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* MemeticMolester: Also in-universe. Due to a series of misunderstandings, Ami is rumored to be an extreme deviant. The ultimate of these rumors is that of Ami doing something no even remotely sane person would ever try, let alone survive - raping a horned reaper. Of course, unlike just about everyone else, the [[TooKinkyToTorture dark mistresses]] consequently see her as a Sex Goddess instead.
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[[folder:Ami Mizuno AKA Sailor Mercury [[spoiler: Empress of the Avatar Islands]]]]
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* IceMagicIsWater: As in her original show, Sailor Mercury, a Sailor Senshi with water-based attacks, has her ice-based attack, "Shabon Spray Freezing".
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* MemeticBadass: In-universe InUniverse example. Ami's reputation has made her this, and it's only increasing with time.
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* IWasQuiteALooker: From "Audience with the King":
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--> While he knew that he was no longer the muscle-bound hero of his youth, he figured that he still cut an imposing figure with his golden crown, the curled white hair, and the deep blue mantle lined with ermine fur. To his secret chagrin, the gaze of the younger girls especially seemed to linger longer on the two other men sitting near the window.
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--> To summarise, he had pretty much left the enemy dungeon a smoking, hollowed out shell of its former self, even if he couldn’t strike at the dungeon heart directly. But would Beryl have taken that into account? No, she would have focused on the one failure where the wraith-like form of the enemy Keeper had been near the opening portal by sheer bad luck, giving her the opportunity to retaliate. And then, the red-haired brat would probably have demanded that he find a way to maintain a portal for more than a few seconds, despite knowing what a strain that caused.
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* StarPower: From "Writing Home", part of his typical battle tactics:
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* GodOfGood: Well, Gods. They're a collective group, not a single god, and are the good gods, according to everyone in the VideoGame/DungeonKeeper world, with no evidence that they're wrong.
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--> Given complicated equipment and sufficient time, the probability that a goblin will set itself on fire approaches one!
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* TheKlutz: A light example. Synder is a decent healer and is knowledgeable about the Light Gods, but his work with wards or charms is far more questionable. Initially, anything he makes that claims will work will often severely malfunction or otherwise be useless.
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* TheKlutz: A light example. Synder Snyder is a decent healer and is knowledgeable about the Light Gods, but his work with wards or charms is far more questionable. Initially, anything he makes that claims will work will often severely malfunction or otherwise be useless.
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* TheDreaded: There's probably nothing the creatures of the Underworld fear more than what she used to be, [[spoiler: the Avatar]].
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* TheJuggernaut: Becomes this once he manages to [[spoiler:regain his true form (plus his [[ChekhovsGun mantle]], with which he broke the polymorph curse that had turned him into a troll) and the Light can aid him directly again. Goes on a [[TheSlowWalk slow walk]] towards Mercury's dungeon heart, knowing that nothing in this world and within Mercury's possession can possibly stop him. Mercury, [[AlienAmongUs not being from this world]], manages to stop him (after throwing every spell she knew at him, to no effect) with something incredibly simple - a huge electromagnet that sticks him to the wall (due to his armor). Both he and the Light are ( [[Awesome/DungeonKeeperAmi only at first, as it turns out...]]) fooled into thinking this is a very powerful spell, rather than simple physics, and thus he's forced to surrender.]]
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* TheJuggernaut: Becomes this once he manages to [[spoiler:regain his true form (plus his [[ChekhovsGun mantle]], with which he broke the polymorph curse that had turned him into a troll) and the Light can aid him directly again. Goes on a [[TheSlowWalk slow walk]] towards Mercury's dungeon heart, knowing that nothing in this world and within Mercury's possession can possibly stop him. Mercury, [[AlienAmongUs not being from this world]], manages to stop him (after throwing every spell she knew at him, to no effect) with something incredibly simple - a huge electromagnet that sticks him to the wall (due to his armor). Both he and the Light are ( [[Awesome/DungeonKeeperAmi only (only at first, as it turns out...]]) ) fooled into thinking this is a very powerful spell, rather than simple physics, and thus he's forced to surrender.]]
