Needs Help: I Uh You Too

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You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"

Opened.

I thought it was a decent picture. First 2 panels, I assume.

Don't see how OP depict the trope. If anything, it would have to be panel 1 and 2 swapped. But even then it doesn't come out right. Suggesting this >>>

I think that works.

OP doesn't work at all. Seems like a rejection.

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4's good.

I can go with 4.

(Annoyed grunt)

I think 4 is more Gibberish of Love, and is more readable than the current on that.

^ What's the difference between the two tropes for you?

Gibberish of Love seems to be about general incoherence in front of a love interest, while I "Uh" You, Too seems to be specifically about botched love confessions. The dialogue in 4 doesn't make me think he was going to confess, and is just talking about a good date.

^ I "Uh" You, Too is specifically about a declaration of love, Gibberish of Love is about any verbal communication that comes out mangled because the presence of a loved one. So yeah, 4. is more the latter trope, as it isn't clear the person on the left meant to say "I love you" specifically.

EDIT: ninja'd

edited 5th Apr '18 2:33:42 AM by LB7979

Emotionally Tongue-Tied may fit better for 4 because the topic is not clearly about love.

Bump.

If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?

Clock expired; closing.

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