Very well written. The reconciliation between Jareth and Sarah did seem a bit fast to me, but the story's main focus is really on how the couple helps each other in times of trial. The author did an excellent job in creating backstories that were believable for both characters, and her OC's are well-developed and interesting. Plus, she adds a little bit of Flower Language to each chapter, which contributes to Jareth and Sarah's old-time courting dynamic and is really cool besides that.
Comment by Much Ado About Nonny
Very well written. The reconciliation between Jareth and Sarah did seem a bit fast to me, but the story's main focus is really on how the couple helps each other in times of trial. The author did an excellent job in creating backstories that were believable for both characters, and her OC's are well-developed and interesting. Plus, she adds a little bit of Flower Language to each chapter, which contributes to Jareth and Sarah's old-time courting dynamic and is really cool besides that.