'Where was you hiding?'
'Uderground. I made a cave!'
There are too many toasters in my chimney!So aside from fear or jealousy, how do you think the average kid would react to them? And you know how kids often have passing but intense interests in things? How do you think the pair's would affect the world around them?
Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.The world would ben around their desires to accomodate them.
There are too many toasters in my chimney!What do you think would be a likely reaction from Tariq and Josie's parents to discovering that there is another child like there's?
Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.Good, now... Go play at Josie's house...
There are too many toasters in my chimney!Hey you mentioned the idea of Josephine making herself a friend, didn't you? How might this friend be different from real humans?
Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.It would probably be a bit slow, compared to regular humans; and completely devoted to Josie.
There are too many toasters in my chimney!Like Forrest Gump slow? Oh and you know how Death usaully has like hourglases that measure your life and once the sand runs out you die? What could be an alternate life measuring devices teacher Death could use? I had an idea involving wind up toys, when your life is over it runs down.
Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.Also if Josie and Tariq gave their classmates special abilities for an afternoon how do you think that'd turn out?
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Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.And do you think it'd be cooler to not reveal the source of the pair's powers to the readers until say the middle of the story? Or should it be stated right of the bat?
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Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.1. No, not that slow. Just kinda slow, but not to really stupid levels.
2. A computer program! Or an app on his iPhone.
3. Really badly.
4. Right off the bat.
edited 21st Nov '10 4:09:59 AM by CyganAngel
There are too many toasters in my chimney!What could be a good name for Josie's friend? And what could death use as an alias?
Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.How could their classmates in preschool have found out about the pair's abilities? And what would be the most fitting power the two could give on that afternoon I mentioned to Jackson, The Arthur Dent?
Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.Josie's friend? Lillith.
For death? Grim. I'm not teerribly good with names.
Don't know.
And it depends on what they were doing that particular day.
There are too many toasters in my chimney!Okay, let's say it was their birthday, the pair wanted to be able to play with their classmates on an equal level for once, does that help?
Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.- They are unknowable so maybe, and the kids were supposed to be doing stuff.
- They are unknowable so maybe.
- Beer Goggles?
- Plenty, water into wine would be great for parties.
- There'd also be the bit about the Greek mythologies and world religions that you just proved wrong, unless you say somehow that every religion was right expect some hate mail both fictional and non.
- I'd alternate amongst a few kids so you'd get a muggles experiences too.
- why would there be one? it's not like their difficult to spot.
- no clue, where is the town?
- not even trying to hide, just buy a plot of land and but a sign up, church of Satan. have people be confused what it's all about anyway or "just now noticing" it.
- I'd bet they'd like it, untill they learned jealousy.
- I don't know.
- IDK, Pewter?
- IDK, William?
- what they were hiding it?
- Wings, wings that do something.
- equal level? nay. Elite Minions? hellz yeah.
You could always go with the classic candles. When all the oil is gone, you're dead. Not very original, but a room full of these candles always looks awesome.
What could be a good title for this? And I kinda think Josie's friend should be humanlike, don't know why she just should. And if we're putting Josie in an uncoventional family how about she's raised by a single mother; she wanted to have a child, was unable to find a partner she was comfortable having children with, had IVF, sound good? Also I wouldn't say they were actively hiding their powers from their peers I'm hust trying to figure out a funny way they could learn about the pair's abilities, any ideas? And what would happen if you blew out the candles, and I'm also fond of the Iphone app idea, think both could be used?
edited 21st Nov '10 4:21:47 PM by Zolnier
Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.If they were having a swim what could be some weird stuff they could use their power for while doing that?
Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.- Perhaps it's just me but I like "The Youthful Misadventures Of The Human Embodiments Of Satan And God".
- Tis your work do what comes naturally
- Tis your work do what comes naturally, but why?
- They do stuff, it's blatant. If I were you I'd make it funny.
- Perhaps the person goes into living suspended animation ie they're not alive and not dead. since their time has not gone out.
- Tis your work do what comes naturally, why not?
the water starts glowing? they're suddenly in the ocean? someone starts walking on top? Water Is Air, See Water, Super Not-Drowning Skills or Airy Water?
What could be like a birthmark the pair could have? Please don't say 666, that's what they'd be expecting! And what could be some ways their parents and teachers could try exercising authority over them? Sugestions don't really have to be workable although those a welcome to.
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Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.- Do you want something they both share? or something like a Red Right Hand that each of them have but is different?
- Perhaps god's kid has a tattoo that's on fire (that never burns anything) on her ankle of the Ichthys or a bush. Satan's kid would sport something more badass (well it's trying anyway but I doubt it would come across as such) perhaps a back tattoo of Saint Michael in reverse with the devil stepping on him, it moves ever so slightly when your not looking at it.
- They are authority figures the kids would respect them if they are young enough for that reason only (or grow out of it when older). If it synchronizes with G&S agenda they comply who's to say their parents can't mind control the youngsters just a tiny bit. there has to be something that they can't do or can't do easily (otherwise they would be thier parents) so finding out how to control that would be how to control the kids. some threat to thier parents such as their bosses. Death telling them if they don't behave he'll take away thier
toyslives.
Hey what do you think would happen to Lilith (Josie's friend not the mythological one) when Josie isn't playing with her? Vanish, goes and lives with some family bewitched to belive she's their child? Or do you think she'd live with Josie and her Mum just accepts her, probably after her mind's been tinkered with? And what would the pairs life candles look like?
edited 21st Nov '10 8:54:33 PM by Zolnier
Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.- No clue
- Eh, why not.
- That doesn't sound sympathetic to me but it's your story.
- Over priced, like those holiday candles with wooden wicks and golden wax. Kind of imagine Satan's kid would get one of those novelty Halloween candles, looks like a hand (or head or skull) that "bleeds" wax. If they even have candles.
How do you think hide and seek may play out between the two of them?
Life's Gonna Suck When You Grow Up... But Is It That Great Now?... Also I'm Skylark2 now.