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Huthman Queen of Neith from Unknown, Antarctica Since: May, 2016 Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Queen of Neith
#1: Dec 8th 2016 at 2:23:40 PM

300 years ago, a man named Caesar founded the city of Millennium to protect the Lord's Chosen, all the strong people and the weak people from the God's Plan, which consists of the Great Atomic Holocaust, Comet Eurydice, Wrath of the Sun, the Deluge, Pestilence of the White Plague and Geological Shift.

The city of Millennium is a underground city that spirals downwards 3000 kilometers into the earth, the top is covered with a massive transparent dome known as the Firmament which allows sunlight to enter the city.

Today, Arcam is inhabited by people who are socially stratified, divided between the strong and the weak. Hierarchical levels determines your classes and people if strong enough, can reach higher levels, escaping from their classes.

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IndirectActiveTransport Since: Nov, 2010
#2: Dec 11th 2016 at 9:54:57 AM

So the there is a big hole in the ground, thousands of kilometers deep, and at the bottom is a transparent dome that makes it pretty much impossible to climb or fly out of it?

Well, I suppose gardening is going to be very important. It's like a greenhouse in a pit then?

dragonfire5000 from Where gods fear to tread Since: Jan, 2001
#3: Dec 11th 2016 at 10:00:08 AM

Seems like someone was playing Shin Megami Tensei IV.

If you're serious about writing this story, I recommend changing a lot of things to avoid plagiarism.

Huthman Queen of Neith from Unknown, Antarctica Since: May, 2016 Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Queen of Neith
#4: Dec 11th 2016 at 2:21:50 PM

No, the dome is placed on top of the hole, troper above [up][up] And [up] what things do I need to change to avoid Shin Megami Tensei IV, in which I like about the story and settings.

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Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#5: Dec 15th 2016 at 9:48:43 AM

Removal of the religious ideas might be a good start, maybe something a bit more "human"

And then there was silence
Huthman Queen of Neith from Unknown, Antarctica Since: May, 2016 Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Queen of Neith
#6: Dec 15th 2016 at 2:04:19 PM

I'll change that into the Genetically Pure and the Cataclysm.

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