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I know thous sounds pretty much the same, but it\'s the \'\'semantics\'\'. Instead of insulting people who have a right to dislike the character, point out the fact that Mako gets more hate than Amon and Tarrlok (which he definitely does), without bringing them into it.
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I know these sound pretty much the same, but it\\\'s the \\\'\\\'semantics\\\'\\\'. Instead of insulting people who have a right to dislike the character, point out the fact that Mako gets more hate than Amon and Tarrlok (which he definitely does), without bringing them into it.
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If the phrase should be left in, it should be reworded, to reflect the situation, not the fans\' perceptions. Don\'t imply it\'s the crazy fans who give more hate to Mako, (who is one of the heroes whose expectations of heroics weren\'t met to many) than to the actual villains. Rather sate that Mako\'s status as scrappy earns him more hatred than one might expect from say, the villains in the series.
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If the phrase should be left in, it should be reworded, to reflect the situation, not the fans\\\' perceptions. Don\\\'t imply it\\\'s the crazy fans who give more hate to Mako, (who is one of the heroes whose expectations of heroics weren\\\'t met to many) than to the actual villains. Rather state that Mako\\\'s status as scrappy earns him more hatred than one might expect from say, the villains in the series.
