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->''"If you hadn't ignored me you would know how important I am to this current universe! I have [[PrecisionFStrike UNFINISHED FUCKING BUSINESS]] that will never be taken care of!"''
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->''"If you hadn't ignored me you would know how important I am to this current universe! I have [[PrecisionFStrike UNFINISHED FUCKING BUSINESS]] BUSINESS that will never be taken care of!"''
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* HornedHumanoid: After drinking the vial, she gains a small set of horns among other features. She only realizes after Odin points them out and is clerkly unhappy with it.
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* HornedHumanoid: After drinking the vial, she gains a small set of horns among other features. She only realizes after Odin points them out and is clerkly is... unhappy with it.about them.
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* EmotionalPowers: Ava's demonic side tends to act up when she is feeling angry or flustered.
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* EmotionalPowers: Ava's demonic side tends to act up when she is feeling angry or flustered. Most notably her skin heats up.
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* HornedHumanoid: After drinking a potion.
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* HornedHumanoid: After drinking the vial, she gains a potion.small set of horns among other features. She only realizes after Odin points them out and is clerkly unhappy with it.
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** Doubly so after drinking Wrathia's vial. She initially shows no remorse or regret for [[spoiler: wiping out Titan HQ, and even says that everyone there deserved to die. Though mostly out of the lingering shock and frustration towards Gil destroying her book.]]
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** Doubly so after drinking Wrathia's vial. She initially shows no remorse or regret for [[spoiler: wiping out Titan HQ, and even says that everyone there deserved to die. Though this is mostly out of the lingering shock and frustration towards Gil destroying her book.]]
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%%* HornedHumanoidHornedHumanoid: Though they're more like broken branches.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: After drinking Wrathia's vial.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: After drinking Wrathia's vial.vial, she [[spoiler: turns TITAN's headquarters into an ash-filled wasteland in under an hour.]]
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* SilentSnarker: [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0850 Just look at that face.]] LOOK AT IT.
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* SilentSnarker: He's practically rolling his eyes when Maggie goes on about Gil. [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0850 Just look at that face.]] LOOK AT IT.IT.
* ScaryTeeth: Has these, though it doesn't really make him all that ''scary'' per say.
* ScaryTeeth: Has these, though it doesn't really make him all that ''scary'' per say.
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Wrava was clearly toying with them. They're lucky to even be alive.]]
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* Cloudcuckoolander: She's in a consistently chipper mood, and offers the group her share of snacks when they find her.
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* Cloudcuckoolander: {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: She's in a consistently chipper mood, and offers the group her share of snacks when they find her.the second she spots them.
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* ExoticEyeDesigns: Her left eye is pink with a white star as her pupil, while her right is blue with white ring.
* MismatchedEyes: From left to right, she has a pair of pink and blue eyes.
* MismatchedEyes: From left to right, she has a pair of pink and blue eyes.
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%%A Intermission One. She is found by Alexa, Tratar, and Aurora scavenging for food around the ruins of [[spoiler: Wrava's rampage]]. Like them is host to a demon of her own.
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* Cloudcuckoolander: She's in a consistently chipper mood, and offers the group her share of snacks when they find her.
* InterspeciesRomance: From the looks of it she's in one with her demon, in a heart-shaped ImagineSpot of her dancing with him.
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* InterspeciesRomance: From the looks of it she's in one with her demon, in a heart-shaped ImagineSpot of her dancing with him.
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** Doubly so after drinking Wrathia's vial. She initially shows no remorse or regret for [[spoiler: wiping out Titan HQ, and even says that everyone there deserved to die.die. Though mostly out of the lingering shock and frustration towards Gil destroying her book.]]
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* AdaptedOut: Arsha draws Aurora with antennae in their personal art, which are not included in their portrayal in the comic.
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* AdaptedOut: Arsha draws Aurora with antennae in their personal art, which are not isn't included in their portrayal in the comic.
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* StepfordSmiler: Appears to be blissful, but [[https://twitter.com/goatanarchy69/status/1161606568254857216 she apparently has depression according to her creator]].
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* StepfordSmiler: Appears to be blissful, but [[https://twitter.com/goatanarchy69/status/1161606568254857216 she they apparently has have depression according to her their creator]].
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Played With. The planet Odin comes from works on a different system of time than the more widely used "TITANtime", so whilst blending in amongst Followers of TITAN he claims to be sixteen but is actually "Three and Three-Fifth Seasons-Old". It takes him a while but Odin eventually figures out this means he's roughly around seventeen going on eighteen.
