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gameboy1234 Since: Mar, 2013
#1: Oct 13th 2013 at 10:17:33 PM

I hope I'm doing this right. I'd like to suggest the following as a good candidate illustration for the Your Costume Needs Work page. Or maybe with some photo-editing just the last two panels.

http://www.gynostar.com/archives/2061

I posted this on that article's discussion page already, then I noticed this forum. Sorry for the booboo.

edited 13th Oct '13 10:19:02 PM by gameboy1234

gameboy1234 Since: Mar, 2013
#2: Oct 13th 2013 at 10:18:36 PM

Crisis adverted by finding the edit button. Nothing to see here.

edited 13th Oct '13 10:19:27 PM by gameboy1234

AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
No, the other one.
#3: Oct 13th 2013 at 10:42:21 PM

Well, I'm not sure two panels would be easily readable at wiki size, and arranging them vertically might be hard due to the speech bubble. Otherwise, panel 4 does cover the trope, though the visuals aren't that interesting. Works, though.

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lexicon Since: May, 2012
#4: Oct 13th 2013 at 10:48:34 PM

I'd say it works better for a quote than a picture. It would work better than the current quote actually.

edited 13th Oct '13 10:53:06 PM by lexicon

KarjamP The imaginative Christian Asperger from South Africa Since: Apr, 2011 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
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#5: Oct 13th 2013 at 10:50:08 PM

Last two frames could work.

rodneyAnonymous Sophisticated as Hell from empty space Since: Aug, 2010
#6: Oct 14th 2013 at 1:51:24 AM

^^^


I don't think it would work as a quote. The look on her face says "I am the real Gyno-Star", and that is important.

edited 14th Oct '13 2:21:29 AM by rodneyAnonymous

Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
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Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#8: Oct 14th 2013 at 6:43:43 AM

6 works well enough for me.

Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
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#9: Oct 14th 2013 at 7:04:49 AM

6 is lovely.

...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#10: Oct 14th 2013 at 7:05:22 AM

6 is acceptable for me.

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Rethkir A Trusted Friend in Science and Ponies from the gap between dimensions Since: Mar, 2013
SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#12: Oct 14th 2013 at 7:11:18 AM

Seems like enough votes; it's up, potholed and tagged.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
m8e from Sweden Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
#13: Oct 14th 2013 at 7:38:42 AM

Cropped out the white at the top/bottom, and pushed the frames closer together.

edited 14th Oct '13 7:51:37 AM by m8e

gameboy1234 Since: Mar, 2013
#14: Oct 14th 2013 at 11:59:05 AM

Fast work, thanks guys. It seems my work here is done!

(But I think it needs a suitably snarky caption. Unfortunately I can't think of anything at the moment.)

AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
No, the other one.
Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#16: Oct 14th 2013 at 1:29:43 PM

I'm good with no caption.

rodneyAnonymous Sophisticated as Hell from empty space Since: Aug, 2010
#17: Oct 14th 2013 at 3:11:23 PM

Maybe a caption that surreptitiously emphasizes the fact that she is the "real thing"?

Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
ShadowHog from Earth Since: May, 2009 Relationship Status: Healthy, deeply-felt respect for this here Shotgun
#18: Oct 14th 2013 at 3:23:35 PM

"But I actually am-"
"And another thing; her voice is much deeper than that."

edited 14th Oct '13 3:23:42 PM by ShadowHog

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gameboy1234 Since: Mar, 2013
#19: Oct 14th 2013 at 4:08:45 PM

Yeah, I think that's what it was missing. "But she really is!" or something like that.

AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
No, the other one.
#20: Oct 14th 2013 at 5:03:46 PM

I think the "But actually—" comment she makes makes it clear enough.

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rodneyAnonymous Sophisticated as Hell from empty space Since: Aug, 2010
#21: Oct 14th 2013 at 5:42:59 PM

Yeah, I agree that the information is there, just mean I think it's worth reinforcing.

Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.
Madrugada Zzzzzzzzzz Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: In season
Zzzzzzzzzz
#22: Oct 14th 2013 at 5:45:07 PM

"She really is Gyno-Star, but they photoshop her in post-production."

...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.
lexicon Since: May, 2012
#23: Oct 14th 2013 at 7:00:10 PM

It doesn't need a caption but if it has one is should be what she's thinking like, "I am the real thing you little fanboy twerp."

edited 14th Oct '13 7:00:33 PM by lexicon

Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#24: Oct 17th 2013 at 6:28:04 AM

No consensus on a caption; locking up.

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