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--> Pushing with one arm, she flipped herself on her side and pointed her free hand at the monstrosity looming over her, twice as tall as she was. Her open palm glowed blue as she ''lifted'', and the beast’s four hind legs lost contact with the ground.
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--> “The Queen!” Kuzza said in an awed whisper. “We are saved!”
* KillItWithFire: From "Unexpected Visitors", presumably the following description of the battlefield is due to her:
--> Finger-long insect remains dotted the landscape like glowing coals, burning with a ghostly white flame.
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* TheVoiceless: Part of what makes him so much creepier and more imposing than the first reaper is the fact that he virtually never speaks, despite being intelligent enough to use magic. There is only [[http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/241869.html one scene]] in which he speaks (three if you count saying a single word in later scenes), and it notes that his voice sounds "rusty from disuse".[[/folder]]
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Compared to the other Keepers in the story, Mukrezar acts very oddly and pursues odd ideas in spite of his Butler's advice. He has an obsession with cursed rings, his first response to the Underworld cities defying him is to bake a giant cake...
** Pulls this off later on [[spoiler: Crowned Death's elite forces, blowing them all to smithereens in the middle of his speech as an announcement of his resignation]].
* EtTuBrute: Bears this attitude to his former subordinates and the Underworld cities as a whole, since after conquering the Avatar Islands, Mukrezar and his army were poised to finally conquer the world... and then every single portal on the Avatar Islands were shut down simultaneously from the other side, since the Underworld cities rightfully feared that the Keeper would take over their holdings too. As this last-minute betrayal resulted in his death, Mukrezar takes some time to get revenge on both groups.
* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Described as an elf with long pink hair, and this does not stop him from being a legendary terror worldwide.
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* EvilMentor: Teaches Mercury the basics of being a Keeper. After forcing her to become one in the first place.
* BrilliantButLazy: An odd homicidal example. He's a Horned Reaper, so he's already a barely-restrained killing machine of the Dark Gods. But while he was waiting for someone to reactivate the dungeon he was trapped in, ''he did nothing'' to stay in shape. He lazed about for decades, basically twiddling his thumbs after he killed the rats and bugs in that dungeon. So beyond killing basic Mooks, he cannot keep up with someone of Baron Leopold's caliber in a straight bash-up.
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* RaceNameBasis: His name is never revealed, as he doesn't care and Ami is too cowed by him to ask him anything beyond Keeper techniques.
* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Pulls this on Ami, once she makes the mistake of bringing him out of her dungeon to fight off an Underworld extortion attempt. He is no longer trapped underground, and immediately attempts to kill Ami while killing any creature in arms reach.
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--> An echo of this power within his own blood responded to the foreign touch, squashing even the possibility of rebellious thoughts. "M-Master?"
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* NakedOnArrival: [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/posts/6355797/ The creature was an elf, Ami realised, or at least it looked like one. Despite the smooth, snow-white skin and the long pink hair, the wild-eyed new arrival was clearly male. She was sure about that, since he had not been summoned with any clothes.]]
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--> The creature was an elf, Ami realised, or at least it looked like one. Despite the smooth, snow-white skin and the long pink hair, the wild-eyed new arrival was clearly male. She was sure about that, since he had not been summoned with any clothes.
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* CovertPervert: Even though she is embarrassed about the PowerPerversionPotential her powers provide, she does think "naughty thoughts" about her crush, as said in "On The Move".
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* EvilCounterpart:
** He compares himself to Mercury in ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-7#post-6355828 For Science]]'':
--> "I am perfectly willing to forego dignity where it serves my needs," Mukrezar said. "Coincidentally, one of my particular needs is not being set on fire by an Avatar-stomping, inventive menace of a scheming Keeper. Or anyone else." He sniffed the air, which smelled of smoke and burnt flesh. "Something at which my tiresome prisoner sadly failed."
