Fuzzy Orange Doomsayer
#2: Jun 20th 2011 at 10:13:16 PM
Well, my first thought is of reading The Catcher In The Rye.
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Ettina
Since: Apr, 2009
#3: Jun 21st 2011 at 10:33:04 AM
Sounds like he'd be Sophisticated as Hell, and ironic in his descriptions of things.
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I have two narrators. One is a girl who well-educated and quite amiable on the outside but has a nasty streak. According to the people that read her chapters, this shows well enough.
The problem is the second narrator, a boy who is a Deadpan Snarker and is rather crass despite also being well-educated. He's also awkward and feels a bit detached from the rest of the world, almost in a physical sense. When I tried to show this in the narration, the sentences ended up being short and having the same structure with occasional swearwords. Any suggestions? More information will be supplied as needed.
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