Splitting off the Activity Club and Mayview Middle School makes sense, given the lengths of those sections.
The Consortium is a little on the short side. Also Hijack isn't a member of that group — none of Zarei's creations are.
"The Angel's Cult" and "Sphinxes" are definitely way too short to stand on their own as subpages. (Also the comic's title is misspelled as "Parnatural" on the latter.) Also calling the page for the Angel's group "The Angel's Cult" is a spoiler that the Angel isn't as benevolent as she seems.
its hard to organize things in their right category without showing spoilers though i think they should be unmarked on this page or at least the older ones are. and isabel and flipflop call it a cult without knowing that angel is evil so i used cult for that. also patchworm and hijack arent in the consortium but they are partners of zarei is the reason i put them in that page
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im thinking that maybe polaris and his disciples and muse and angel guerra should be in the cult page or at least have labels there since they are all associated with it idk if angel guerra being there is too big a spoiler
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Ok i messed up the naming of the sphinxes page anyway so i just put it into an other groups page with the vampires and maybe more but i think the angels group just has too many people associated with it to not be its own
i put the male guerras in a new family section to get around the spoiler of francisco being a ghost and angel being the cult leader gwen burger is there too because family of a main character is more important than consortium member i feel?
well now i made the family members section big enough that i want to put it on the club page under it but then id feel like phantomime would have to be there so maybe it should get its own page but i might just be going overboard so im going to stop editing by myself
there's way too many factions in this story and the page was obscenely long so i broke it into pieces it probably needs more pieces tho
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