22k chars, 3k words not counting formatting, and seeing the results of chatroom discussion there, looks pretty good. Also Gligarman, lol
Fanfic Recs orwellianretcon'd: cutlocked for committee or for Google?Not bad at all. (Gligarman!)
But, I think:
is reversed?
Do you highlight everything looking for secret messages?Um....I don't think that's possible, there would have to be an in-universe error.
Dunsparce didn't stop being a thing or anything.Maybe Gliscor are better adapted for flight?
You got some dirt on you. Here's some more!They're still bigger than Gligar by a fair amount. How could they be that much lighter?
Dunsparce didn't stop being a thing or anything.I don't know, but bigger doesn't automatically equal heavier.
You got some dirt on you. Here's some more!Still doesn't make sense for Gligar to be thirty-something pounds heavier than its larger, probably-similarly-built-because-they're-evolutionarily-related evolution. Not to me anyway.
Dunsparce didn't stop being a thing or anything.Maybe something's up with the bones to make them lighter?
Please consider supporting my artwork on PatreonStill, thirty pounds?
Dunsparce didn't stop being a thing or anything.How tall/long are they? Because 30 lbs with something more than one foot long would be unrealistically light.
edited 21st Apr '11 1:45:04 PM by CalamityJane
Please consider supporting my artwork on PatreonNo, I meant that Gliscor is thirty-something pounds lighter than Gligar.
Dunsparce didn't stop being a thing or anything.@ MM&I: It's actually worse than you think, the figures in weight are in kilograms...
edited 21st Apr '11 2:25:47 PM by TracerBullet
Hard Boiled Detective Since 1985I could see Gliscor's bones becoming hollow upon evolving or some such thing, seeing as how Gliscor look much longer and lankier than Gligar...
I honestly don't think there's any reasonable explanation for that kinda weight discrepancy. I'd chalk it up to pokedex error, an explanation we've used before. Specifically, I'd say that Gligar is the incorrect one and should weigh less than is listed. Seriously, 3 feet and 142 pounds? Does that seem off to anyone else?
edited 21st Apr '11 3:21:52 PM by Blissey1
XP granted for befriending a giant magical spider!Gligar is fatter?
You cannot firmly grasp the true form of Squidward's technique!Well at least it doesn't say something like 18k kg which would be 18 Tons.
Fanfic Recs orwellianretcon'd: cutlocked for committee or for Google?@Tracer: O_O so Gliscor is 50-something pounds lighter than its preevolution? That has to be an error of some sort.
Dunsparce didn't stop being a thing or anything.you know what I think? Whoever was entering Gligars dex data got kgs and lbs mixed up, so Gligar should actually weigh 64.8 lbs, as opposed to 64.8 kg, which seems much more reasonable.
edited 21st Apr '11 3:57:43 PM by Blissey1
XP granted for befriending a giant magical spider!To be fair, nature does have examples of this happening, such as with the Paradoxical Frog.
Eating a Vanilluxe will give you frostbite.Yeah, but Gliscor is visually larger than Gligar. By a lot.
Dunsparce didn't stop being a thing or anything.But how much of that size difference is tail? And Gliscor also has much thinner arms and an abdomen, for what that's worth.
You cannot firmly grasp the true form of Squidward's technique!
Fffffffffffff- that's a lot of text.