Reviews: Stupid Devil Dog

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Marty Stu Issues
A lot of Zero no Tsukaima fics suffer from this, but Saito really is yet another terrible, overpowered, arrogant, obnoxious Marty Stu. Don't read this story, it's a waste of your time.
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  • Comments: Saito is pretty much a different character, and at first comes off as a bit Mary Stu-y. Saito is, to put it simply, a Japanese-American High School student who was planning to join the US Marines. One of the big differences in this story is that Saito is actually smart, and that the story goes into his background and who he was before he was summoned. Also, takes a massive split from canon.
  • Status: Has 8 chapters
    • Eh, he may come off as a bit Mary-Stuish but I found his personality to be a lot more endearing than his canon counter-part, at least to me. I think it's a real decent story and I would recommend it considering what I've read so far, but eh, YMMV.
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