ILD's test
-The Tauros goes for another Take Down-
Phoenix survives, and the Tauros suffers from recoil.
Alrighty then. Use Mach Punch!
Okay!
ILD's test
-The Mach Punch knocks the Tauros down, dealing massive damage to it. It gets up, and uses Thrash-
Zeal: G-gah!
-stumbles backward, tripping over a rock-
Help me, Glavo!
-sends out Glavo and stands up, more confident-
Use Dig!
edited 8th Feb '13 6:56:26 PM by MrMasterMrDoom
"Even if everything has been predestined, will you not oppose it?"
(The attack does more damage to Phoenix, but he's still on his feet.)
Alright, use Mach Punch again!
ILD's test
-The Tauros goes down from the last Mach punch-And with that, you're done. I don't think I saw any problems that weren't addressed, so I think you're good. I recommend checking out the chatroom here.
@Mr Master Mr Doom:Someone else will be doing your test battle since I'm not really feeling up to doing it at the moment. He should be posting the response soon.
edited 8th Feb '13 7:10:45 PM by strawberryflavored
MMMD's Test
-The Manectric notes the Sneasel, then charges up (yes, the attack), then charges at it with electrified fangs-
-The attack, however, does not connect, due to Glavo currently being underground-
"Don't worry, murder is a sign of affection." - An amalgamation of Dunsparce
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I am looking forward to this.
- Name: Pallav Nagi
- Age: Mid Twenties
- Appearance: An average sized man with brown skin. He is wearing a black shirt covered by a dark green vest. Spiked black hair and brown eyes. He is wearing blue jeans and maroon/black running shoes. He is sometimes seen wearing black sandals. He carries a leather shoulder bag where he keeps his collection, also some small cases.
- Ties/connections: He has ties to the Pokemon Ranger Union and works in missions as a Rank 8 ranger. He does keep a Capture Styler which is currently dysfunctional.
- Region of Origin: Almia
- Backstory: Pallav grew up in Haruba dessert.
Pokemon
- Species: Drapion
- Nickname: Dirham
- Gender: Male
- Ability: Battle Armor
- Personality: A quiet Drapion
- Bio: Pallav's first Pokemon. Started as a Skorupi that joined him as his Partner Pokemon.
- Species: Lileep
- Nickname: Peso
- Gender: Female
- Ability: Storm Drain
- Personality: Appears as shy at first. But is very cynical.
- Bio: When Peso was a fossil it is his prized charm. Peso is still a charm for Pallav.
- Species: Tentacool
- Nickname: Yen
- Gender: Female
- Ability: Liquid Ooze
- Personality: A cheerful tentacool
- Bio: A pokemon Pallav thought to be valuable due to its crystals. He was wrong, but he decided to keep due to its grace.
- Species: Magneton
- Nickname: Krone
- Gender: none
- Ability: Magnet Pull
- Personality: A curious and smart Magneton
- Bio: A pokemon Pallav once used as a tracker in his Ranger days; his second pokemon.
Acid Pop
edited 9th Feb '13 3:07:57 PM by CredibleFork
"Of course."
Okay, looks good, but I think we do have one concern.
It might be a bit contrived to having been a Rank 8 Ranger, then getting lost to the point he forgot about the Organization, especially if he started at 14.
Maybe change it to something like he's off duty at the moment or he decided to quit, or something else you think might work?
"Don't worry, murder is a sign of affection." - An amalgamation of Dunsparce
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Alright, I changed it.
"Of course."
I think the change works, but it might be better to wait for more opinions, as most of them seem to have gone to bed.
"Don't worry, murder is a sign of affection." - An amalgamation of Dunsparce
-Glavo comes up from underground, missing the Manectric-
Zeal: Try to freeze it. Ice Beam.
-Glavo uses Ice Beam-
edited 9th Feb '13 4:16:39 AM by MrMasterMrDoom
"Even if everything has been predestined, will you not oppose it?"
