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* MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: Downplayed. Elysia snuck into Ruin's room in an assassination attempt to test his capabilities of being a prefect. Zebia comes and defends him against her where they soon locked swords. Moments later, Ruin sneaks up behind Elysia and proceeds to grope and fondle her breasts while she was in the middle of pushing Zebia back. Elysia orgasms from the pleasure in the middle of the fight that she quickly beats a hasty retreat, no longer in the mood to fight.
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* MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: Downplayed. Elysia snuck into Ruin's room in an assassination attempt to test his capabilities of being a prefect. Zebia comes and defends him against her where they soon locked swords. Moments later, Ruin sneaks up behind Elysia and proceeds to grope and fondle her breasts while she was in the middle of pushing Zebia back. Elysia orgasms from the pleasure in the middle of the fight battle that she quickly beats a hasty retreat, no longer in the mood to fight.
* HateSink: Much like Bobon, Haynes is nothing but a jealous self-absorbed prick with no redeeming qualities whatsoever. He acts like a self-entitled asshole to everyone around him demanding respect since he's a prince. Surprisingly, everyone was happy after [[spoiler:Haynes and Archiv get killed in the True Harem Ending]].
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* UngratefulBastard: He asks Ruin to save his daughter Elysia's life by sucking out a poison which is lethal to elves but harmless to anyone with demon blood. Ruin agrees. Two minutes later, Istvan reveals to Larcen that he was lying about the poison being harmless to all demons, then tells Larcen to kill Ruin if the poison doesn't.
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* UngratefulBastard: He asks Ruin to save his daughter Elysia's life by sucking out a poison (from her breasts) which is lethal to elves but harmless to anyone with demon blood. Ruin agrees. Two minutes later, Istvan reveals to Larcen that he was lying about the poison being harmless to all demons, then tells Larcen to kill Ruin if the poison doesn't.
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* ActOfTrueLove: In her ending, after SexForSolace with Ruin gets her pregnant, she decides to get an abortion to avoid entangling him too much in her life, something which is said to be extremely dangerous for dark elves. Horrified, Ruin insists on making an honest woman out of her instead.
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* ActOfTrueLove: In her ending, after SexForSolace with Ruin gets her pregnant, she decides to get an abortion to avoid entangling him too much in her life, life and get an abortion, something which is said to be extremely dangerous for dark elves. Horrified, Ruin insists on making an honest woman out of her instead.
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* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Although at the start of the game she presents herself as a fierce and deadly warrior who refuses to let the bandits who've hired her as a mercenary harass her or treat her like a sex object, after she falls in love with Ruin she reveals a sweet and dreamy side of herself that's always fantasizing about lovey-dovey romance, even as she remains a bit of a hard-nosed mercenary with everyone else.
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* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Although at the start of the game she presents herself as a fierce and deadly warrior who refuses to let the bandits who've hired her as a mercenary harass her or treat her like a sex object, after she falls in love with for Ruin she reveals a sweet and dreamy side of herself that's always fantasizing about lovey-dovey romance, even as she remains a bit of a hard-nosed mercenary with everyone else.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: On other routes, he eventually bows to the reality that Ruin and his friends have gotten one over on him. It's averted on Shaharl's route, where his obsession with getting even with the Duchess ultimately costs him his remaining fortune and his life.
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* FatBastard: a fat corrupt bald guy working in league with Drums.
* UnfortunateNames: His name sounds like "broke".
* FatBastard: a fat corrupt bald guy working in league with Drums.
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* UnfortunateNames: His name sounds like "bottomless".
* UnfortunateNames: His name sounds like "bottomless".
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* ActOfTrueLove: In her ending, after SexForSolace with Ruin gets her pregnant, she decides to get an abortion to avoid entangling him too much in her life, something which is said to be extremely dangerous for dark elves. Horrified, Ruin insists on making an honest woman out of her instead.
* GoodGirlsAvoidAbortion: Zigzagged. She does plan to abort her child with Ruin on her story route rather than catch him in TheBabyTrap, but when he finds out (and also that abortions are [[BizarreAlienBiology extremely hazardous and risky for dark elven women]]), he insists that they instead get married.
* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Although at the start of the game she presents herself as a fierce and deadly warrior who refuses to let the bandits who've hired her as a mercenary harass her or treat her like a sex object, after she falls in love with Ruin she reveals a sweet and dreamy side of herself that's always fantasizing about lovey-dovey romance, even as she remains a bit of a hard-nosed mercenary with everyone else.