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* OnlySaneMan: He manages to maintain the most levelheadness among [[PersonOfMassDestruction Ava]], [[ItsAllAboutMe Maggie]], and [[ReligiousStereotype Gil]] mainly because he knows more about the Hosts and Demons than he's letting on and isn't as horrified or shaken by all the revelations the others have to face.
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* RescueRomance: What he was planning...maybe. [[spoiler: Averted later- though he claimed he wanted this early on, it's shown that he was actually interested in Maggie because she's a host and he promised to bring one back home in the hopes of changing his world.]]
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* RescueRomance: What he was planning...maybe. [[spoiler: Averted later- though Averted. Although he initially claimed he wanted this early on, it's shown that he was actually only interested in Maggie because she's a host and he promised to bring one back home in the hopes of changing his world.]]
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* SuperToughness: Possibly. [[spoiler: They survived being burnt to a crisp when all the other followers (and HQ itself) disintegrated upon contact. Keep in mind Six was right in line of fire. Not only do they survive after Ava demolishes Titan HQ, they sustain little injury and still possess enough strength and agility to charge at her with a sword. And eventually they could get out of solidified lava.]]
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* SuperToughness: Possibly. [[spoiler: They survived being burnt to a crisp when all the other followers (and HQ itself) disintegrated upon contact. Keep in mind Six was right in line of fire. Not only do they survive after Ava demolishes Titan HQ, they sustain little injury and still possess enough strength and agility to charge at her with a sword. And eventually they could get out of solidified lava.]]
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* AmbiguousGender: WordOfGod confirms that Strategos identifies as Non-Binary, using They/Them pronouns.[[note]]This may be influenced by the cybernetics. [[ViewerGenderConfusion Unfortunately, fans are commonly known to argue over Six's gender,]] even though it's been emphasized by the author multiple times.[[/note]]
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* NonHumanNonBinary: WordOfGod confirms that Strategos identifies as Non-Binary, using They/Them pronouns.[[note]]This may be influenced by the cybernetics. [[ViewerGenderConfusion Unfortunately, fans are commonly known to argue over Six's gender,]] even though it's been emphasized by the author multiple times.[[/note]]
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* MagmaCumLaude: She vomits up lava. [[RequiredSecondaryPowers Thankfully her digestive tract is now strong enough to handle it.]]
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* MagmaCumLaude: MagmaMan: She vomits up lava. [[RequiredSecondaryPowers Thankfully her digestive tract is now strong enough to handle it.]]
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* BadassGay: Crow is dating one of the family maids, Merita. Odin is a bit disturbed by a twelve year-old going on dates -- a bit incongruous, since she's got him at gunpoint at the time.
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Although this only from Gil's perspective thanks to Nevy's meddling and influence on Gil.
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: Confirmed by WordOfGod, though she hasn't had much chance to explore her romantic side -- [[spoiler: confirmed around p 1918 to have a crush on Maggie. She's also getting some [[ShipTease moments with Odin]].]]
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* BiTheWay: Was once in a relationship with [[spoiler:Nevy Nervine]]. It's uncertain exactly what happened between them.
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* TheMissusAndTheEx: Once Pedri realizes he is surrounded by his ex Nevy and his wife Wrathia, whom he refers as his "mistresses of the flesh", he realizes he is in this situation, though he actually believes it can't possibly be a coincidence and they are plotting something against him. It's an especially ironic variation because [[spoiler: ''he's'' also this trope for [[BiTheWay the two of them.]]]]
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* TheMissusAndTheEx: Once Pedri realizes he is surrounded by his ex Nevy and his wife Wrathia, whom he refers as his "mistresses of the flesh", he realizes he is in this situation, though he actually believes it can't possibly be a coincidence and they are plotting something against him. It's an especially ironic variation because [[spoiler: ''he's'' also this trope for [[BiTheWay the two of them.]]]]]]
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** YouSexyBeast: Wrathia thinks so. She even refers to him as "Tall, Dark, Handsome [[BreadEggsMilkSquick and Bloodthirsty"]] on [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2563 page 2563.]]
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* MundaneUtility: She either uses the key of her pact door to [[HairDecorations bind up her hair]] or her hair to hide her pact door key.
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* MundaneUtility: She either uses the key of her pact door to [[HairDecorations bind up her hair]] hair.
or her hair to hide her pact door key.
or her hair to hide her pact door key.
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Although this only from Gil's perspective thanks to Nevy's meddling and influence on Gil.
