAdorable[=/=]CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: He may be a cute little space case, but remember that he managed to merge the black and white armies and stand up against the Black King all in mere moments.
* BadDreams
* BadDreams
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* BadassAdorable[=/=]CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: BadassAdorable: He may be a cute little space case, but remember that he managed to merge the black and white armies and stand up against the Black King all in mere moments.
*BadDreamsBadDreams: He has a nightmare about killing his own army. This is the only occasion a character someone has a dream outside of Derse, Prospit, or a dreambubble.
*
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* [[EverybodysDeadDave Everybody's Dead, WV]]: [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/index.php?s=6&p=004559 Yeah]]...
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* [[EverybodysDeadDave Everybody's Dead, WV]]: EverybodysDeadDave: [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/index.php?s=6&p=004559 Yeah]]...
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-->[[TearJerker Everyone except]] [[SurvivorsGuilt you.]]
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** MadeOfIron: He survives barely, because of PM's help, and the HealingHands of an AlternateTimeline Feferi.
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* JerkAss: At first, but only because he didn't know how to be polite.
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* JerkAss: At first, but only because he didn't know how to be polite.human customs.
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* [[MayorOfAGhostTown Mayor of Can Town]]
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* [[MayorOfAGhostTown Mayor MayorOfAGhostTown: Deems himself the mayor of Can Town]]Town, a group of cabs he randomly assembled.
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* NumberOneDime: A MAYOR DOES NOT RELINQUISH HIS MAYORAL SASH UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES EVER PERIOD
* PleaseWakeUp: He types JOHN. RISE UP. after [[TearJerker he sees him being stabbed by Jack]].
* PleaseWakeUp: He types JOHN. RISE UP. after [[TearJerker he sees him being stabbed by Jack]].
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* NumberOneDime: A MAYOR DOES NOT RELINQUISH HIS MAYORAL SASH UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES EVER PERIOD
PERIOD.
* PleaseWakeUp: He types JOHN. RISE UP. after[[TearJerker TearJerker he sees him being stabbed by Jack]].Jack.
* PleaseWakeUp: He types JOHN. RISE UP. after
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** KilledOffForReal: His alternate in the Troll session is implied to have been this, due to none of the Trolls reaching Skaia in time to aid him before he was destroyed by the Black King.
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* [[TrademarkFavoriteFood Trademark Favorite Drink]]: Tab -- purely because it's drinkable.
** He repeats the same "drinking" binge with shaving cream later in the story (and earlier in his past), but finds it less delicious. This doesn't actually stop him from drinking it.
** He repeats the same "drinking" binge with shaving cream later in the story (and earlier in his past), but finds it less delicious. This doesn't actually stop him from drinking it.
** Tab -- purely because it's drinkable.
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** BodyHorror: For him at least.
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* AwesomeMomentOfCrowning
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* AwesomeMomentOfCrowningAwesomeMomentOfCrowning: When she puts on the Queen's ring and defiantly stands against Jack.
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* EnsembleDarkHorse
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* [[ImplacableMan Implacable Mail Lady]]: She's been chasing Jack through the Furthest Ring for the last ''two years.'' When the universe itself shatters around them, she glances at it for a few seconds and then goes right back to pursuing him. Jack, who hadn't been the least bit threatened since his final prototyping, eventually starts to get freaked out by her determination.
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* [[ImplacableMan Implacable Mail Lady]]: She's been chasing ImplacableMan: She chased Jack through the Furthest Ring for the last ''two ''three years.'' When the universe itself shatters around them, she glances at it for a few seconds and then goes right back to pursuing him. Jack, who hadn't been the least bit threatened since his final prototyping, eventually starts to get freaked out by her determination.
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** WomanScorned: How Jack feels about it.
* SamusIsAGirl
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* SpannerInTheWorks
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* SpannerInTheWorksSpannerInTheWorks: Towards Jack Noir; she's the one thing that ever threatens to stop him after his Ascension.
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* [[UnstoppableMailman Unstoppable Mail Lady]]: The mail is life. The mail is the very fabric of civilization.
