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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling veneer over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \'\'not\'\' merely due to \
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling veneer over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \\\'\\\'not\\\'\\\' merely due to \\\"recently revealed information\\\", but apparently to [[TheyJustDidntCare He Just Didn\\\'t Care]] as long as it fit with his [[DarkerAndEdgier GRIMDARK]] \\\"story\\\".
I\\\'m about ready to say the EightDeadlyWords and try to forget the whole thing.
I\\\'m about ready to say the EightDeadlyWords and try to forget the whole thing.
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling coat over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \'\'not\'\' merely due to \
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling veneer over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \\\'\\\'not\\\'\\\' merely due to \\\"recently revealed information\\\", but apparently to [[TheyJustDidntCare He Just Didn\\\'t Care]] as long as it fit with his [[DarkerAndEdgier GRIMDARK]] \\\"story\\\".
I\\\'m getting thisclose to saying the EightDeadlyWords and trying to forget the whole thing. If he subverts the LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt in Chapter 9 by really \\\'\\\'doing\\\'\\\' it, I \\\'\\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\'\\\' say them.
I\\\'m getting thisclose to saying the EightDeadlyWords and trying to forget the whole thing. If he subverts the LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt in Chapter 9 by really \\\'\\\'doing\\\'\\\' it, I \\\'\\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\'\\\' say them.
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling coat over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \'\'not\'\' merely due to \
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling coat over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \\\'\\\'not\\\'\\\' merely due to \\\"recently revealed information\\\", but apparently to [[TheyJustDidntCare He Just Didn\\\'t Care]] as long as it fit with his [[DarkerAndEdgier GRIMDARK]] \\\"story\\\".
I\\\'m getting thisclose to saying the EightDeadlyWords and trying to forget the whole thing. If he subverts the LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt in Chapter 9 by really \\\'\\\'doing\\\'\\\' it, I \\\'\\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\'\\\' say them.
I\\\'m getting thisclose to saying the EightDeadlyWords and trying to forget the whole thing. If he subverts the LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt in Chapter 9 by really \\\'\\\'doing\\\'\\\' it, I \\\'\\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\'\\\' say them.
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling coat over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \'\'not\'\' merely due to \
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling coat over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \\\'\\\'not\\\'\\\' merely due to \\\"recently revealed information\\\", but apparently to [[TheyJustDidntCare He Just Didn\\\'t Care]] as long as it fit with his [[There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \\\'\\\'not\\\'\\\' merely due to \\\"recently revealed information\\\", but apparently to [[TheyJustDidn\\\'tCare He Just Didn\\\'t Care]] as long as it fit with his [[DarkerAndEdgier GRIMDARK]] \\\"story\\\".
I\\\'m getting thisclose to saying the EightDeadlyWords and trying to forget the whole thing. If he subverts the LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt in Chapter 9 by really \\\'\\\'doing\\\'\\\' it, I \\\'\\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\'\\\' say them.
I\\\'m getting thisclose to saying the EightDeadlyWords and trying to forget the whole thing. If he subverts the LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt in Chapter 9 by really \\\'\\\'doing\\\'\\\' it, I \\\'\\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\'\\\' say them.
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling coat over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \'\'not\'\' merely due to \
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling coat over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \\\'\\\'not\\\'\\\' merely due to \\\"recently revealed information\\\", but apparently to [[TheyJustDidntCare He Just Didn\\\'t Care]] as long as it fit with his [[There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \\\'\\\'not\\\'\\\' merely due to \\\"recently revealed information\\\", but apparently to [[TheyJustDidn\\\'tCare He Just Didn\\\'t Care]] as long as it fit with his [[DarkerAndEdgier GRIMDARK]] \\\"story\\\".
I\\\'m getting thisclose to saying the EightDeadlyWords and trying to forget the whole thing. If he subverts the LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt in Chapter 9 by really \\\'\\\'doing\\\'\\\' it, I \\\'\\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\'\\\' say them.
I\\\'m getting thisclose to saying the EightDeadlyWords and trying to forget the whole thing. If he subverts the LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt in Chapter 9 by really \\\'\\\'doing\\\'\\\' it, I \\\'\\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\'\\\' say them.
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling coat over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \'\'not\'\' merely due to \
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling coat over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \\\'\\\'not\\\'\\\' merely due to \\\"recently revealed information\\\", but apparently to [[TheyJustDidntCare He Just Didn\\\'t Care]] as long as it fit with his [[GrimDark]] \\\"story\\\".
