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** Louie is a [[spoiler:bastard prince]] that has cared for by a trusted mage.
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** Louie is a [[spoiler:bastard prince]] that has was cared for by a trusted mage.
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** Louie is a [[spoiler:bastard prince]] that has cared for by the a trusted mage.
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** Louie is a [[spoiler:bastard prince]] that has cared for by the a trusted mage.
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Naming the team's cleric
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When an all-female adventuring team needs a mage, the only one they can get on short notice is the burly adopted son of the head of the local mage guild. Not only does Louie look more like a fighter than a mage, he acts like it, too, getting into all manner of trouble and trying to solve it with his fists. When the team's cleric learns that her god has assigned to her a special relationship with Louie, she is most upset.
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When an all-female adventuring team needs a mage, the only one they can get on short notice is the burly adopted son of the head of the local mage guild. Not only does Louie look more like a fighter than a mage, he acts like it, too, getting into all manner of trouble and trying to solve it with his fists. When Melissa, the team's cleric learns that her god has assigned to her a special relationship with Louie, she is most upset.
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* HeroicSacrifice: At the end of episode 12, [[FriendOnTheForce Farbe]] finally tells Jeanie why [[spoiler: Hector]] sacrificed himself, back when they were in the king's army. It was because he'd [[spoiler: secretly been in love with her and couldn't bare the thought of her dying, so he chose to do it in her stead]]. While she doesn't share the sentiment, she appreciated the gesture all the same.
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* HeroicSacrifice: At the end of episode 12, [[FriendOnTheForce Farbe]] finally tells Jeanie why [[spoiler: Hector]] sacrificed himself, back when they were in the king's army. It was because he'd [[spoiler: secretly been in love with her and couldn't bare bear the thought of her dying, so he chose to do it in her stead]]. While she doesn't share the sentiment, she appreciated the gesture all the same.
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* RolePlayingGameVerse: A slightly tweaked ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' universe, inherited from RecordOfLodossWar.
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* RolePlayingGameVerse: A slightly tweaked ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' universe, inherited from RecordOfLodossWar.''Roleplay/RecordOfLodossWar''.
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** Genie doesn't even bother with a BreastPlate, apparently being so {{Badass}} that she doesn't need armor, or even much clothing.
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** Genie doesn't even bother with a BreastPlate, apparently being so {{Badass}} badass that she doesn't need armor, or even much clothing.
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** The 5th chapter of the manga introduces Ila. Suffice to say, Genie and co. aren't thrilled when they lay eyes on her and see [[NerdsAreSexy what a bombshell she is]], especially while she was on Louie's arm. There's even a healthy dose of MaleGaze in [[http://www.otakusmash.com/read-manga/Rune_Soldier_Louie/001.005/81/ the lower-right three panels]] to emphasize it. ]][[http://www.otakusmash.com/read-manga/Rune_Soldier_Louie/001.005/82/ Obvious jealousy]], [[http://www.otakusmash.com/read-manga/Rune_Soldier_Louie/001.005/85/ was obvious.]]
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** The 5th chapter of the manga introduces Ila. Suffice to say, Genie and co. aren't thrilled when they lay eyes on her and see [[NerdsAreSexy what a bombshell she is]], especially while she was on Louie's arm. There's even a healthy dose of MaleGaze in [[http://www.otakusmash.com/read-manga/Rune_Soldier_Louie/001.005/81/ the lower-right three panels]] to emphasize it. ]][[http://www.[[http://www.otakusmash.com/read-manga/Rune_Soldier_Louie/001.005/82/ Obvious jealousy]], [[http://www.otakusmash.com/read-manga/Rune_Soldier_Louie/001.005/85/ was obvious.]]
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-->'''[[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/87/ Guess who meets them outside of town?]]'''
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** The 5th chapter of the manga introduces Ila. Suffice to say, Genie and co. aren't thrilled when they lay eyes on her and see [[NerdsAreSexy what a bombshell she is]], especially while she was on Louie's arm. There's even a healthy dose of MaleGaze in [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/81/ the lower-right three panels]] to emphasize it. [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/82/ Obvious jealousy]], [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/85/ was obvious.]]
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** The 5th chapter of the manga introduces Ila. Suffice to say, Genie and co. aren't thrilled when they lay eyes on her and see [[NerdsAreSexy what a bombshell she is]], especially while she was on Louie's arm. There's even a healthy dose of MaleGaze in [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.otakusmash.com/read-manga/Rune_Soldier_Louie/001.005/81/ the lower-right three panels]] to emphasize it. [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.]][[http://www.otakusmash.com/read-manga/Rune_Soldier_Louie/001.005/82/ Obvious jealousy]], [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.otakusmash.com/read-manga/Rune_Soldier_Louie/001.005/85/ was obvious.]]
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Redheaded Hero is being cut per the Appearance tropes cleanup thread.
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* [[RedheadedHero Redheaded Heroine]]: Jeanie, who keeps her hair fashioned in a thick braid.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Genie and her fear of Giant Slugs in episode 11.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Genie and her fear of Giant Slugs in episode 11.10.