* {{Tsundere}}: The other kind; she's always sweet and lovey-dovey to Ruin but can be harsh and cold with others, whether or not they're enemies.
* {{Tsundere}}: The other kind; she's always sweet and lovey-dovey to Ruin but can be harsh and cold with others, whether or not they're enemies.
* CutenessProximity: She loves fuzzy things, even the monstrous cyclopes near Ruin's castle. It turns out her brother's much the same way.
* OddFriendship: On her route, she and Zebia become close friends, beginning to mend the rift between elves and dark elves after [[spoiler:both of them marry the same man]].
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* SympatheticAdulterer: Nadine's affair with Ruin is ultimately portrayed positively, given the factors involved: she still loves her husband but [[OutWithABang he'll die if he ever has sex]], she has his permission to take a lover if she needs one and didn't for a very long time, and [[spoiler: she has blood from a race of daemons that typically have very high sexual needs]].
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* SympatheticAdulterer: Nadine's affair with Ruin is ultimately portrayed positively, given the factors involved: she still loves her husband but [[OutWithABang he'll die if he ever has sex]], she has his permission to take a lover if she needs one and didn't for a very long time, and [[spoiler: she [[spoiler:she has blood from a race of daemons that typically have very high sexual needs]].
* FauxAffablyEvil: He's all smiles and kindness to Ruin's face, but in private and behind his back he turns out to be racist against humans and very jealous of his daughter's chastity.
* RetiredMonster: He was once a ruthless and brutal conqueror and politician, and while he's gotten too old to pick up a sword and fight any longer, he's lost none of his cunning or capacity for cold betrayal.
* RetiredMonster: He was once a ruthless and brutal conqueror and politician, and while he's gotten too old to pick up a sword and fight any longer, he's lost none of his cunning or capacity for cold betrayal.
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* RedeemingReplacement: He himself admits that Drums was kind of a jerk who deserved what he got, but still feels honor-bound as his brother to do something about his death. Once he actually meets and befriends Ruin, he proves to be a fundamentally clever and decent person.
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* FatBastard: Devlin BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: After Ruin is a fat chunky man who is also a greedy money-lender. He knowingly places unfair contracts almost killed by their decision to line leave him unguarded, and Ruin improbably turns it around into a huge triumph, the soldiers are trembling at the thought of him exposing what they've done and taking revenge. When he instead lies about their involvement and insists on sharing the fruits of his own pockets success with others' hard-earned money, especially them, they, stunned by his good grace and fully aware they do not deserve it, burst into tears, and from that moment on demon citizens.
are his most loyal and stalwart allies.
* NoNameGiven: Their leader is Ruin's major sidekick for much of the game, but he's never given a name beyond "A."
* UndyingLoyalty: After Ruin chooses to be kind and share his success with them instead of taking revenge for their hazing and nearly-lethal mistreatment, the kobold soldiers of Boobshire are unshakably loyal to him, willing to follow him into death and back.
* NoNameGiven: Their leader is Ruin's major sidekick for much of the game, but he's never given a name beyond "A."
* UndyingLoyalty: After Ruin chooses to be kind and share his success with them instead of taking revenge for their hazing and nearly-lethal mistreatment, the kobold soldiers of Boobshire are unshakably loyal to him, willing to follow him into death and back.
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* DrillSeargantNasty: Becomes the Boobshire captain of the guards. Badums goes especially hard on the ex-Molgrey soldiers transferred there who disrespected Ruin back at the capital and tried to execute him in secret under Archiv's orders.
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* DrillSeargantNasty: DrillSergeantNasty: Becomes the Boobshire captain of the guards. Badums goes especially hard on the ex-Molgrey soldiers transferred there who disrespected Ruin back at the capital and tried to execute him in secret under Archiv's orders.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Badums defected to Ruin's side when he stopped his execution not to mention his intrigue of Ruin not being alarmed when Badums had a perfectly good opportunity to take revenge on him.
* HeelFaceTurn: Badums defected to Ruin's side when he stopped his execution not to mention his intrigue of Ruin not being alarmed when Badums had a perfectly good opportunity to take revenge on him.
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* ActionGirl: Zebia is a talented and feared swordswoman.
* AmbiguouslyBrown: She's a dark elf.
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* HasAType: Since Ruin [[spoiler:is the last of the Breast Fondlers Tribe]], he has a preference to big-breasted ladies.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Was subject to this in the very first side-disc released for the game, which focused on expanding her mutual ending with Zebia, and the UpdatedRerelease gave her her own ending and more screentime.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: The Japanese-only UpdatedRerelease ''2 if'' changes her from the king's wife to his sister.
