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* PromotedToLoveInterest: Though the Artemis/Orion romance is probably the best known version of the story, it's only a modern take on the story: In most versions of the original story, he's a stalker, a peeping tom, harassing Artemis's huntresses or something along those lines, so Artemis is hostile towards him and Apollo kills him. However, in this story, they have a wacky but loving relationship with the only traces of the original stories being that he also likes to flirt.
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* BullyingADragon: When she was younger, despite being the leader's protege and an excellent brawler, other kids of the Saika Ikki would still attempt to bully her over her foreign roots... at which point she'd just punch them in the face until they stopped.
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* LegacyCharacter: Even in real life, there were multiple people who took up the identity of Saika Magoichi. She's far from the original: in fact she's the ''last'' Magoichi, who was adopted and mentored by the previous leader, and is now keeping the Saika Ikki "alive" by herself after it fell apart. Usually she just goes by her regular name of Hotaru. It even appears as the "Saika Succession" skill, that summons the next wielder of the name when the current one is killed, which is how Hotaru appeared in the Kai singularity in the first place; but being the last, the skill is unavailable to her.
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* LegacyCharacter: Even in real life, there were multiple people who took up the identity of Saika Magoichi. She's far from the original: in fact she's the ''last'' Magoichi, who was adopted and mentored by the previous leader, and is now keeping the Saika Ikki "alive" by herself after it fell apart. Usually she just goes by her regular name of Hotaru. It even appears as the "Saika Succession" skill, that summons the next wielder holder of the name when the current one is killed, which is how Hotaru appeared in the Kai singularity in the first place; but being the last, the skill is unavailable to her.
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* MultiRangedMaster: Happily wields every kind of gun she can get her hands on, from handguns to grenade launchers. Though it's downplayed a bit in that while she can handle them, she's by her own admission a mediocre sniper and prefers midrange and GunKata.
-->"If you cannot hit your target, just get closer and shoot them again. That's what we call fighting smart."
-->"If you cannot hit your target, just get closer and shoot them again. That's what we call fighting smart."
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* FlowerMotif: She's heavily associated with red spider lilies, or higanbana, beause they're said to "pave the path to Hell."
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* FlowerMotif: She's heavily associated with red spider lilies, or higanbana, beause because they're said to "pave the path to Hell."
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When Queen Morgan had declared that her court would be vacationing to the southern islands and a resort at that. Even though there weren't enemies, at first, Barghest stiff as she was decided not to go to a swimsuit like her fellow Tam Lin or other Summer Servants but instead form the UDK, Union Defence Knights.\\\
Born from her desire to protect the animals and as repentance for her actions, as such she moves away from urban areas and settles in the beauty of nature and helps extinguish fires that threaten local animals. Though she really wants to enjoy her time with the others, her nature as a knight overpowered her desire to have fun.\\\
Born from her desire to protect the animals and as repentance for her actions, as such she moves away from urban areas and settles in the beauty of nature and helps extinguish fires that threaten local animals. Though she really wants to enjoy her time with the others, her nature as a knight overpowered her desire to have fun.\\\
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A legendary Swiss hero that fought for the downtrodden along with his son. He was made famous with a certain event where he managed to shoot an apple planted onto his son's head with a crossbow.\\\
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A legendary Swiss hero that fought for the downtrodden along with his son. son and considered the father of the Swiss Confederacy. He was made famous with a certain event where when he managed was forced to shoot an apple planted onto on top oh his son's head with son by the evil Vogt Albrecht Gessler. He had two bolts when he did this deed, one for shooting the apple and the second for shooting Vogt Gessler should he fail and hit something else, he was arrested after that although he did manage to escape.\\\
However, in order to escape the Vogt's wrath and protect his sons, Tell ambushed him while he was on horseback and shot through his heart. With he tyrant's death Tell became acrossbow.\\\
hero who's story inspired the Swiss to fight for their independence.\\\
However, in order to escape the Vogt's wrath and protect his sons, Tell ambushed him while he was on horseback and shot through his heart. With he tyrant's death Tell became a
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Tristan was born of King Rivalen of Leonois and Blancheflor. Since his birth tragedy seems to have been his lot -- King Rivalen was killed in battle before he was born, and Blancheflor died post-partum, leaving him under the care of King Rivalen's servant Loire. Upon reaching adulthood Tristan entered the service and gained the trust of his maternal uncle, King Mark of Cornwall -- a trust shattered by his love for his liege's betrothed, Iseult. After exiling himself in shame, Tristan, now under Altria's service, married another woman also named Iseult, even as he pines for the first Iseult.\\\
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