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Either's fine with me...my only gripe about 1.2 is the graininess of the text.
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I prefer the first of the suggestions, but having a few more to choose from wouldn't hurt,
...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.
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Clock is set.
There is no Planet B
Both suggestions are fine.
The lipstip print is more visible in 1.2, so it gets my vote, but the text really is grainy.
Would be ok with 1.1, too.
Shall I set up a crowner, then?
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"
No, the other one.
Not too hyped, but either work. The mark is a little unclear in the first, and the text is kinda bad in the second.
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Crowner's hooked.
1.1 doesn't say anything about the mark meaning he's cheating.
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
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Not in so many words, but in the context, it certainly gets the message across.
...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.Oh, you're right, I must not have been reading the text. I prefer 1.2 though.
edited 7th Mar '17 6:20:09 AM by rodneyAnonymous
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
Here's 1.2 again with the speech bubbles re-edited to make the text less grainy.
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Votes bump; both are in the green.
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Calling this one. The new pic's up and tagged; caption?
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Wow, this should've been closed a while back.
Crown Description:
Nominations for replacement images:
This is the old "lipstick on his collar means he's cheating" trope. I came across two instances in the Film Noir comic Fatale. Judge for yourself which is better: one where it's pointed out by the guy's colleague/best friend, and one where his wife discovers it while doing the laundry.
edited 16th Feb '17 1:22:29 PM by Morgenthaler
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"