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* SympatheticAdulterer: Nadine's affair with Ruin is ultimately portrayed positively, given the factors involved: she still loves her husband but [[OutWithABang he'll die if he ever has sex]], she has his permission to take a lover if she needs one and didn't for a very long time, and [[spoiler: she has blood from a race of daemons that typically have very high sexual needs]].
* {{Blackmail}}: Forced to aid a plot against Ruin by threats on her life from the other maids.
* EmasculatedCuckold: Defied. Political enemies attempt to turn Galahad II against Ruin by exposing his affair with the queen and framing him for acts of sexual predation. After the latter is shown to be false, the king admits that he doesn't mind if the queen ''does'' take a man like Ruin as a lover, given [[OutWithABang his own predicament]].
* HappilyMarried: While the game never shies away from portraying Galahad II as a deeply-flawed king, his relationship with Queen Nadine is never shown to be negative or abusive. He cares about her and values her advice, and although [[spoiler: a curse]] has robbed him of both the ability and the desire to be with her physically, he gives her his blessing to take a lover if she wants because he knows, as a passionate woman [[spoiler: with thick daemon blood]], it's hard on her not to. Perhaps the best testament to this is that, despite this, she doesn't until Ruin.
* OutWithABang: Among many other curses he's under, Galahad II will die if he ever has sex with a woman. Fortunately, this seems to have come with a withering interest in sex generally, but he knows it makes life hard on his queen.
* HappilyMarried: While the game never shies away from portraying Galahad II as a deeply-flawed king, his relationship with Queen Nadine is never shown to be negative or abusive. He cares about her and values her advice, and although [[spoiler: a curse]] has robbed him of both the ability and the desire to be with her physically, he gives her his blessing to take a lover if she wants because he knows, as a passionate woman [[spoiler: with thick daemon blood]], it's hard on her not to. Perhaps the best testament to this is that, despite this, she doesn't until Ruin.
* OutWithABang: Among many other curses he's under, Galahad II will die if he ever has sex with a woman. Fortunately, this seems to have come with a withering interest in sex generally, but he knows it makes life hard on his queen.
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* GoodIsNotNice: He's a cold and logical person, but he acts with his kingdom's best interests in mind. [[spoiler: He does mellow out some on the Harem Route.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He doesn't have a high opinion of Ruin's abilities, but his objections are always based in logic and political considerations. [[spoiler: After the prince's attempted coup, he remains around to teach his protégé.]]
* RedHerring: [[spoiler: The prime minister in the original title was a scheming BigBad, as was Fronce's in the sequel. Elfenbein being a genuinely decent and loyal guy is a bit of a twist, especially given he's a bit of a hard-ass at the start of the game and has a low opinion of Ruin.]]
* GoodIsNotNice: He's a cold and logical person, but he acts with his kingdom's best interests in mind. [[spoiler: He does mellow out some on the Harem Route.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He doesn't have a high opinion of Ruin's abilities, but his objections are always based in logic and political considerations. [[spoiler: After the prince's attempted coup, he remains around to teach his protégé.]]
* RedHerring: [[spoiler: The prime minister in the original title was a scheming BigBad, as was Fronce's in the sequel. Elfenbein being a genuinely decent and loyal guy is a bit of a twist, especially given he's a bit of a hard-ass at the start of the game and has a low opinion of Ruin.]]
* BaitTheDog: He doesn't come off as a ''good'' person in other routes, but he seems like a harmless and lazy hedonist. It's only on the True Harem route that he has a realistic chance to become king, and his true colors start to show.
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* HeelFaceTurn: In the True Harem route, [[spoiler:Zeminario helped free Shaharl from a magic circle binding her inorder to save Ruin]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: In the True Harem route, [[spoiler:Zeminario helped free Shaharl from a magic circle binding her inorder in order to save Ruin]].Ruin]].
* ALighterShadeOfGrey: Zeminario has got some ego problems, but he's definitely the better choice between himself and Haynes. [[spoiler: In endings where Ruin settles down with someone else and never gets his name in the hat for the race to the throne, Zeminario wins out and it's never suggested he's a bad king or a tyrant.]]
* ALighterShadeOfGrey: Zeminario has got some ego problems, but he's definitely the better choice between himself and Haynes. [[spoiler: In endings where Ruin settles down with someone else and never gets his name in the hat for the race to the throne, Zeminario wins out and it's never suggested he's a bad king or a tyrant.]]