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* [[UnstoppableMailman Unstoppable Mail Lady]]: UnstoppableMailman: The mail is life. The mail is the very fabric of civilization.
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* AmbidextrousSprite: The scope mount goes on the left side of the weapon, not the right. The bolt handle is also absent from its normal position.
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** AmbidextrousSprite: The scope mount goes on the left side of the weapon, not the right. The bolt handle is also absent from its normal position.
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* TheDitz
* HangingJudge: So far he seems to be played up as this, fashioning a courtroom and judge outfit from weapon parts and punishing misdemeanors with [[IncrediblyLamePun judicious]] use of heavy artillery. At any rate, he seems as obsessed with the law as WV and PM are with mayorhood and mail.
* HangingJudge: So far he seems to be played up as this, fashioning a courtroom and judge outfit from weapon parts and punishing misdemeanors with [[IncrediblyLamePun judicious]] use of heavy artillery. At any rate, he seems as obsessed with the law as WV and PM are with mayorhood and mail.
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* TheDitz
TheDitz: Even before being Exiled, AR is still ditzy enough to abandon his job to do some sweet tricks on a rocket skateboard.
* HangingJudge: So far he seems to be played up as this, fashioning a courtroom and judge outfit from weapon parts and punishing misdemeanors with[[IncrediblyLamePun judicious]] judicious use of heavy artillery. At any rate, he seems as obsessed with the law as WV and PM are with mayorhood and mail.
* HangingJudge: So far he seems to be played up as this, fashioning a courtroom and judge outfit from weapon parts and punishing misdemeanors with
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** SenselessSacrifice: His hesitation about blowing up the terminal WV at first appears to be a moot point, as WV has the Uranium ripped out of his stomach by Jack and is left for dead. Subverted when WV just barely survives, justifying AR's earlier hesitation.
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** SenselessSacrifice: His hesitation about blowing up He pulls this again in the terminal End of Act 5, where he refuses to kill WV at first appears to be a moot point, as WV has despite the Uranium ripped out threat of his stomach by Jack and is left for dead. Subverted when WV just barely survives, justifying AR's earlier hesitation.Noir.
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* JudgeJuryAndExecutioner
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* JudgeJuryAndExecutionerJudgeJuryAndExecutioner: With Derse gone, the Renegade takes justice and Derse's laws into his own hands.
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* LargeHam
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* LargeHamLargeHam: He's very dramatic and does his whole justice spiel in all caps.
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* OffWithHisHead
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* OffWithHisHeadOffWithHisHead: His final fate as delivered by Jack Noir.
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** OutGambitted: WQ's plan fell apart at the last second.
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudiceImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Just after the death of her husband.
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* NobleFugitive
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* NobleFugitiveNobleFugitive: WQ is the most composed Exile even after renouncing her monarchy.
* OutGambitted: WQ's plan fell apart at the last second.
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** NotSoStoic: She's justifiably terrified when Jack shows up and murders her husband. And even ''then'' her expression doesn't really change; the only way you can tell she's terrified is through her body posture.
* TeamMom
* TeamMom
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** NotSoStoic: She's justifiably terrified when Jack shows up and murders her husband. And even ''then'' her expression doesn't really change; the only way you can tell she's terrified is through her body posture.
*TeamMom
TeamMom: She advises the other Exiles and comforts PM regarding her responsibilities as the new Queen.
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* ChekhovsGun: When he appears as the Writ Keeper, he is seen reading ''Complacency of the Learned'', a story written by Rose. The story is nominally about wizards, but WordOfGod [[http://mspaintadventures.wikia.com/wiki/Rose%27s_Journals has said]] that it represents Rose's subconscious mind about the creation of the universe--specifically the Troll's game of Sgrub. What knowledge the Writ Keeper will gain from it remains to be seen.
** Unfortunately, we never know what he learns because he's immediately killed. He'll probably be reset with the Scratch, but he'll know nothing of his past life.
** He was reset, but he was killed before he could do anything but still be trapped in a stalemate with the Black King.
** Unfortunately, we never know what he learns because he's immediately killed. He'll probably be reset with the Scratch, but he'll know nothing of his past life.