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When an all-female adventuring team needs a mage, the only one they can get on short notice is the burly adopted son of the head of the local mage guild. Not only does Louie look more like a fighter than a mage, he acts like it, too, getting into all manner of trouble and trying to solve it with his fists. And when When the team's cleric learns that her god has assigned to her a special relationship with Louie, well, let's just say she's less than happy.
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I corrected the Left Hanging entry. The series only drops hints about who Louie\'s father might be, but there\'s nothing indicating who his mother is/was. Though it\'s highly unlikely to be Head Priestess Jenni, for the reasons mentioned on the WMG page.
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* LeftHanging: Although there are sufficient clues for the observant viewer to deduce [[WMG/RuneSoldierLouie who Louie's parents probably are and why he was fostered]] by the head of the mage guild, no one in the cast has access to them all -- or any interest in the question, for that matter -- so there is no chance to find out for sure.
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* LeftHanging: Although While there are sufficient clues for the observant viewer to deduce [[WMG/RuneSoldierLouie who Louie's parents father probably are is and why he was fostered]] by the head of the mage guild, no one in the cast has access to them all -- or seems aware of it. Nor do they have any interest in the question, for that matter -- so there is no chance wanting to find out out, so we'll never know for sure.certain.
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-->'''Merrill: (smug grin)''' "Let's put it this way, Louie: elf girl used you. But as they say: [[LampshadeHanging "bitches will be bitches."]]
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-->'''Merrill: (smug grin)''' "Let's put it this way, Louie: [[ManipulativeBitch elf girl used you. you.]] But as they say: [[LampshadeHanging "bitches will be bitches."]]
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* TheAnimeOfTheGame: The manga was based in the TabletopRPG ''Sword World'' setting, like ''Roleplay/RecordOfLodossWar''.
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* RolePlayingGameVerse: A slightly tweaked DungeonsAndDragons universe, inherited from RecordOfLodossWar.
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* RolePlayingGameVerse: A slightly tweaked DungeonsAndDragons ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' universe, inherited from RecordOfLodossWar.
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* AbuseIsOkayWhenItIsFemaleOnMale: Very much played straight... until episode 12. See the WouldHitAGirl entry at the bottom.
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Very much played straight... until episode 12. See the WouldHitAGirl entry at the bottom.
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* {{RPG Anime}}:Anime}}: Of the tabletop sort; many of the tropes involved that Lodoss played straight are played for laughs here.
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* WideEyedIdealist: Being a Mylee priestess, Melissa dreamed of one day serving a valiant champion, who'd accomplish great and noble deeds for the people. The manga makes this even more apparent, by having her go [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/40/ dreamy eyed]], whenever she thinks about it. While, [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/44/ in this scene]], she's even surrounded by sparkles.
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**The manga makes this even more apparent, by having her go [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/40/ dreamy eyed]], whenever she thinks about it. While, [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/44/ in this scene]], she's even surrounded by sparkles.
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* WideEyedIdealist: As noted in the HairOfGoldHeartOfGold entry, Melissa dreamed of serving a valiant champion, who'd go on to accomplish great deeds for the people. The manga makes this even more apparent, by having her go [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/44/ dreamy eyed while surrounded by sparkles.]]
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*WideEyedIdealist: As noted in the HairOfGoldHeartOfGold entry, Melissa dreamed of serving a valiant champion, who'd go on to accomplish great deeds for the people. The manga makes this even more apparent, by having her go [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/44/ dreamy eyed while surrounded by sparkles.]]
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-->'''Jeanie: (at Farbe)''' "You men are all the same: you always have to be [[BigDamnHeroes the big hero]] [[LampshadeHanging and save the girl!]] But [[DamselInDistress I'm not a girl]]... [[ActionGirl I'M A WARRIOR!!"]]
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-->'''Jeanie: (at Farbe)''' "You men are all the same: you always have to be [[BigDamnHeroes the big hero]] [[LampshadeHanging and save the girl!]] But [[DamselInDistress I'm not a girl]]... [[ActionGirl '''[[ActionGirl I'M A WARRIOR!!"]]WARRIOR!!]]'''"
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-->'''Jeanie: (at Farbe)''' "You men are all the same: you always have to be [[BigDamnHeroes the big hero]] [[LampshadeHanging and save the girl!]] But [[DamselInDistress I'm not a girl]]... [[ActionGirl I'M A WARRIOR!!"]]
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-->'''Ila:''' "What's this...?"
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-->'''Ila:''' [[IKnewIt "What's this...?"?"]]
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** After the Headmistress, Jenny, jokes that Melissa's duty may require her to let Louie [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/43/ have his way with her]], [[ImagineSpot she imagines him as an ogre tearing her clothes off.]]
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** After the Headmistress, Jenny, jokingly suggests that Melissa's oath may require her to sleep with Louie, Melissa [[ImagineSpot imagines him as an ogre tearing her clothes off.]]
