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Deadlock Clock: Oct 3rd 2017 at 11:59:00 PM
Morgenthaler Since: Feb, 2016
#1: Sep 9th 2017 at 6:25:45 AM

I dunno, the current is a bit... elaborate? I don't think we need a whole page with tons of distracting dialogue to illustrate this concept, plus there's a watermark/logo (?) in the lower right corner. Here's something more succinct.

edited 9th Sep '17 6:26:24 AM by Morgenthaler

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#2: Sep 13th 2017 at 6:57:40 AM

The OP's a decent suggestion. Alternately, maybe just the last panel of the current could work, provided there's a version without the Marvel.com logo over it.

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#3: Sep 15th 2017 at 11:08:07 PM

[tup]OP.

edited 15th Sep '17 11:08:23 PM by Piterpicher

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#4: Sep 16th 2017 at 12:02:02 AM

OP for the meantime.

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whizzerd Transcender of Gender from Scotland Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: I'm just high on the world
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#5: Sep 16th 2017 at 12:39:31 AM

OP doesn't really feel like it's intentionally perverting something that should be titillating, though that's my only point against it.

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#6: Sep 16th 2017 at 11:57:20 AM

5.1?

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#7: Sep 17th 2017 at 5:18:41 AM

OP might be a better fit for Butter Face, considering. 5.2 seems closer to Abhorrent Admirer.

Robbyn Since: Aug, 2017
#8: Sep 17th 2017 at 6:20:06 AM

OP or 5.2

edited 17th Sep '17 6:20:14 AM by Robbyn

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#9: Sep 17th 2017 at 8:11:35 AM

[tup] 5.1

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PeabodySam The Pea Mocker from Behind the computer Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Owner of a lonely heart
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#10: Sep 17th 2017 at 8:53:59 AM

When it's just one panel taken out of context, I have no idea what is depicted in 5.1.

5.2 is a lot clearer, taking the typical fanservice-y Marylin Monroe imagery and intentionally subverting the fanservice aspect.

... until SUDDENLY DINOSAURS.
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#12: Sep 17th 2017 at 6:29:17 PM

Going back to 7, I agree that the OP would work better on Butter Face than it's current.

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#14: Oct 4th 2017 at 6:48:14 AM

Clock expired; closing.

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