\'\'Also very much wrong about the Handmaid and Condesce, check (mspamainsite)/storyfiles/hs2/04073_2.gif, you can see them fighting as she makes her escape.\'\'
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\\\'\\\'Also it\\\'s \\\"One yard\\\"; Hussie himself is important but nothing he\\\'s done actually in his house has been canonical with implications for the rest of the story as of yet. Likewise, LOSAD is/was probably a one off gag, in the page markup you mention how the player may become a character.\\\'\\\'
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Ah. You\'re right. Thanks for that; I\'ve fixed that entry. Someone else edited it earlier, citing the sweeps/years discrepancy in Scratch\'s narration, and I found the mathematical argument so convincing that I didn\'t think to check the pages in question myself. Apparently Hussie is only human; who knew?
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In the [S]Seer: Descend walkaround flash, one of the books refers to \\\"crossing the Yellow Yard.\\\" Karkat also refers to this while discussing the Scratch with John on Vriska\\\'s husktop, though he refuses to say the word \\\"yard\\\" because he thinks the human word is stupid. (He substitutes the troll phrase \\\"lawn ring\\\", instead, using the other definition of \\\"yard\\\".) The yardstick Hussie is using to separate the two Fourth Walls, incidentally, is yellow.
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\'\'In addition, it\'s best to not mention something or just flat out say it\'s ambiguous rather than make up information (in regards to the troll order).\'\'
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And it\\\'s pretty clear by this point that someone or something is going to cross through the two Fourth Walls, passing through the Hussieverse in the process. This is building up to be a massively significant event, and is about as far from \\\"irrelevant\\\" or \\\"noncanonical\\\" as you can get.
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I suppose their landings could all be lumped into the same sentence, like the Ancestors other than the Condesce, Summoner, Sufferer, and Handmaid. That would make it harder to identify their lusii individually, though, and it would require more extensive editing if Hussie ever elaborates on the order or if events are ever shown that definitely took place between two trolls landing. Hmm.
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I don\\\'t deny that LOSAD was probably a one-off gag, but it \\\'\\\'is\\\'\\\' a place that has been shown in the comic, and it \\\'\\\'is\\\'\\\' the first place the reader has been shown as a character. Also I\\\'m not speculating that the reader will, at some point, later become a character. This has already happened. The reader goes to see Doc Scratch (a character in the comic), who interacts with them directly. Twice, in fact. Remember?
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Those are really minor nitpicks, though, and nothing WikiMagic can\'t fix. Editing.
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Also, just to remind you, a place shown in Homestuck getting a timeline of its own on the Timeline page isn\\\'t a matter of narrative importance or screen time. It\\\'s a matter of whether or not its past or future is connected to the past or future of already extant timelines.
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\'\'the page is going to need a lotttttttt of work before I completely approve of it.\'\'
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To elaborate: an event on Alternia\\\'s timeline cannot be said to be in the \\\"past\\\" or \\\"future\\\" of any event on, say, Earth\\\'s timeline. (Or that of the human session, or the troll session, or the Furthest Ring, etc.) The reverse is also true. Karkat says as much while pestering John in the Veil. Different timelines can intersect, but it\\\'s fairly arbitrary at which points in the past, present, and future they do so. Hence, any location that can be reasonably determined to not be a part of one of the extant timelines must be a timeline unto itself.
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Naturally it will require a lot of work. It\'s a work in progress, and a fairly new one, at that. Thank you for your input, by the way; you\'ve drawn my attention to a number of organizational issues I wasn\'t aware of, and highlighted just how urgent the WallOfText problem really is.
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\\\'\\\'Also very much wrong about the Handmaid and Condesce, check (mspamainsite)/storyfiles/hs2/04073_2.gif, you can see them fighting as she makes her escape.\\\'\\\'
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\'\'Still think the way the sections are set up is confusing though.\'\'
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Ah. You\\\'re right. Thanks for that; I\\\'ve fixed that entry. Someone else edited it earlier, citing the sweeps/years discrepancy in Scratch\\\'s narration, and I found the mathematical argument so convincing that I didn\\\'t think to check the pages in question myself. Apparently Hussie is only human; who knew?
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Could you elaborate on what\'s confusing about it? What would improve the way they\'re organized?
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\\\'\\\'In addition, it\\\'s best to not mention something or just flat out say it\\\'s ambiguous rather than make up information (in regards to the troll order).\\\'\\\'
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Also, I\'m not exactly sure what you mean by \
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I suppose their landings could all be lumped into the same sentence, like the Ancestors other than the Condesce, Summoner, Sufferer, and Handmaid. That would make it harder to identify their lusii individually, though, and it would require more extensive editing if Hussie ever elaborates on the order or if events are ever shown that definitely took place between two trolls landing. Hmm.
Those are really minor nitpicks, though, and nothing WikiMagic can\\\'t fix. Editing.
\\\'\\\'the page is going to need a lotttttttt of work before I completely approve of it.\\\'\\\'
Naturally it will require a lot of work. It\\\'s a work in progress, and a fairly new one, at that. Thank you for your input, by the way; you\\\'ve drawn my attention to a number of organizational issues I wasn\\\'t aware of, and highlighted just how urgent the WallOfText problem really is.
\\\'\\\'Still think the way the sections are set up is confusing though.\\\'\\\'
Could you elaborate on what\\\'s confusing about it? What would improve the way they\\\'re organized?
Also, I\\\'m not exactly sure what you mean by \\\"pet page\\\". I say this not as a polite denial, but to indicate that I honestly don\\\'t know what that means.
Ah. You\'re right about the Condesce. Thanks for that; I\'ve fixed that entry. Someone else edited it earlier, citing the sweeps/years discrepancy in Scratch\'s narration, and I found the mathematical argument so convincing that I didn\'t think to check the pages in question myself. Apparently Hussie is only human; who knew?
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Ah. You\\\'re right. Thanks for that; I\\\'ve fixed that entry. Someone else edited it earlier, citing the sweeps/years discrepancy in Scratch\\\'s narration, and I found the mathematical argument so convincing that I didn\\\'t think to check the pages in question myself. Apparently Hussie is only human; who knew?
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Also, I\\\'m not exactly sure what you mean by \\\"pet page\\\". I say this not as a polite denial, but to indicate that I honestly don\\\'t know what that means.
