My thinking is that the suggestion at least sounds like "off," rather than "scream" which is no more clear, but completely random. It's almost an example of Subverted Rhyme Every Occasion
it's so random.
Again, it's minor, but I think it's pretty definitely an improvement. And such a small article wouldn't cause much confusion by renaming it, as abk pointed out.
edited 13th Sep '12 12:12:37 PM by Larkmarn