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Step right in;we occasionally try to bite but it doesn't hurt because we have marshmallows for teeth.
To the waking world I say,"Aha!"Check out this new writing project I'm undertaking!
Enjoy!~
@Passerby: Isn't it a happy coincidence that you live in Marikina too?
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so much to do, and yet... here, it feels like one cannot do anything but lie here and sleep forever.Conception Dos.
If you wanna PM me, send it to my mrsunshinesprinkles account; this one is blorked.interesting. me too.
so much to do, and yet... here, it feels like one cannot do anything but lie here and sleep forever....now don't hurt me...
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To the waking world I say,"Aha!"so, anyway... what do i do now? i just registered a couple of weeks ago. been here browsing for a few years. ._.
so much to do, and yet... here, it feels like one cannot do anything but lie here and sleep forever.Post on the forum games and media forums, work on your troper page, get a signature, get an avatar, and shit like that's a good start.
If you wanna PM me, send it to my mrsunshinesprinkles account; this one is blorked.I've only been here for one month, so I'm not exactly someone you'd ask advice from. But I second what noob said. TEH FORUM GAMES R TEH BESTEST!!!11
And I vandalized your page.
To the waking world I say,"Aha!"Thanks.
so much to do, and yet... here, it feels like one cannot do anything but lie here and sleep forever.@ judasmartel: Interesting. I can't really say much about premise(far from a basketball fan so it doesn't resonate with me as much as a fan would). I do like the little stat thing, though I'm not sure I agree with giving out their positions this early, which might kill the suspense later. Or does the position mean the position they usually get and specialize in, not what they will get on this specific team? (Again, not a basketball fan). If it's the former then it's fine. I notice that there's a bit of a problem with the tenses, which makes reading a bit confusing because I'm not sure what's going on and when it's happening, so yeah, a bit of some editing on that part would be nice.
To be honest the girlfriend rating icked me out. The fact that he was forced into doing it doesn't do much; if anything it makes him look like a push over. You'd probably have to make him really really interesting (or at least do something interesting) in order for readers to gain more interest in him.
I hope that was helpful.
edited 2nd Feb '13 5:53:34 AM by PretentiousSkyCat
To the waking world I say,"Aha!"Thank you.
The positions are just the potential positions they get based on their height, weight, and predisposition. The exception is Ryoko, whom I intend to be an Allen Iverson clone (who could end up being a Rukawa clone for some).
I just got the GF rating idea from Episode 2 of Mysterious Girlfriend X. I guess That Came Out Wrong, I don't intend to make the guy look wimpy. He's actually very good at basketball, but a recurring injury prevented him from playing at his best, so he gets cut from varsity teams ever since.
I'm thinking of something between a back injury, ACL injury, and ankle injury. So what do you think should be a plausible situation for our guy? Take note that he could still play despite the injury, he just can't play his A-game due to it. This is my trump card to make the main guy interesting, but without him stealing the spotlight.
I'm seriously tired of people expecting the main guy to steal the spotlight from the female cast just because he's a guy. This time, I want to write a main guy who doesn't have to steal the spotlight to become awesome, or at least interesting.
edited 3rd Feb '13 8:30:32 AM by judasmartel
I'd go for the back injury. I think it's the most plausible of the three.
I can see where you're going, just remember not to leave him in the dark, else he ends up being forgettable and all his interesting traits laid to waste.
To the waking world I say,"Aha!"Just dropping by to check in. Presently living in Davao by way of Manila and Baguio, born in Cebu, still a Cebuano at heart, and completely distrustful of all northerners in general and Imperialist Manila in particular.
Greetings!
That sounds awfully judgmental.
This "faculty lot" you speak of sounds like a place of great power...Hey! I'm a northerner, and proud of it! a Marikenyo here, with Ilokano ancestry.
though, yes, the government is corrupt. as it always is. and as all institutions with power tend to be.
um, yes. anyway... how is everyone?
so much to do, and yet... here, it feels like one cannot do anything but lie here and sleep forever.wow.Marikenyo(?) with Ilokano heritage, thats...A coincidence.
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hmm... would thou knowest by any chance the Infant Jesus Academy?
innocent question.
so much to do, and yet... here, it feels like one cannot do anything but lie here and sleep forever....yes...
My aunt graduated from there, awhile back...
edited 6th Feb '13 5:45:28 AM by eternalNoob
If you wanna PM me, send it to my mrsunshinesprinkles account; this one is blorked.sorry. just that... seems quite... interesting... living so close... and still somewhat mutually anonymous.
so much to do, and yet... here, it feels like one cannot do anything but lie here and sleep forever.Yeah, who knows, maybe we will meet one day in choyech.
edited 6th Feb '13 6:40:04 AM by eternalNoob
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Hi!
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