I\\\'m getting thisclose to saying the EightDeadlyWords and trying to forget the whole thing. If he subverts the LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt in Chapter 9 by really \\\'\\\'doing\\\'\\\' it, I \\\'\\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\'\\\' say them.
I\\\'m getting thisclose to saying the EightDeadlyWords and trying to forget the whole thing. If he subverts the LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt in Chapter 9 by really \\\'\\\'doing\\\'\\\' it, I \\\'\\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\'\\\' say them.
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Also, the longer the stupid thing goes on, the more blatantly mundane it gets. By this point the author is using magic as a thin and peeling coat over a [[DarkerAndEdgier grim and gritty]] CrapsackWorld that is just barely distinguishable from the seamier parts of our own. There is outright [[CanonDefilement canon violation]] in several places, \\\'\\\'not\\\'\\\' merely due to \\\"recently revealed information\\\", but apparently to [[TheyJustDidn\\\'tCare He Just Didn\\\'t Care]] as long as it fit with his [[GrimDark]] \\\"story\\\".
I\\\'m getting thisclose to saying the EightDeadlyWords and trying to forget the whole thing. If he subverts the LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt in Chapter 9 by really \\\'\\\'doing\\\'\\\' it, I \\\'\\\'\\\'will\\\'\\\'\\\' say them.
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I\'m starting to really \'\'\'hate\'\'\' \'\'A Peccatis.\'\' Upwards of a year of interruption, and the story\'s still a muddled, murky, bloody mess with an ever-mounting kill list and practically no clues indicating who\'s gone AxeCrazy on the Order of the Phoenix and every member of the previous generation who \'\'might\'\' know something that Harry and/or Neville must not be allowed to find out. This is not just DarkerAndEdgier dialed UpToEleven, it\'s not even a decent murder mystery. It\'s a stinking \'\'\'slasher fic\'\'\', and I don\'t mean the Ho Yay kind.
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I\\\'m starting to really \\\'\\\'\\\'hate\\\'\\\'\\\' \\\'\\\'A Peccatis.\\\'\\\' Upwards of a year of interruption, and the story\\\'s still a muddled, murky, bloody mess with an ever-mounting body count and practically no clues indicating who\\\'s gone AxeCrazy on the Order of the Phoenix and every member of the previous generation who \\\'\\\'might\\\'\\\' know something that Harry and/or Neville must not be allowed to find out. This is not just DarkerAndEdgier dialed UpToEleven, it\\\'s not even a decent murder mystery. It\\\'s a stinking \\\'\\\'\\\'slasher fic\\\'\\\'\\\', and I don\\\'t mean the Ho Yay kind.
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I\'m starting to really \'\'\'hate\'\'\' \'\'A Peccatis.\'\' Upwards of a year of interruption, and the story\'s still a muddled, murky, bloody mess with an ever-mounting casualty list and practically no clues indicating who\'s gone AxeCrazy on the Order of the Phoenix and every member of the previous generation who \'\'might\'\' know something that Harry and/or Neville must not be allowed to find out. This is not just DarkerAndEdgier dialed UpToEleven, it\'s not even a decent murder mystery. It\'s a stinking \'\'\'slasher fic\'\'\', and I don\'t mean the Ho Yay kind.
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I\\\'m starting to really \\\'\\\'\\\'hate\\\'\\\'\\\' \\\'\\\'A Peccatis.\\\'\\\' Upwards of a year of interruption, and the story\\\'s still a muddled, murky, bloody mess with an ever-mounting kill list and practically no clues indicating who\\\'s gone AxeCrazy on the Order of the Phoenix and every member of the previous generation who \\\'\\\'might\\\'\\\' know something that Harry and/or Neville must not be allowed to find out. This is not just DarkerAndEdgier dialed UpToEleven, it\\\'s not even a decent murder mystery. It\\\'s a stinking \\\'\\\'\\\'slasher fic\\\'\\\'\\\', and I don\\\'t mean the Ho Yay kind.
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It\'s the [[Romanticplottumor romantic plot tumor]] like in Twilight.
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It\\\'s the thanks to the RomanticPlotTumor like in Twilight.
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It\'s the [[romantic plot tumor]]. Like in [[Twilight]].
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It\\\'s the [[Romanticplottumor romantic plot tumor]] like in Twilight.
