The Place for Purging Porn and Pedo-Pandering (AKA P5 flag evaluations)

39 by now actually :V Here ya go.

edited 15th Aug '12 11:20:12 AM by Adannor

I have a moment of "Whoo, sex scene! At least something might justify this thing getting flagged" but no, boyfriend is- nevermind. Huh, didn't see that coming.

Single panel sex scene. Nothing explicit is actually shown, and my knowledge of human anatomy tells me that the position there is awkward. Also, FA server is slow....

It also has a plot (as in, aside from Slice of Life) picking up in the currently final pages, by the way.

So I noticed. A second single panel sex scene.

This comic isn't porn so much as a comic detailing the life of a gay werewolf.

It might need a Clean but it's a definitive Keep.

edited 15th Aug '12 11:28:20 AM by NineThePuma

I'm still only a few chapters into Time Braid, and while I'm finding it very entertaining despite not having any familiarity with Naruto, the sex scenes are making it really hard to justify giving this an Angel.

Even if you accept the premise that the main character is both mentally and physically older than her technical age (and a fair case could be made there given how the story is set up), by chapter three she's already had sex twice (once as part of a threesome) with other 12 year old characters that, to my knowledge, aren't part of the time-loops. This actually serves to make the situation more skeevy, because instead of a bunch of 12 year olds having sex, it's someone who is mentally an adult using magic and knowledge gained from time-looping to manipulate 12 year olds into having sex with her.

It's a shame because, like I said, I actually really am enjoying the story aside from those elements — enough that it's actually gotten me interested in checking out the source material. Which is probably a first for me when it comes to fanfiction. However much I might like the rest of the story, though, the sexual elements I mentioned are making me strongly lean towards a devil-head based on our current guidelines.

edited 15th Aug '12 12:45:56 PM by Meeble

I only ask that you read the whole thing before passing judgement. As I said when I first brought it up back in May (holy crap been that long?!), I'm willing to accept the panel's word either way so long as its been properly reviewed.

I can go through Anatomy of a Fall for you guys. It's all emo band stuff again.

I don't think Sakura's been through nearly enough loops during those scenes to count as an adult. (I think at that stage she hadn't really gotten past more than a week at a time and sometimes less, so I doubt she'd be mentally past 13.)

There *is* a scene that really is a signifcantly older Sakura taking advantage of someone younger, but it's also a "My god, what have I done?" moment once she realizes the full implications of it. And once Sakura gets into long enough loops to really hit "adult", all her relationships are with other looping people.

(Disclaimer: It's been a few months, yadda yadda yadda.)

So I'm done with Chapter Two of Twelve of The Anatomy Of A Fall. There's absolutely no way this is pornographic - nothing remotely sexual has happened at all, and even if everyone starts fucking like rabbits next chapter, there's been enough plot to qualify, per the great decision of Fifty Shades of Gray. I'll read through to see if there's any pedo-pandering, but I somehow doubt it. The only thing has been that Gerard hates this one bully so much that he wants to put a sticker that says "I SUCK GOATS AND LITTLE BOYS" on his car, but is pretty sure he'll get his ass handed to him if he does.

edited 15th Aug '12 1:57:52 PM by LargoQuagmire

In chapter 3, it mentions that she spends years absorbing all the knowledge from some medical ninja lady. So even if it wasn't to "legal adult in the real world" status, it's still old enough to make it more creepy.

And even if I misread that and she's not mentally an adult, then the reverse would apply when she's sleeping with the adult ninjas. In addition, 12 year olds sleeping with each other for the purpose of the reader's arousal is a pretty clear violation of the content policy. And that's leaving aside the fact that the different illusion and mind affecting stuff makes some of those scenes pretty rapey.

@Nine: Like I said, I am going to finish the fanfic because I find the non-sexual parts of the story genuinely interesting and decently written, but I'm pretty certain at this point that my vote will be devil-head.

edited 15th Aug '12 2:19:37 PM by Meeble

Up to chapter five of The Anatomy Of A Fall. I can pretty confidently say that this isn't what we're looking to cut. It's a budding romance between a high school senior and a dead seventeen-year-old. It's actually kind of sweet, honestly.

Hey, if that's the case, that's the case.

I just can't wait til you guys have to review Chunnin Exam Day as well.

So its like that vn 'the drug that makes you dream' in that regrade?

edited 15th Aug '12 2:53:27 PM by shadis

I'm with Meeble on Time Braid (well, the verdict anyways). In addition to what he's already brought up, there's also parts where the girl spends multiple loops with a seductress ninja learning various techinques from her, including some sex scenes. Bear in mind she is phyisically, what 12? 13? for the duration of the fic. Far too young for our standards.

Eh, what he said applies to me, too. I have nothing against T Ime Braid, but speaking as a P5 Guy, there are way too many problematic elements for my liking.

Also, what's the deal with Nozoki Ana?

It's a Seinen, romance dramady, fanservice manga.

Here's a place to read it.

It mentions a young boy and masturbation.

Read a few chapters earlier today. Masturbation, yes. Young boy, no. The girl who masturbates on panel and the guy who watches are both college aged.

Not quite ready to call things just yet, but the fanservice is pretty heavy: frequent nudity, genitals depicted in relief, on-panel sex. Not quite at hentai, or even Aki Sora levels, but still pretty up there. No pedopandering that I have seen yet, though.

edited 15th Aug '12 4:25:31 PM by tdgoodrich1

Update: Got a response from CaptainGerBear. Judging by the response he gave and the feedback in the thread I should be able to vote angel safely. If any of the other P5 members want the contents of the e-mail, I can PM them on request.

edited 15th Aug '12 5:49:30 PM by tdgoodrich1

Yeah, send me the dirt.

I would as well.

If a fanfic's page is voted for deletion, then its fanfic recommendation should be deleted too, right?

Time Braid's rec is already gone, but Chunin Exam Day's rec stands strong.

No, it still has a recommendation up.

I would assume so, yes.