MMMD's Scenario
-The Manectric is unable to avoid the Ice Beam and takes a bit of damage from it-
-It then counters by Charging again, followed by using Thunder Fang-
"Don't worry, murder is a sign of affection." - An amalgamation of Dunsparce
-Glavo is hit full force by Thunder Fang-
Zeal: No!
-switches Batali in-
Mach Punch!
-Batali uses Mach Punch-
"Even if everything has been predestined, will you not oppose it?"
-The Manectric, taking a fairly large amount of damage from the Mach Punch, decides to try a different approach-
-It lets out a frightening roar, hoping to drive its opponent off with it-
"Don't worry, murder is a sign of affection." - An amalgamation of Dunsparce
Meet The New Boss
Commenting on what I see so far...
MMMD
Your battling style and grammar seems solid, but your mons are currently kinda... Non-entities. Try to use the base personalities you gave us to give them a few lines, even if your Trainer can't understand yet.
Credible Fork
Your profile looks good content-wise, but I personally see some grammar issues that need fixing. We'll get a better idea of that in your test when it happens, but try to fix that now, too.
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Acid Pop
- Name: Davis Gero.
- Age: 21.
- Gender: Male.
- Appearance: Medium height, brown hair wearing a black suit and tie.
- Affiliations: Paranormal Investigator.
- Region of origin: Ecruteak Town.
- Backstory: Davis was born and raised in Ecruteak Town where he was trained by the local gym leader Morty. Under Morty, Davis was instilled with a love for ghost pokemon, it was then he set out to study and find as many ghost pokemon as he could as a paranormal investigator. Davis travels far and wide due to his work.
- Pokemon:
- Species: Haunter (starter pokemon)
- Nickname: Zero
- Gender: Male
- Abililty: Levitate
- Personality: Zero was the first pokemon Davis ever had and is extremely loyal to him. He is shy around those that he doesn't know.
- Species: Weezing.
- Nickname: Nox.
- Gender: Female.
- Ability: Levitate.
- Personality: Davis first met Nox as a Koffing in the Burned Tower back home. She evolved on Davis first paranormal investigation. Nox is friendly and trusting although she tends to Explode when embarrased.
edited 9th Feb '13 11:06:53 AM by ShadowKaiser
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Meet The New Boss
Shadow Kaiser
Your profile looks good for the most part (And yay, Weezing!) but I'm not sure about interpol hiring paranormal investigators even in Pokemon. (The organization ties listed in the OP are suggestions, not requirements.) You OK with making him a plain ol' paranormal investigator?
(Either way, you'll love to meet my P Cs. Especially RP!Umbra. >:3)
Contact Me!
Sure! How's that?? ^^
edited 9th Feb '13 11:07:33 AM by ShadowKaiser
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Meet The New Boss
That works, yeah.
Someone should be starting your test (and Credible Fork's) soon; I can't be on enough right now to do it myself.
Contact Me!
Dunsparce Cloud
Credible Fork
You have been cornered by a mugger who demands a battle for your money. He sends out an Arbok! How will you respond?
Shadow Kaiser
While resting against a mound, you are faced with the unfortunate discovery that the mound is actually a disgruntled Torterra. With the world turtle just about to attack, how do you respond?
Dunsparce didn't stop being a thing or anything.
No wonder that mound had a tree! -Sends out Zero-
Okay Mr. Torterra time to go back asleep. Zero use Hypnosis!
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Dunsparce Cloud
Shadow Kaiser's Test
-the Torterra shakes its head in anger, the hypnotic waves not being quite hypnotic enough-
-and charges Zero and Davis-
Dunsparce didn't stop being a thing or anything.
Guess that didn't work. RUN!! -Sends out Nox while running-
Nox:<why are you running?>
Nox float high and use Smokescreen to hide us!
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Lady takes the hit, and survives with a few Hit Points left.
Ow...I'm not going to beat this one. Switch me out.
Okay. Phoenix, go!