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* InTheHood: Wears a red hood.
* MakeMeWannaShout: He can immobilize people with screams, which in this series is analogous to bugs stridulating.
* MakeMeWannaShout: He can immobilize people with screams, which in this series is analogous to bugs stridulating.
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* MakeMeWannaShout: He can immobilize people with screams, which in this series is analogous to bugs stridulating.
* SuperScream: He can immobilize people with screams, which in this series is analogous to bugs stridulating.
* BoomHeadshot: The top-left side of her head is torn off by Sarasa's whip.
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* BoomHeadshot: The top-left side of her head is torn off by Sarasa's whip.
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* BringMyBrownPants: The author writes haughty girls pathetically wetting themselves in fear a little too much in his stories... In what's the humiliating case in the series, Iroha is a sultry female ninja who pretty much has urination ''as a weapon'' and ends up outright murdered like a joke with her corpse left half-naked and covered in her slime.
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* BringMyBrownPants: The author writes haughty girls pathetically wetting themselves in fear a little too much in his stories... In what's the most humiliating case in the series, Iroha is a sultry female ninja who pretty much has urination ''as a weapon'' and ends up outright murdered like a joke with her corpse left half-naked and covered in her slime.
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* BringMyBrownPants: The author writes haughty girls pathetically wetting themselves in fear a little too much in his stories... In this case, Iroha is a sultry female ninja who pretty much has urination ''as a weapon'' and ends up murdered like a joke with her corpse left half-naked and covered in her slime.
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* BringMyBrownPants: The author writes haughty girls pathetically wetting themselves in fear a little too much in his stories... In this case, what's the humiliating case in the series, Iroha is a sultry female ninja who pretty much has urination ''as a weapon'' and ends up outright murdered like a joke with her corpse left half-naked and covered in her slime.
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* DropDeadGorgeous: Iroha's corpse is left sprawled on the floor with one breast exposed, ironically leaving her ''less'' naked than minutes before, while Tanba taunts Hanza about how even though she was too beautiful to kill he did it anyway.
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* DropDeadGorgeous: Iroha's corpse is left sprawled on the floor with one breast exposed, ironically leaving her ''less'' naked than minutes before, before and framed from a not so revealing angle, while Tanba taunts Hanza about how even though she was too beautiful to kill he did it anyway.
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* BringMyBrownPants: The author writes haughty girls pathetically wetting themselves in fear a little too much in his stories... In this case, Iroha is a sultry female ninja who pretty much has urination ''as a weapon'' and ends up murdered like a joke with her corpse left half-naked and covered in her slime.
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* FullFrontalAssault: Being the honey trap assassin she is, Iroha attacks both Hanza and Tanba while fully naked.
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* FullFrontalAssault: Being the honey trap HoneyTrap assassin she is, Iroha attacks both Hanza and Tanba while fully naked.
* DropDeadGorgeous: Sarasa isn't outright stripped like other female victims in the story when she's killed, but there still is an ''ero-guro'' closeup of her corpse framing her chest with NavelDeepNeckline and her shocked expression with her tongue rolled out.
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* ADeathInTheLimelight: Anayo and Hiyori share the cover of volume 4 and the story bothers giving Hiyori a DarkAndTroubledPast flashback as she tries to avenge Ayano and stay alive. Both of them combined are also rather reminiscent of Alice Fujii, the heroine from ''Arachnid''... but it all amounts to nothing as Hiyori is horribly slain by Tengyuu right afterwards.
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* ADeathInTheLimelight: Anayo Ayano and Hiyori share the cover of volume 4 and the story bothers giving Hiyori a DarkAndTroubledPast flashback as she tries to avenge Ayano and stay alive. Both of them combined are also rather reminiscent of Alice Fujii, the heroine from ''Arachnid''... but it all amounts to nothing as Hiyori is horribly slain by Tengyuu right afterwards.
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* BabiesAfterEver: After Rin and Hanza survive the story and reconcile, she says she wants to settle down and have lots of kids with him.
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* BabiesAfterEver: BabiesEverAfter: After Rin and Hanza survive the story and reconcile, she says she wants to settle down and have lots of kids with him.
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* BabiesAfterEver: After Rin and Hanza survive the story and reconcile, she says she wants to settle down and have lots of kids with him.
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* MsFanservice: The typical curvy and lascivious villainess who's introduced early on to grab the reader's attention only to end up dying a short time later...
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* MsFanservice: The typical curvy and curvy, lascivious and outright nude villainess who's introduced early on to grab the reader's attention only to end up dying a short time later...
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* SacrificialLamb: Iroha is killed offscreen by Tanba, the BigBad, after appearing since chapter 2 and trying to strike a partnership with Hanza. The protagonist only reacts in anger to her death for a whole second before she is completely forgotten.
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* SacrificialLamb: Iroha is killed offscreen by Tanba, the BigBad, after appearing since chapter 2 and trying to strike a partnership with Hanza. The While this kicks off the ninja clan war for real, the protagonist only reacts in anger to her Iroha's death for a whole second before she is completely forgotten.forgotten.
* TemptingFate: She knocks Tanba out and remarks he was much weaker than expected. Then he gets up and murders her offscreen, without a fight.
* TemptingFate: She knocks Tanba out and remarks he was much weaker than expected. Then he gets up and murders her offscreen, without a fight.
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* TemptingFate: She boasts about her skills upon killing Tsubame only to be effortlessly slaughtered by Hanza a minute later.
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* UndignifiedDeath: The sole survivor of a family that was brutally raped and killed, Hiyori is slain in a gruesome way and her breasts are left exposed.