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* UnfitForGreatness: Zeminario is ultimately book-smart rather than worldly-wise, and he just doesn't have Ruin's creativity or people skills. [[spoiler: On routes where Ruin never becomes a recomendare, Zeminario has the chops to beat out Haynes, and it's suggested he'll be a fine, if unspectacular, king.]]
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* HumbleHero: Unlike Zeminario and especially Haynes, Ruin does not flaunt his successes or let it go to his head.
* RagsToRiches: Started off as a failed graduate and potentially ends being the King of Hillsland.
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Galahad's biggest bad habit that got him into his predicament. After the end of the Recomendare Exam, Ruin scored the highest in despite his low ranking at the Royal Abbey while Zeminario and especially Haynes failed rock bottom, proving without a doubt he is the most worthy and eligible to become the next king. However, [[spoiler:after being informed by Archiv that Ruin is the last remaining survivor of the Breast Fondlers, a demon tribe that Galahad had unjustly killed off due to false facts, Galahad, in a moment of weakness, named Haynes as the "winner" out of irrational fear that Ruin will order his execution for what he did once he ascends the throne. This was AFTER Shaharl assured Galahad that he had nothing to worry about as Ruin isn't a vengeful person and warned him about not letting fear overtake him since it made him make bad decisions in the past. In a pathetic attempt to extend his life, Galahad had damned his kingdom to the tyrannical rule of his corrupt son, which lead to the immediate imprisonment of Ruin and his allies, including Galahad himself]].
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Galahad's biggest bad habit that got him into his predicament. After the end of the Recomendare Exam, Ruin scored the highest in despite his low ranking at the Royal Abbey while Zeminario and especially Haynes failed rock bottom, proving without a doubt he is the most worthy and eligible to become the next king. However, [[spoiler:after being informed by Archiv that Ruin is the last remaining survivor of the Breast Fondlers, a demon tribe that Galahad had unjustly killed off due to false facts, Galahad, in a moment of weakness, named Haynes as the "winner" out of irrational fear that Ruin will order his execution for what he did once he ascends the throne. This was AFTER Shaharl assured Galahad that he had nothing to worry about as Ruin isn't a vengeful person and warned him about not letting fear overtake him since it made him make bad decisions in the past. In a pathetic attempt to extend his life, Galahad had damned his kingdom to the tyrannical rule of his corrupt son, which lead to the immediate imprisonment of Ruin and his allies, including Galahad himself]].himself where it is likely he'll be executed by his own son anyway]].
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Galahad's biggest bad habit that got him into his predicament. After the end of the Recomendare Exam, Ruin scored the highest in despite his low ranking at the Royal Abbey while Zeminario and especially Haynes failed rock bottom, proving without a doubt he is the most worthy and eligible to become the next king. However, [[spoiler:after being informed by Archiv that Ruin is the last remaining survivor of the Breast Fondlers, a demon tribe that Galahad had unjustly killed off due to false facts, Galahad, in a moment of weakness, named Haynes as the "winner" out of irrational fear that Ruin will order his execution for what he did once he ascends the throne. This was AFTER Shaharl assured Galahad that he had nothing to worry about as Ruin isn't a vengeful person and warned him about not letting fear overtake him since it made him make bad decisions in the past. In a pathetic attempt to extend his life, Galahad had damned his kingdom to the tyrannical rule of his corrupt son, which lead to the immediate imprisonment of Ruin and his allies, including Galahad himself]].
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* SmartPeopleWearGlasses: Zeminario wears glasses as is the top of his class while in the Abbey.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Rusalka is dark-skinned, which is odd considering his daughter is fair-skinned.
* EyepatchOfPower: Wears an eyepatch, but it doesn't hamper his fighting skills.
* MakingASplash: Being a merfolk, Rusalka has water powers. He can basically teleport to smaller sources of water.
* AmbiguouslyBrown: Rusalka is dark-skinned, which is odd considering his daughter is fair-skinned.
* EyepatchOfPower: Wears an eyepatch, but it doesn't hamper his fighting skills.
* MakingASplash: Being a merfolk, Rusalka has water powers. He can basically teleport to smaller sources of water.
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* ButtMonkey: They fail humorously in their attempts to kill Ruin.
* ButtMonkey: They fail humorously in their attempts to kill Ruin.
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* MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: Downplayed. Elysia snuck into Ruin's room in an assassination attempt to test his capabilities of being a prefect. Zebia comes and defends him against her where they soon locked swords. Moments later, Ruin sneaks up behind Elysia and proceeds to grope and fondle her breasts while she was in the middle of pushing Zebia back. Elysia orgasms from the pleasure in the middle of the fight that she quickly beats a hasty retreat, no longer in the mood to fight.
