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MorwenEdhelwen Aussie Tolkien freak from Sydney, Australia Since: Jul, 2012
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#1: Jul 8th 2012 at 11:01:56 PM

Are you allowed to start a thread for a story rather than a hook? I recently posted one for something I worked on (it's an alternate history called "Cuba Libre") And as soon as "A Knife In The Sand"(the Desert Song-inspired one) has continued beyond three pages and is polished enough, I'll start one for it too.

edited 8th Jul '12 11:20:50 PM by MorwenEdhelwen

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nrjxll Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Not war
#2: Jul 9th 2012 at 12:27:20 AM

Generally, I don't think people post entire stories on here.

MorwenEdhelwen Aussie Tolkien freak from Sydney, Australia Since: Jul, 2012
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#3: Jul 9th 2012 at 1:23:08 AM

Not posting the entire thing just two or three pages. What I'd be worried about would be the characterisation and similar issues.

edited 9th Jul '12 1:24:02 AM by MorwenEdhelwen

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DoktorvonEurotrash Since: Jan, 2001
#4: Jul 9th 2012 at 2:43:22 AM

Why shouldn't people post stories in here? This is a writing critique forum, after all. Critiquing a story is far more useful (and easy) than critiquing a bare-bones summary.

I'm not saying there aren't good reasons not to post entire stories (such as copyright issues if you intend to get it published afterwards). I'm just saying that as far as I know, we have no policy against it.

SlendidSuit Freelance Worrywart from Probably a Pub Since: Oct, 2011
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#5: Jul 9th 2012 at 2:48:32 AM

I think AHR has been posting her graphic novel on here. I remember reading about halfway through and enjoying it, not sure if she posted the whole thing.

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MorwenEdhelwen Aussie Tolkien freak from Sydney, Australia Since: Jul, 2012
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#6: Jul 9th 2012 at 3:02:16 AM

@Slendid Suit: I've got something on here: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=13417029080A95476900&page=1#3. Haven't got any comments. It's parts of a novel I'm writing.

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SlendidSuit Freelance Worrywart from Probably a Pub Since: Oct, 2011
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#7: Jul 9th 2012 at 3:11:58 AM

Cool. I'm not really a critic, but I'll take a look and see what I think, when I have time.

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nrjxll Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Not war
#8: Jul 9th 2012 at 12:55:38 PM

Why shouldn't people post stories in here?

There's no real reason that they shouldn't - in fact, I think you're much more likely to get good criticism of your work as a whole then you will of out-of-context fragments - but as a general rule, nobody does.

MrAHR Ahr river from ಠ_ಠ Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
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#9: Jul 9th 2012 at 1:27:05 PM

Yeah, my entire story is up, although once my current critiquer gets through it, I'll probably take it down, mostly so I can work on something submittable.

So yeah, on topic, you can make a thread to critique ANYTHING if you want to.

edited 9th Jul '12 1:39:04 PM by MrAHR

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MorwenEdhelwen Aussie Tolkien freak from Sydney, Australia Since: Jul, 2012
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#10: Jul 11th 2012 at 3:40:52 AM

@Slendid Suit: Thanks. Hope you comment on the thread. It's basically Evita in Cuba.

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