Needs Help: Adaptation Personality Change

Current pic looks like the entire comic. While it's one of the most infamous Adaptation Personality Changes, I don't think we asked the artist permission to use it.

"Anemone dear, I know you want to be more independent from me, but... please take care, okay?"

Opened...what's the source?

Can't make out the left speech bubble in current. Alternative from here.

edited 3rd Feb '18 12:39:43 AM by eroock

Source for current. is from here

I think I prefer the current - it has less text and extraneous elements, but layouted vertically provided we can get permission for it..

edited 2nd Feb '18 7:52:22 PM by Synchronicity

Can we tweak others' work for readability?

Yes, just like in Incest Subtext, but we still need to ask permission.

"Anemone dear, I know you want to be more independent from me, but... please take care, okay?"

I'll ping the artist, and comment out the pic on the page while we're waiting.

EDIT: Done and done. The artist's gallery contains some NSFW material so we probably won't be able to directly link it.

edited 3rd Feb '18 4:50:57 AM by Willbyr

The artist gave permission, so I've put up the tweaked version and added a link to the original version. Caption beyond the link?

Old pic:

Hearing nothing, let's lock up.