Comments: Top-notch writing, superb and believable characterization, gripping story, and much humor and Shout-Outs (Naruto is a fan of Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann?) mixed in with serious drama and action. Don't be put off by this troper's piss-poor description; this work is a must-read. Needs its own page, IMHO. Currently (2/22/10) just past the Chuunin Exam/Invasion Arc and updating at about a chapter or two a week.
Comartemis: I would say that the writing is actually rather stunted and painful to read through, which is a shame because the concept behind this fic feels to me like it has a lot of promise (that and there just aren't enough good Nanoha fanfics. Sadly, this isn't one of them).
SEE DISCUSSION PAGE FOR CONTINUED ARGUMENT(S) Discussion Page has been wiped clean. Make your own judgment on the fic. ...It starts slow, admittedly, but it gets better in later chapters. Naruto & company accidentally and unknowingly convincing Pain to (for now) spare the village. Ino ditching Sasuke in favor of becoming a Haku fangirl. Precia and Yugito Nii becoming each other's Worthy Opponent. Sasuke awakening Amaterasu to defend his team from Psycho!Gaara. The Nine-Tails bitch-slapping Shukaku and verbally chewing him out to get him to stop his rampage (with Shukaku fearfully complying with his "aniki"). Itachi & Kisame having hilarious interactions ("I'm a shaaaark!!!" "Are we there yet?", etc.) and Kisame trying to flirt with Precia. And that's just the tip of the iceberg.
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SEE DISCUSSION PAGE FOR CONTINUED ARGUMENT(S)Discussion Page has been wiped clean. Make your own judgment on the fic. ...It starts slow, admittedly, but it gets better in later chapters. Naruto & company accidentally and unknowingly convincing Pain to (for now) spare the village. Ino ditching Sasuke in favor of becoming a Haku fangirl. Precia and Yugito Nii becoming each other's Worthy Opponent. Sasuke awakening Amaterasu to defend his team from Psycho!Gaara. The Nine-Tails bitch-slapping Shukaku and verbally chewing him out to get him to stop his rampage (with Shukaku fearfully complying with his "aniki"). Itachi & Kisame having hilarious interactions ("I'm a shaaaark!!!" "Are we there yet?", etc.) and Kisame trying to flirt with Precia. And that's just the tip of the iceberg.