Last one, maybe.
Check out my fanfiction!edited 11th Feb '17 3:56:46 AM by eroock
I don't get it.
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.I think that might take too many panels to get the point across, plus it doesn't seem "psycho" enough.
In the first suggestions, it's the contrast between Minako's straightforward cuteness and Koumori's gangly build, crazy facial design, and having her head at a completely unnatural tilt, which is something she does frequently throughout the manga, along with the overall creepiness of the interaction itself. In the second, it's her drooling and lusting over Minako.
Honestly, I prefer my take...losing the "Aah, I just want to..." blunts the overall effect.
edited 11th Feb '17 8:08:44 AM by Willbyr
I agree that that line needs to be in. It's not strong as it is, and that's one of the most important lines.
Check out my fanfiction!Nothing in that picture really communicate the "lesbian" aspect.
Or the psycho part for that matter.
Yes and sorta yes.
Clock is set. Crowner?
Clock expired; closing.
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The old pic for Psycho Lesbian was removed here, and Eddie pulled fiat on making it a "no pic" page. I wanted to revisit it, as I've started reading MurciƩlago and I've found some tame depictions that I think might work as SFW page pics, but they might be too subtle. Thoughts?