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* IrrationalHatred: Archiv has an unjust hate for Ruin as he sees him as a disgrace just because he scored last in the Royal Abbey. He also outright refuses to acknowledge any of Ruin's accomplishments, seeing them as nothing but "flukes", and sticks to his stand that Ruin should just stay out of the way for a "real ruler" like Haynes.
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* IrrationalHatred: Archiv has an unjust hate for Ruin as he sees him as a disgrace just because he scored last in the Royal Abbey.Abbey that he teaches at. He also outright refuses to acknowledge any of Ruin's accomplishments, seeing them as nothing but "flukes", and sticks to his stand that Ruin should just stay out of the way for a "real ruler" like Haynes.
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* BigSisterWorship: Lefay greatly admires his sister, Elysia, and would always ask about her exploits.
* BigSisterWorship: Lefay greatly admires his sister, Elysia, and would always ask about her exploits.
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* FatBastard: Devlin is a fat chunky man who is also a greedy money-lender. He knowingly places unfair contracts to line his own pockets with others' hard-earned money, especially on demon citizens.
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* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: Seems to be Galahad's biggest FatalFlaw. First, he [[spoiler:lead the genocide of an innocent tribe of demons over a crime they didn't commit (with Ruin being the sole survivor)]]. Next, he [[spoiler:ordered the execution of an innocent dwarf of a crime he didn't commit, which Shaharl called him out on but insists that he's right. The dwarf then cursed the king before death that caused all his possible heirs to die mysteriously, that he would die should he have any relations with any woman, he would die within a set time if an heir wasn't named, and would die if fear overtakes his heart. True to the dwarf's word, the curse held firm on Galahad for his foolishness]].
* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: Seems to be Galahad's biggest FatalFlaw. First, he [[spoiler:lead the genocide of an innocent tribe of demons over a crime they didn't commit (with Ruin being the sole survivor)]]. Next, he [[spoiler:ordered the execution of an innocent dwarf of a crime he didn't commit, which Shaharl called him out on but insists that he's right. The dwarf then cursed the king before death that caused all his possible heirs to die mysteriously, that he would die should he have any relations with any woman, he would die within a set time if an heir wasn't named, and would die if fear overtakes his heart. True to the dwarf's word, the curse held firm on Galahad for his foolishness]].
* FantasticRacism: Has a strong disdain for demons, which is why Archiv plans to expand the power of the Church of Holy Rood to route them. This is also why he doesn't get along with Shaharl, a succubus, and sees her as an obstacle for his goals.
* IrrationalHatred: Archiv has an unjust hate for Ruin as he sees him as a disgrace just because he scored last in the Royal Abbey. He also outright refuses to acknowledge any of Ruin's accomplishments, seeing them as nothing but "flukes", and sticks to his stand that Ruin should just stay out of the way for a "real ruler" like Haynes.
* IrrationalHatred: Archiv has an unjust hate for Ruin as he sees him as a disgrace just because he scored last in the Royal Abbey. He also outright refuses to acknowledge any of Ruin's accomplishments, seeing them as nothing but "flukes", and sticks to his stand that Ruin should just stay out of the way for a "real ruler" like Haynes.
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** And again, Shaharl gets livid with Galahad II for deciding to name Haynes as his official heir despite her warnings about what he had learned about Ruin [[spoiler: that he's the last surviving member of a special race of demons he unjustly caused the genocide of. Despite Shaharl's assurances that Ruin isn't a vengeful person and reminding him not to let fear overtake him as part of the clauses of his curse, Galahad' stupidly short-sighted mindset over-rode his better judgment, as it did before]].
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** And again, Shaharl gets livid with Galahad II for deciding to name Haynes as his official heir despite her warnings about what he had learned about Ruin [[spoiler: that he's the last surviving member of a special race of demons he unjustly caused the genocide of. Despite Shaharl's assurances that Ruin isn't a vengeful person and reminding him not to let fear overtake him as part of the clauses of his curse, Galahad' Galahad's stupidly short-sighted mindset over-rode his better judgment, as it did before]].
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* WaterIsFeminine: Well, she IS a mermaid after all.
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* WaterIsFeminine: WaterIsWomanly: Well, she IS a mermaid after all.
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[[caption-width-right:213:He'll ruin you if you mess with him]]
[[caption-width-right:213:He'll ruin you if you mess with him]]
