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piearty Hello world! from The clouds Since: Oct, 2009
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#1: May 22nd 2015 at 4:25:06 AM

So I am fully aware this is BUPKIS. I think I could draw a version of this that would fit well, though (click my signature to see examples of my art if needed). Here's my suggestion. I didn't draw it out fully in case it needed tweaks or was flat out rejected and the thread closed again.

Description: In the foreground, a family picture of a mom, dad, and child. In the midground, two bodies which are visibly the parents lie on a bloody floor. A person who is visibly the child stands in the doorway in the background, clothes spattered with blood and holding a bloody knife.

I could also show the child about to kill the parents who are just watching TV on the couch or something.

edited 22nd May '15 4:26:13 AM by piearty

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#2: May 22nd 2015 at 6:07:28 AM

Opened.

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#3: May 22nd 2015 at 6:17:56 AM

I like that idea! I'd say work on making it finished-quality.

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piearty Hello world! from The clouds Since: Oct, 2009
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#4: May 22nd 2015 at 11:16:21 AM

I'm gonna wait until more people approve.

lexicon Since: May, 2012
#5: May 22nd 2015 at 11:29:49 AM

The idea works. I wish more people would draw images for trope pages.

rodneyAnonymous Sophisticated as Hell from empty space Since: Aug, 2010
#6: May 22nd 2015 at 12:24:26 PM

From the webcomic it looks like you draw in pencil then ink and color on a computer? If so, just a pencil drawing would be cool, so what people are approving or disapproving of is clearer. Just the idea of a troper-made image in general is fine; let's see it.

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#7: May 22nd 2015 at 12:49:23 PM

[up]I think what he means is that the version he linked to is just a rough sketch, and he wants to make sure the concept works before he puts more time into finishing it.

Personally I think it would work perfectly fine.

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piearty Hello world! from The clouds Since: Oct, 2009
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#8: May 22nd 2015 at 1:06:04 PM

Ok, I'll work on it and try to finish it over the weekend.

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#9: May 22nd 2015 at 5:52:51 PM

I like the concept. I'd certainly be interested to see the finished product.

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piearty Hello world! from The clouds Since: Oct, 2009
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#10: May 22nd 2015 at 6:04:24 PM

I was actually able to finish this tonight. Is this ok?

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#12: May 22nd 2015 at 6:16:13 PM

Looks good. It has my support.

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#15: May 22nd 2015 at 6:44:45 PM

Oh, my, YES!!! [awesome][tup][awesome]

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#16: May 22nd 2015 at 8:00:12 PM

It's good. You feel like doing any others?

piearty Hello world! from The clouds Since: Oct, 2009
Rethkir A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies from the gap between dimensions Since: Mar, 2013
#18: May 22nd 2015 at 8:51:44 PM

Yes, that's awesome.

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#19: May 22nd 2015 at 11:32:17 PM

That looks damn near perfect to me.

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#20: May 23rd 2015 at 1:00:20 AM

And it's up and tagged. Caption?

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rodneyAnonymous Sophisticated as Hell from empty space Since: Aug, 2010
#21: May 23rd 2015 at 4:05:11 AM

Also, my mistake, I didn't see the link.

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piearty Hello world! from The clouds Since: Oct, 2009
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#22: May 23rd 2015 at 4:50:33 AM

Hummm isn't that the sketch picture not the finished picture...?

SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#23: May 23rd 2015 at 5:11:35 AM

Oop, yes.

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Rethkir A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies from the gap between dimensions Since: Mar, 2013
#24: May 23rd 2015 at 6:00:12 AM

I uploaded the final version to the page.

edited 23rd May '15 6:00:24 AM by Rethkir

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#25: May 26th 2015 at 7:39:05 AM

No caption discussion to this point; locking up.

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