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%%* EveryThingsBetterWithPrincesses
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* MeaningfulName: [[ExaggeratedTrope As par with everybody else.]] For TITAN’s case: In Myth/ClassicalMythology, Titans are gods, only [[LargeAndInCharge bigger]], [[StrongerWithAge older]], and [[GrayAndBlackMorality more questionable motives than usual.]]
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* MeaningfulName: [[ExaggeratedTrope As par with everybody else.]] For TITAN’s case: In Myth/ClassicalMythology, Titans are gods, only [[LargeAndInCharge bigger]], [[StrongerWithAge older]], and [[GrayAndBlackMorality [[BlackAndGrayMorality more questionable motives than usual.]]
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* IronicEcho: Ava's wish is to change her life (and to be surrounded by friends). Then Titan catches a hold of her, and she is literally surrounded by a crowd watching her while TITAN offers to "[[https://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1270 change her life]]." The results aren't ''quite'' the same as what Wrathia offered, though.
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* MeaningfulName: His last name, Marverde, is made of the Spanish words 'mar', meaning "sea", and verde, meaning "green". The ocean on the planet that he's from is green. Also, his life was defined by something happening to him while he was swimming, which he seems to have enjoyed doing regularly, so his first name takes on obvious meaning.
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* MeaningfulName: His last name, Marverde, is made of the Spanish words 'mar', meaning "sea", and verde, meaning "green". The ocean on the planet that he's from is green. Also, his life was defined by something happening to him while he was swimming, which he seems to have enjoyed doing regularly, so his first name takes on obvious meaning. Finally, his demon Nevy's name is an anagram for "envy", referencing the phrase "green with envy".
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* RecliningReigner: Often [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2580 lounges around]] in Ava's mind.
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* RecliningReigner: Often [[https://avasdemon.[[https://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#0253 lounges]] [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2580 lounges around]] in Ava's mind.
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* GoodSmokingEvilSmoking: An Evil [[SmokingIsGlamorous Glamorous]] Smoker who uses cigarette holders and blows SecondFaceSmoke.
* RecliningReigner: Often [[https://avasdemon.com/pages.php#2580 lounges around]] in Ava's mind.
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* SmokingIsCool: Is shown smoking during her reign as queen and in Ava's mind, twice.
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** Also has a bit with Gil; despite being completely opposed to one another, Gil does blush quite a bit when talking to him. There's also Gil's dream, where he's a merman that fell in love with a purple prince...
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* WomanInWhite: She only wears white and has a [[AnIcePerson cryogenic]] sword to match.
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* ChestInsignia: A Greek ''tau'' appears on the chest panel of her uniform after her promotion, matching Strategos Six's ''sigma''.
* WomanInWhite: She only wearswhite.white and has a [[AnIcePerson cryogenic]] sword to match.
* WomanInWhite: She only wears
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* BadBoss: Their only reaction to Taxiarch 5 testing a new weapon on a fellow Follower is to applaud its efficacy, then tell the other engineers to either reassemble or replace her.
* BuriedAlive: [[spoiler:Ava deals them a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown and entombs them in molten rock. They're able to punch their way out after it cools.]]
* BuriedAlive: [[spoiler:Ava deals them a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown and entombs them in molten rock. They're able to punch their way out after it cools.]]
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* DeathGlare: After noticing Ava standing out in the crowd during their speech. Certainly not on par with Odin's but still enough to be [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1221 unnerving.]]
** Another, more frightening, one [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1367 here.]]
* DraggedOffToHell: [[spoiler:Their ultimate fate at Ava's hands -- or entombed in molten rock at the very least.]]
** EscapedFromHell: [[spoiler:And they clawed their way out afterward.]]
** Another, more frightening, one [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1367 here.]]
* DraggedOffToHell: [[spoiler:Their ultimate fate at Ava's hands -- or entombed in molten rock at the very least.]]
** EscapedFromHell: [[spoiler:And they clawed their way out afterward.]]
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** After noticing Avastanding out in the crowd during trying to leave their speech. Certainly not on par with Odin's but still enough to be speech, they [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1221 unnerving.]]
shoot her]] a silent glare, then select her as a "winner" to be [[spoiler:ReforgedIntoAMinion]].
**Another, more frightening, one After Ava destroys the Gates of Paradise, they have an outright furious glare when they [[http://www.avasdemon.com/pages.php#1367 here.]]
* DraggedOffToHell: [[spoiler:Their ultimate fate at Ava's hands -- or entombed in molten rock atsnatch]] its semi-molten door out of the very least.]]
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* DraggedOffToHell: [[spoiler:Their ultimate fate at Ava's hands -- or entombed in molten rock at
** EscapedFromHell: [[spoiler:And they clawed their way out afterward.]]
