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* Gwain rescues Marlow and Geo from the rampaging Basilisk by intercepting its charge and holding open its maw. The beast growls in protest, but the queen [[CurbStompBattle casually blasts it away with a magic shot to the mouth]].
-->'''Gwain:''' "[[BondOneLiner Shut up... I'm speaking here]]."
** Come episode 6, it turns out that shot killed the Basilisk; the creature's remains can be spotted in a forest in one scene.
-->'''Gwain:''' "[[BondOneLiner Shut up... I'm speaking here]]."
** Come episode 6, it turns out that shot killed the Basilisk; the creature's remains can be spotted in a forest in one scene.
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* Gwain rescues Marlow and Geo from the rampaging Basilisk by intercepting its charge and holding open its maw. The beast growls in protest, but the queen [[CurbStompBattle casually blasts it away with a magic shot to the mouth]].
-->'''Gwain:''' "[[BondOneLiner Shut up... I'm speaking here]]."
**mouth]]. Come episode 6, it turns out that shot killed the Basilisk; the creature's remains can be spotted in a forest in one scene.
-->'''Gwain:''' [[BondOneLiner Shut up... I'm speaking here]].
-->'''Gwain:''' "[[BondOneLiner Shut up... I'm speaking here]]."
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-->'''Gwain:''' [[BondOneLiner Shut up... I'm speaking here]].
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* Lanney's ascent up the statue of Gwain and her fight with Tahjin. She fights through most of Tahjin's batlings with liberal use of her Earth magic in a sequence reminiscent of side-scrolling beat-em-ups, and then takes out Jea with one hit. In her fight with Tahjin, she tanks as much damage as Geo would, and while she didn't ''win'' the fight, she gives as good as she gets and leaves Tahjin visibly wounded and exhausted. Not to mention the sheer moxie needed to practically ''self destruct.'' Keep in mind, Lanney is ''not'' a fighter, having no training nor experience, and tends to be easily flustered and overwhelmed - and she ''still'' rises to the occasion and kicks some serious ass.
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* Lanney's ascent up the statue of Gwain and her fight with Tahjin. She fights through most of Tahjin's batlings with liberal use of her Earth magic in a sequence reminiscent of side-scrolling beat-em-ups, and then takes out Jea with one hit. In her fight with Tahjin, she tanks as much damage as Geo would, and while she didn't doesn't ''win'' the fight, she gives as good as she gets and leaves Tahjin visibly wounded and exhausted. Not to mention the sheer moxie needed to practically ''self destruct.'' Keep in mind, Lanney is ''not'' a fighter, having no training nor experience, and tends to be easily flustered and overwhelmed - and she ''still'' rises to the occasion and kicks some serious ass.
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* Lanney's ascent up the statue of Gwain and her fight with Tahjin. She fights through most of Tahjin's batlings with liberal use of her Earth magic in a sequence reminiscent of side-scrolling beat-em-ups, and then takes out Jea with one hit. In her fight with Tahjin, she tanks as much damage as Geo would, and while she didn't ''win'' the fight, she's able to give as good as she gets and leaves Tahjin visibly wounded and exhausted. Not to mention the sheer moxie needed to practically ''self destruct.'' Keep in mind, Lanney is ''not'' a fighter, having no training nor experience, and tends to be easily flustered and overwhelmed - and she ''still'' rises to the occasion and kicks some serious ass.
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* Lanney's ascent up the statue of Gwain and her fight with Tahjin. She fights through most of Tahjin's batlings with liberal use of her Earth magic in a sequence reminiscent of side-scrolling beat-em-ups, and then takes out Jea with one hit. In her fight with Tahjin, she tanks as much damage as Geo would, and while she didn't ''win'' the fight, she's able to give she gives as good as she gets and leaves Tahjin visibly wounded and exhausted. Not to mention the sheer moxie needed to practically ''self destruct.'' Keep in mind, Lanney is ''not'' a fighter, having no training nor experience, and tends to be easily flustered and overwhelmed - and she ''still'' rises to the occasion and kicks some serious ass.
