Seems good to me.
^^ Not much to improve on that except maybe lettering.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"Pretty good. I'd prefer an option with a bit more color to it, but that's by no means bad.
"Yeah, it's a shame. Here we are in an underground cave with all these lasers, and instead of having a rave we're using it for evil."Looks good enough. Barring anything better, I'll support it.
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I've gone ahead and put it up. Caption or no?
Can't think of anything particularly witty, sorry.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanI can't read anything in OP's image.
I was thinking of suggesting the tech tree from Ultimate Domain (aka Genesia) but I'm not sure the text would be any more readable at wiki size than the original suggestion.
I'm fine with the OP suggestion unless we can find something clearer.
edited 5th Aug '15 4:18:37 AM by Melkior
Absent-minded professor and Neverwinter Nights DMIt would help if you showed an example so we could compare.
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It's a PNG image. I'll make a JPG version if anyone can't see it.
I can create a version with everything researched.
edited 5th Aug '15 4:30:29 AM by Melkior
Absent-minded professor and Neverwinter Nights DMThe use of colour in the OP makes it a lot more distinctive than 14, I think.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"I think that looks more like a relationship or category diagram or something like that. It's less "more advanced stuff" and more "more specific stuff".
Check out my fanfiction!Went ahead and threw on a caption.
Like I said, I'm okay with the OP. I just wanted to throw out another option in case it proved to be better.
Absent-minded professor and Neverwinter Nights DMAm I too late to chip in my suggestion? Also, is Starcraft II too obvious a choice? [1]◊
edited 6th Aug '15 12:16:23 AM by peasant
At small size, it's hard to tell that's a tech tree; looks more like just a set of connected buildings.
Yep, at that size I only see buildings.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanI'm going to go ahead and lock this since the pic's been up for a few days and discussion about other options hasn't been fruitful.
I'm honestly surprised this doesn't have an image yet, so here's a suggestion from Civilization V.
edited 3rd Aug '15 1:39:05 AM by ThePope