I like it,
I like the OP
"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."Sure. Kind of weak, but it works.
Check out my fanfiction!I can go with it.
(Annoyed grunt)Might as well be a page quote, since the image adds nothing to it.
edited 4th May '18 6:11:30 PM by PeabodySam
... until SUDDENLY DINOSAURS.Visuals are pretty weak, but this is mostly a text/dialogue trope and OP's not texty enough that I'd put it into "page quote" territory. It helps that the one asking is shorter than the others, which makes me think they're younger.
Make text from comic the page quote. Current quote sucks, image does nothing for me.
Health sure is versatile. It's possible to be both light-headed and dim-witted. At the same time, no less.I concur with 9.
If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?1.1. Could also work as the quote, but I'm fine with the current quote.
edited 6th May '18 4:58:46 PM by Lymantria
Join the Five-Man Band cleanup project!The problem with the current quote is that half of it is action scripting and it's generally not very elegant or natural to read.
edited 6th May '18 5:19:50 PM by Karxrida
If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?Clock is set.
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edited 3rd May '18 5:46:56 PM by eroock