** He and Mercury also have their tactics copied by the Light forces, he has his technique of making fake versions of himself copied, while she has her tying up her Reaper to a church bell copied, with Reaper being swapped for Cathy, and a bell for a boulder.
** He compares himself to Mercury in ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-7#post-6355828 For Science]]'':
--> "I am perfectly willing to forego dignity where it serves my needs," Mukrezar said. "Coincidentally, one of my particular needs is not being set on fire by an Avatar-stomping, inventive menace of a scheming Keeper. Or anyone else." He sniffed the air, which smelled of smoke and burnt flesh. "Something at which my tiresome prisoner sadly failed."
** He and Mercury also have their tactics copied by the Light forces, he has his technique of making fake versions of himself copied, while she has her tying up her Reaper to a church bell copied, with Reaper being swapped for Cathy, and a bell for a boulder.
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** He compares himself to Mercury in ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-7#post-6355828 For Science]]'':
--> "I am perfectly willing to forego dignity where it serves my needs," Mukrezar said. "Coincidentally, one of my particular needs is not being set on fire by an Avatar-stomping, inventive menace of a scheming Keeper. Or anyone else." He sniffed the air, which smelled of smoke and burnt flesh. "Something at which my tiresome prisoner sadly failed."
** He and Mercury also have their tactics copied by the Light forces, he has his technique of making fake versions of himself copied, while she has her tying up her Reaper to a church bell copied, with Reaper being swapped for Cathy, and a bell for a boulder.
** He compares himself to Mercury in ''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/dungeon-keeper-ami-sailor-moon-dungeon-keeper-story-only-thread.30066/page-7#post-6355828 For Science]]'':
--> "I am perfectly willing to forego dignity where it serves my needs," Mukrezar said. "Coincidentally, one of my particular needs is not being set on fire by an Avatar-stomping, inventive menace of a scheming Keeper. Or anyone else." He sniffed the air, which smelled of smoke and burnt flesh. "Something at which my tiresome prisoner sadly failed."
** He and Mercury also have their tactics copied by the Light forces, he has his technique of making fake versions of himself copied, while she has her tying up her Reaper to a church bell copied, with Reaper being swapped for Cathy, and a bell for a boulder.
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BrainlessBeauty: {{Subverted|Trope}}. She's beautiful, and Ami's first impression of her is an airhead, but she's smarter than she looks.
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* BrainlessBeauty: {{Subverted|Trope}}. She's beautiful, and Ami's first impression of her is an airhead, but she's smarter than she looks.
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* DumbMuscle: He isn't exactly the brightest of people, which is also [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] by his companions. Couple this with stubbornness and traumas from his youth... and the result isn't a very reasonable man.
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* DumbMuscle: He isn't exactly the brightest of people, which is also [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] {{lampshade|Hanging}}d by his companions. Couple this with stubbornness and traumas from his youth... and the result isn't a very reasonable man.
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** Having her trolls comment on her attractiveness. She will give them a proper beating if she catches that kind of talk. [[spoiler: This is because he was originally male, and was implied to have been raped after being captured and transformed into a female troll.]]
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** Having her his trolls comment on her attractiveness. She He will give them a proper beating if she catches that kind of talk. [[spoiler: This is because he was originally male, and was implied to have been raped after being captured and transformed into a female troll.]]
* {{Curse}}: Cursed into a female body, and hates it.
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* WalkingSpoiler: She's the boss troll on the Avatar Islands. That's all that can be said without letting the imp out of the bag.
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* WalkingSpoiler: She's He's the boss troll on the Avatar Islands. That's all that can be said without letting the imp out of the bag.
* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Cerasse's violet hair is noted from her first appearance, but her violet eyes are first mentioned in ''Bombardment''.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: Cerasse, the thinker of the group, learned to play chess.
* TrueCompanions: They wouldn't leave Camilla to serve as Mercury's Ambassador, by her lonesome.