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** After the Headmistress, Jenny, jokingly suggests jokes that Melissa's oath duty may require her to sleep let Louie [[http://www.kivmanga.com/Rune_Soldier_Louie_-_Req_by_Valdimir/001.005/43/ have his way with Louie, Melissa her]], [[ImagineSpot she imagines him as an ogre tearing her clothes off.]]
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* PunnyName: Their kingdom's name is "Ohfun". Get it?
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* ReluctantFanserviceGirl: It ''would be'' the priestess. Poor Melissa:
** While they're out sailing in episode 15, when Louie casts his fishing line, the hook snags the top of Melissa's bikini. Then pulls her across the deck, tearing off her top in the process. She ends up flush against Louie's back and has a screaming fit when looks at her, followed by hitting him with a barrage of punches and demanding her top back.
** And when she volunterrs to cover for Merrill, while she was out sick, she finds one of Merrill's jobs is dancing in a burlesque show. So Melissa ends up having to wear [[{{stripperific}} a skimpy showgirl costume.]]
** While they're out sailing in episode 15, when Louie casts his fishing line, the hook snags the top of Melissa's bikini. Then pulls her across the deck, tearing off her top in the process. She ends up flush against Louie's back and has a screaming fit when looks at her, followed by hitting him with a barrage of punches and demanding her top back.
** And when she volunterrs to cover for Merrill, while she was out sick, she finds one of Merrill's jobs is dancing in a burlesque show. So Melissa ends up having to wear [[{{stripperific}} a skimpy showgirl costume.]]
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**While they're out sailing in episode 15, when Louie casts his fishing line, the hook snags the top of Melissa's
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* ReluctantFanserviceGirl: It ''would be'' the priestess. Poor Melissa:
** While they're out sailing in episode 15, when Louie casts his fishing line, the hook snags the top of Melissa's bikini. Then pulls her across the deck, tearing off her top in the process. She ends up flush against Louie's back and has a screaming fit when looks at her, followed by hitting him with a barrage of punches and demanding her top back.
** And when she volunterrs to cover for Merrill, while she was out sick, she finds one of Merrill's jobs is dancing in a burlesque show. So Melissa ends up having to wear [[{{stripperfic}} a skimpy showgirl costume.]]
-->'''Melissa: (thinking)''' "If this is what he means by the word "costume", I don't want to know what he means by "dance"!"
** While they're out sailing in episode 15, when Louie casts his fishing line, the hook snags the top of Melissa's bikini. Then pulls her across the deck, tearing off her top in the process. She ends up flush against Louie's back and has a screaming fit when looks at her, followed by hitting him with a barrage of punches and demanding her top back.
** And when she volunterrs to cover for Merrill, while she was out sick, she finds one of Merrill's jobs is dancing in a burlesque show. So Melissa ends up having to wear [[{{stripperfic}} a skimpy showgirl costume.]]
-->'''Melissa: (thinking)''' "If this is what he means by the word "costume", I don't want to know what he means by "dance"!"
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* {{Fiction 500}}: Sir William is the heir of one of the wealthiest families in Ophun and in search of the girl who saved his life a month ago, [[spoiler: Odessa]], so he can propose to her.
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* {{Fiction 500}}: Sir William is the heir of one of the wealthiest families in Ophun Ohfun and in search of the girl who saved his life a month ago, [[spoiler: Odessa]], so he can propose to her.
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*ReluctantFanserviceGirl: It ''would be'' the priestess. Poor Melissa:
**While they're out sailing in episode 15, when Louie casts his fishing line, the hook snags the top of Melissa's bikini. Then pulls her across the deck, tearing off her top in the process. She ends up flush against Louie's back and has a screaming fit when looks at her, followed by hitting him with a barrage of punches and demanding her top back.
**And when she volunterrs to cover for Merrill, while she was out sick, she finds one of Merrill's jobs is dancing in a burlesque show. So Melissa ends up having to wear [[{{stripperfic}} a skimpy showgirl costume.]]
-->'''Melissa: (thinking)''' "If this is what he means by the word "costume", I don't want to know what he means by "dance"!"
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**While they're out sailing in episode 15, when Louie casts his fishing line, the hook snags the top of Melissa's bikini. Then pulls her across the deck, tearing off her top in the process. She ends up flush against Louie's back and has a screaming fit when looks at her, followed by hitting him with a barrage of punches and demanding her top back.
**And when she volunterrs to cover for Merrill, while she was out sick, she finds one of Merrill's jobs is dancing in a burlesque show. So Melissa ends up having to wear [[{{stripperfic}} a skimpy showgirl costume.]]
-->'''Melissa: (thinking)''' "If this is what he means by the word "costume", I don't want to know what he means by "dance"!"
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*IneptMage: Louie wouldn't suck so much at magic, [[BookDumb if he ever bothered to study.]] The problem is, he'd much rather go off on adventures and punch things out. Which is why he only knows simple magic and can even get ''those'' spells wrong, since he tends to forget how some of them work.