Agreed, the current's even too texty for me. The suggestion is decent...not sure which part would be better.
The last panel would be best.
Well, the last panel alone tends to evoke more Loony Fan. I would have thought of something at least including the first panel (too bad it's so wide...).
Clock is set. I lean toward pulling the current for being overly texty.
Also leaning to a pull. The imagery doesn't seem to add anything to the text.
Check out my fanfiction!Current needs to go, no questions on that.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanI like the cut I posted.
I need to take another look at the suggested comic in its entirety before making a firm decision.
My suggestion would be to trim the first panel to keep just the girl (that's Ms. Marvel, right?) and her speech bubbles (including cutting the scarf behind her), and put it on top of the last panel. It should fit.
Edit: couldn't resist giving it a go; here what it looks like at wiki size:
edited 20th Jun '15 5:44:18 AM by StFan
That works for me.
I'd like to keep it one-panel if we can.
Re-clocked. Crowner between the two-panel versions and the independent panels?
Can I just ask what is going on with her scarf? Is it an anti-gravity scarf?
edited 14th Jul '15 8:18:25 AM by shigmiya64
Just a face, a caption, and lots of text.
Image added last year, apparently with no discussion.
Honestly, no picture would be probably better. It isn't that easy a trope to illustrate.
Though if I can make a suggestion, maybe we can get something out of this comic◊.