I take it this is a somewhat comedic/parody work?
Angry gets shit done.It started off as a parody of Avatar The Last Airbender. Borne out because my sister thought the name Zuko sounded like zucca which means pumpkin. But it's on the way to become a real story that's just set in a silly world.
http://www.ncls.it/g/Do you ever plan to publish it outside of the fan community? 'Cause if so I'd recommend changing the name of the 'not-Pikachu nomads' before then. Nintendo's lawyers are scary.
Any way, what you've presented here is a premise, not so much a world. But that's not a bad thing, just like any good story, any good world has to start with a premise.
I'd encourage you to share more of your world and don't be afraid to ask for any specific input you'd like. (It's not that not asking for input's not allowed, but it helps us to help you if we know what you want us to focus on).
Angry gets shit done.I do plan to publish it as an actual book. If so, I'll change the "not-Pikachu" and "not-Pokémon" names to generic ones.
The world is'nt really defined. Yes there are four Planet of Hats cultures, and there is futuristic technology but also fantasy stuff. But we don't know much yet about them.
http://www.ncls.it/g/
Here's mine: renegade Pumpkin Nation emperor Zukcoh, Blue Tomatoes Tribe hotel owner Pomodà, big arctic wolf (Lupus Supremus) Orgen, Blue Tomatoes tribe teenage twins (Pomodà's cousins) Marielda and Mellina, Red Tomatoes tribe cherry-powered magical warrior girl Cilegià, Not-Pikachu Nomad apprentice monk healer Dovanice, and last-joined but not least, Poverty Kingdom cunning schemer and street rat Ferdeor. They're travelling the world to save it from a powerful evil wizard named Gredie. To do so, they have to collect eight magical jewels around the world, and use a magical rainbow of powers to seal the wizard inside a rock in a well.
http://www.ncls.it/g/