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OmniGoat from New York, NY Since: Jul, 2014 Relationship Status: Is that a kind of food?
#1: Aug 27th 2014 at 3:59:22 PM

Okay, so, I was trying to write a massive crossover fanfic on fanfiction.net, and, when I went over to the site in preparation for my weekly chapter update, I saw one particularly scathing review that culminated in the reviewer saying that there seems to be no reason for my story, that people wouldn't find it interesting, and that it seems like it was made on drugs, so, I was wondering, should I just quit while I'm ahead?

This shall be my true, Start of Darkness
dRoy Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar from Most likely from my study Since: May, 2010 Relationship Status: I'm just high on the world
Professional Writer & Amateur Scholar
#2: Aug 27th 2014 at 4:09:11 PM

You don't really even seem ahead anyway.

So why not give a try and keep going?

I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel.
Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
Zzzzzzzzzz
#3: Aug 27th 2014 at 4:09:19 PM

For one person who doesn't like it? No. Especially since from what you said they said, it sounds like they could be classed as a "hater", since they assume that they can speak for anyone besides themselves.

...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#4: Aug 27th 2014 at 4:18:19 PM

The answer is no.

So long as there's one guy out there who enjoys it, even if that guy is you, what should the opinions of, as Madrugada put it, a Hater, matter to you?

...

Provided you're not writing something horribly offensive, I see no reason you would need to stop even if it was bad. You're not going to get better if you quit, after all.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
BlueNinja0 The Mod with the Migraine from Taking a left at Albuquerque Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Mod with the Migraine
#5: Aug 27th 2014 at 5:26:39 PM

I've gotten several scathing reviews from the same person on a couple of stories. I'm still writing two of them, and my reason for not continuing the third has nothing to do with that particular asshat.

Now, if the majority of your reviews**  on a fic are bringing up the same criticism, then it's probably time to, if not toss in the towel, at least give your story and your writing process a very serious evaluation. But you're always going to get some people who take joy in finding stories to pigeon.note 

That’s the epitome of privilege right there, not considering armed nazis a threat to your life. - Silasw
OmniGoat from New York, NY Since: Jul, 2014 Relationship Status: Is that a kind of food?
#6: Aug 27th 2014 at 5:39:07 PM

[up] Well, out of 14 reviews, that was the only really bad one, and it complained mostly about grammar (not spelling, more or less just too many run-on sentences and paragraphs that were too long, the end of the review was where it got surprisingly insulting). Beyond that, the most negativity I got was from people that said they'd have given me a negative review based on the first chapter, but realized it was intentionally bad and appreciated the storyline afterward (I rectified the first chapter issue with an author's note).

This shall be my true, Start of Darkness
Sharysa Since: Jan, 2001
#7: Aug 27th 2014 at 6:26:47 PM

If he read the fic after you posted the note explaining how it's supposed to be bad, he's either a troll or he can't read.

If he read the fic before the note, you can explain to him that it's supposed to suck (if you can send him a message somehow.)

Either way, one bad review out of fourteen is no reason to stop writing anything.

OmniGoat from New York, NY Since: Jul, 2014 Relationship Status: Is that a kind of food?
#8: Aug 27th 2014 at 6:31:30 PM

[up] Well, he criticized the serious parts of my story, he mostly ignored the troll fic part.

This shall be my true, Start of Darkness
NapoleonDeCheese Since: Oct, 2010
#9: Aug 27th 2014 at 6:56:10 PM

You have the world's best avatar. Anyone who has the world's best avatar can't be wrong. Keep going ahead.

BlueNinja0 The Mod with the Migraine from Taking a left at Albuquerque Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Mod with the Migraine
#10: Aug 28th 2014 at 2:15:04 AM

[up][up] The thing you need to figure out is: "Is his criticism valid?" By which I mean, does he raise any actual points about weaknesses in your narrative - plot, characters, descriptions, word choice, etc - that diminish or unintentionally subvert what you're trying to accomplish with your story?

If the answer is no, then feel free to /ignore.

If the answer is yes, then he's just a jerk with a point.

That’s the epitome of privilege right there, not considering armed nazis a threat to your life. - Silasw
IAmNotCreativeEnough himitsu keisatsu from asa kara ban made omae o miru Since: Dec, 2010 Relationship Status: GAR for Archer
himitsu keisatsu
#11: Sep 5th 2014 at 9:31:20 PM

About the repeated criticism thing: If a lot of people are complaining about the same thing, and it's not necessarily intentional on your part, they might be onto something there...

Don't listen if it's intentional (such as a seemingly nonsensical plot twist or the like), though, 'cause it kind of beats the point.

himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimari
Gideoncrawle Elder statesman from Put out to pasture Since: Dec, 2012 Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
Elder statesman
#12: Nov 7th 2014 at 9:34:33 PM

too many run-on sentences and paragraphs that were too long

Flaming aside, that much at least sounds like legitimate criticism, assuming that it's factually accurate. The rule of thumb is that if a paragraph is more than 10-12 lines long, you should look for a place to split it. The reason walls of text are hard to read is because it's easy to lose your place. Similarly, if you're not changing paragraphs when you change speakers—a common cause of excessively long paragraphs—it can become hard to figure out who said what.

Bigotry in the name of inclusion is still bigotry.
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