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* Lanney's ascent up the statue of Gwain and her fight with Tahjin. She fights through most Tahjin's batlings with liberal use of her Earth magic in a sequence reminiscent of side-scrolling beat-em-ups, and then takes out Jea with one hit. In her fight with Tahjin, she tanks as much damage as Geo would, and while she didn't ''win'' the fight, she's able to give as good as she gets and leaves Tahjin visibly wounded and exhausted. Not to mention the sheer moxie needed to practically ''self destruct.'' Keep in mind, Lanney is ''not'' a fighter, having no training nor experience, and tends to be easily flustered and overwhelmed - and she ''still'' rises to the occasion and kicks some serious ass.
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* Lanney's ascent up the statue of Gwain and her fight with Tahjin. She fights through most of Tahjin's batlings with liberal use of her Earth magic in a sequence reminiscent of side-scrolling beat-em-ups, and then takes out Jea with one hit. In her fight with Tahjin, she tanks as much damage as Geo would, and while she didn't ''win'' the fight, she's able to give as good as she gets and leaves Tahjin visibly wounded and exhausted. Not to mention the sheer moxie needed to practically ''self destruct.'' Keep in mind, Lanney is ''not'' a fighter, having no training nor experience, and tends to be easily flustered and overwhelmed - and she ''still'' rises to the occasion and kicks some serious ass.
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* Lanney's ascent up the statue of Gwain and her fight with Tahjin. She fights through most Tahjin's batling's with liberal use of her Earth magic in a sequence reminiscent of side-scrolling beat-em-ups, and then takes out Jea with one hit. In her fight with Tahjin, she tanks as much damage as Geo would, and while she didn't ''win'' the fight, she's able to give as good as she gets and leaves Tahjin visibly wounded and exhausted. Not to mention the sheer moxie needed to practically ''self destruct.'' Keep in mind, Lanney is ''not'' a fighter, having no training nor experience, and tends to be easily flustered and overwhelmed - and she ''still'' rises to the occasion and kicks some serious ass.
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* Lanney's ascent up the statue of Gwain and her fight with Tahjin. She fights through most Tahjin's batling's batlings with liberal use of her Earth magic in a sequence reminiscent of side-scrolling beat-em-ups, and then takes out Jea with one hit. In her fight with Tahjin, she tanks as much damage as Geo would, and while she didn't ''win'' the fight, she's able to give as good as she gets and leaves Tahjin visibly wounded and exhausted. Not to mention the sheer moxie needed to practically ''self destruct.'' Keep in mind, Lanney is ''not'' a fighter, having no training nor experience, and tends to be easily flustered and overwhelmed - and she ''still'' rises to the occasion and kicks some serious ass.
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* Lanney's ascent up the statue of Gwain and her fight with Tahjin. She fights through most Tahjin's batling's with liberal use of her Earth magic in a sequence reminiscent of side-scrolling beat-em-ups, and then takes out Jea with one hit. In her fight with Tahjin, she tanks as much damage as Geo would, and while she didn't ''win'' the fight, she's able to give as good as she gets and leaves Tahjin visibly wounded and exhausted. Not to mention the sheer moxie needed to practically ''self destruct.'' Keep in mind, Lanney is ''not'' a fighter, having no training nor experience, and tends to be easily flustered and overwhelmed - and she ''still'' rises to the occasion and kicks some serious ass.
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!!Episode 7
* ''Everything'' about the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IqB7mFbt128 Marlow Vs Luna fight]]. From the fact that the ''AWE-INSPIRING'' [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aYXZVtArPkA Fight Chilly With Chili]] is blaring in the background, the [[AnimationBump showcase of just how many notches up the animation has taken]], the amazing fight choreography, the fact that [[InvincibleVillain Luna]] [[NotSoInvincibleAfterAll very nearly bit the dust]], and above all, [[SuperMode the reveal of Energized Marlow]]. All of this in the span of ''three minutes''.
* ''Everything'' about the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IqB7mFbt128 Marlow Vs Luna fight]]. From the fact that the ''AWE-INSPIRING'' [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aYXZVtArPkA Fight Chilly With Chili]] is blaring in the background, the [[AnimationBump showcase of just how many notches up the animation has taken]], the amazing fight choreography, the fact that [[InvincibleVillain Luna]] [[NotSoInvincibleAfterAll very nearly bit the dust]], and above all, [[SuperMode the reveal of Energized Marlow]]. All of this in the span of ''three minutes''.
