Looks good overall, though some details could use proofreading.
I would like it if the bit from my quickwrite about Heart Scales serving as decoys to escape predators made it in, though.
Do you highlight everything looking for secret messages?Put that in. Also put in a scientific name.
You got some dirt on you. Here's some more!I would like to know how the thing actually swims without any fins to steer itself.
Sorry, I can't hear you from my FLYING METAL BOX!I could totally see it wiggling the two ends of its body in such as manner as to provide some propulsion, though it would be terribly inefficient. Then again, as a filter feeder and seaweed eater, who needs to be mobile?
XP granted for befriending a giant magical spider!Luvdisc's speed is above average; in fact, it is as fast as Haxorus.
Also, discus. They have a proper tail, but it is quite transparent. And only superficially resemble sunfishes, which are more of a modified pufferfish.
In fact, Alomomola's design is based more on maternal love than in romantic love, ala Luvdisc. They do not quite share the same roles...
Forward propulsion I can see but it doesn't have any pectoral fins, so I don't know how it steers.
Sorry, I can't hear you from my FLYING METAL BOX!Maternal love vs. Romantic love? Huh. I never knew that Alomomola was related to Maternal Love at all, where did you get that from?
Please consider supporting my artwork on PatreonAlomomola. It's basically Aquatic!Chansey.
Eating a Vanilluxe will give you frostbite.White's Pokedex entry.
That's all the proof I need. Also I changed the article, again.
Pretty much, it's stats even reflect that.
edited 3rd Mar '11 9:36:24 AM by Marioguy128
You got some dirt on you. Here's some more!Ooooooooh! I get it now!
Please consider supporting my artwork on PatreonHow can it embrace it without arms?
You cannot firmly grasp the true form of Squidward's technique!I thought that since ocean sunfish are also called Mola Mola, that it would be more Alomomola
maybe they just decided to sneak in a twofer...
XP granted for befriending a giant magical spider!SUNDAY. COME FASTER.
TVTropes Nuzlocke Thread. - Arceus Help Us All.-repeats what lockon said-
Please consider supporting my artwork on PatreonI'd concur, but I have 3 midterms next week.
Hard Boiled Detective Since 1985Blissey, it is both, with a palindrome thrown in as well. A quite good name, in my opinion.
Okay, if you've been having trouble getting into the chat room before, this web client should work nicely: [1]
Just remember to use "/nick whatever" to change your name to something less random.
Do you highlight everything looking for secret messages?HTTP 400 Bad Request error for me.
edited 3rd Mar '11 5:22:57 PM by Anomalocaris20
You cannot firmly grasp the true form of Squidward's technique!Say was there an article about the PC storage system?
edited 3rd Mar '11 5:24:55 PM by Marioguy128
You got some dirt on you. Here's some more!Did anyone else just try connecting? We got two people show up briefly without saying anything.
I'm inclined to say that there's a Transfer System, like in the anime and Pokemon Special. Actual cyberspace storage has too many game-breaking implications when examined critically.
edited 3rd Mar '11 5:41:32 PM by Tangent128
Do you highlight everything looking for secret messages?So there's no article of the sort?
By the way out of curiosity, how does one handle spoilers if they have to pop up in an article?
You got some dirt on you. Here's some more!Which type of spoiler?
(And can you reach the chat link, Marioguy?)
Do you highlight everything looking for secret messages?I think we assume the reader is familiar with the games and already knows, but the only articles that will get spoilers are the legendaries.
You cannot firmly grasp the true form of Squidward's technique!Well, this is supposed to be informative. If information gets into spoiler territory then it's nobody's fault except for the person that dubs the information a spoiler.
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The part where you mention Hydration links to the Luvdisc article on Bulbapedia.
Eating a Vanilluxe will give you frostbite.