** He was reset, but he was killed before he could do anything but still be trapped in a stalemate with the Black King.
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* ChekhovsGun: When he appears as the Writ Keeper, he is seen reading ''Complacency of the Learned'', a story written by Rose. The story is nominally about wizards, but WordOfGod [[http://mspaintadventures.wikia.com/wiki/Rose%27s_Journals has said]] that it represents Rose's subconscious mind about the creation of the universe--specifically the Troll's game of Sgrub. What knowledge the Writ Keeper will gain from it remains to be seen.
Sgrub.
** Unfortunately, we never know what he learns because he's immediately killed. He'll probably be reset with the Scratch, but he'll know nothing of his past life.\n** He was reset, but he was killed before he could do anything but still be trapped in a stalemate with the Black King.
** Unfortunately, we never know what he learns because he's immediately killed.
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* OffWithHisHead
* RedHerring: As the Writ Keeper, he seemed to be built up as having an important role in the lives of the exiles... and then Jack kills him within 20 seconds of his actually appearing.
* SixthRanger
* RedHerring: As the Writ Keeper, he seemed to be built up as having an important role in the lives of the exiles... and then Jack kills him within 20 seconds of his actually appearing.
* SixthRanger
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* OffWithHisHead
OffWithHisHead: Only ten seconds after he arrived on Earth!
* RedHerring: As the Writ Keeper, he seemed to be built up as having an important role in the lives of the exiles... and then Jack kills him within 20 seconds of hisactually appearing.
appearance on Earth.
*SixthRangerSixthRanger: Technically an Exile, but he never meets the others before Jack kills him and WQ.
* RedHerring: As the Writ Keeper, he seemed to be built up as having an important role in the lives of the exiles... and then Jack kills him within 20 seconds of his
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Their apparent leader has a unique design and possibly even wields Crowbar's crowbar; a powerful juju that has been lost at several points in the story. None of the original crowd has appeared since their debut and shortly afterwards.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Their apparent leader has a unique design and possibly even wields Crowbar's crowbar; a powerful juju that has been lost at several points in the story.noticeable crowbar. None of the original crowd has appeared since their debut and shortly afterwards.
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* DemotedToExtra: Both groups Exiles were major focuses of the early Acts, with the Midnight Crew in particular receiving a whole Intermission to itself. Come Act 6, the Post-Scratch Kids have no proper Exiles and the closest equivalents are given lines, no names, or personalities.
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[[folder: Pre-Scratch Exiles]]
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[[folder: Pre-Scratch Exiles]]Exiles/The Wanderers]]
* ArtifactTitle: Calling them Exiles is a little inaccurate, as they still live under the Black Queen and don't instruct Sburb players like the other Exiles
**Additionally, they contrast the civic-minded Wanderers with their roles as violent criminals.
* QuirkyMinibossSquad
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*** EmpoweredBadassNormal: Now he's just a straight up {{Cyborg}}.
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*** EmpoweredBadassNormal: Now Come Act 6, he's just a straight up {{Cyborg}}.
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* TheEvilGenius: Downplayed; Droogs isn't Einstein by any means, but he is the most reserved and sensible member of the Crew by far.
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* TheBrute: He has his strength, and not much else.
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* ShoutOut: His name refers to the Nadsat term for "friend" from ''Literature/AClockworkOrange'', and his theme is called [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/carbon-nadsat-cuestick-genius Carbon Nadsat]].
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* ShoutOut: His name refers to the Nadsat term word for "friend" "bro" from ''Literature/AClockworkOrange'', and his theme is called [[http://homestuck.bandcamp.com/track/carbon-nadsat-cuestick-genius Carbon Nadsat]].
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* JugglingLoadedGuns: He uses an impaled grenade as a [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003010 gavel]] at one point.
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* JugglingLoadedGuns: He uses an impaled grenade as a [[http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=003010 gavel]] at one point. Given, its shape implies it's not an explosive grenade, but it's still dangerous.