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* Geo willingly throws himself onto the train tracks, grasping onto the runaway train in an attempt slow it down with his weight.
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* Geo willingly throws himself onto the train tracks, grasping onto the runaway train in an attempt slow it down with his weight.weight.
!!Episode 8
*The entire episode is basically proof that Ami can handle herself on her own without Geo.
!!Episode 8
*The entire episode is basically proof that Ami can handle herself on her own without Geo.
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* Savien slamming Luna off the top of the train in episode 6, completely catching her off guard and sending her tumbling off into the desert. For once, she doesn't leave the episode with a confident exit.
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* Savien slamming shoots Luna off the top of the train in episode 6, train, completely catching her off guard and sending her tumbling off into the desert. For once, she doesn't leave the episode with a confident exit.
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* Now left to stop the runaway train, Geo willingly throws himself onto the tracks, grasping onto the vehicle in an attempt slow it down with his weight.
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* Now left to stop the runaway train, Geo willingly throws himself onto the train tracks, grasping onto the vehicle runaway train in an attempt slow it down with his weight.
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* Savien slamming Luna off the top of the train in episode 6. For once, the audience gets to see Luna in a position of vulnerability; rather than make a confident exit, she's last seen tumbling off into the desert.
* Geo willingly throwing himself on the train tracks since it was the only option he had to both slow it down and try to stop it
* Geo willingly throwing himself on the train tracks since it was the only option he had to both slow it down and try to stop it
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* Savien slamming Luna off the top of the train in episode 6. For once, the audience gets to see Luna in a position of vulnerability; rather than make a confident exit, she's last seen 6, completely catching her off guard and sending her tumbling off into the desert.
desert. For once, she doesn't leave the episode with a confident exit.
* Now left to stop the runaway train, Geo willinglythrowing throws himself on onto the train tracks since it was tracks, grasping onto the only option he had to both vehicle in an attempt slow it down and try to stop itwith his weight.
* Now left to stop the runaway train, Geo willingly
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-->'''Gwain:''' "Shut up... I'm speaking here."
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-->'''Gwain:''' "Shut "[[BondOneLiner Shut up... I'm speaking here.here]]."
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!!Episode 4
* Gwain rescues Marlow and Geo from the rampaging Basilisk by intercepting its charge and holding open its maw. The beast growls in protest, but the queen [[CurbStompBattle casually blasts it away with a magic shot to the mouth]].
-->''Gwain:'' "Shut up... I'm speaking here."
** Come episode 6, it turns out that shot killed the Basilisk; the creature's remains can be spotted in a forest in one scene.
!!Episode 6
* Gwain rescues Marlow and Geo from the rampaging Basilisk by intercepting its charge and holding open its maw. The beast growls in protest, but the queen [[CurbStompBattle casually blasts it away with a magic shot to the mouth]].
-->''Gwain:'' "Shut up... I'm speaking here."
** Come episode 6, it turns out that shot killed the Basilisk; the creature's remains can be spotted in a forest in one scene.
!!Episode 6
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* Savien slamming Luna off the top of the train in episode 6. For once, the audience gets to see Luna in a position of vulnerability; rather than make a confident exit, she's last seen tumbling off into the desert.
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* Savien slamming Luna off the top of the train in episode 6. For once, the audience gets to see Luna in a position of vulnerability; rather than make a confident exit, she's last seen tumbling off into the desert.desert.
*Geo willingly throwing himself on the train tracks since it was the only option he had to both slow it down and try to stop it
*Geo willingly throwing himself on the train tracks since it was the only option he had to both slow it down and try to stop it
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* Savien slamming Luna off the top of the train. For once, the audience gets to see Luna in a position of vulnerability; rather than make a confident exit, she's last seen tumbling off into the desert.
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* Savien slamming Luna off the top of the train.train in episode 6. For once, the audience gets to see Luna in a position of vulnerability; rather than make a confident exit, she's last seen tumbling off into the desert.
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* Savien slamming Luna off the top of the train. For once, the audience gets to see Luna in a position of vulnerability; rather than make a confident exit, she's last seen tumbling off into the desert.
