#2: Apr 3rd 2011 at 2:48:51 PM
Maybe Lily is currently freaked out at the prospect of dying and/or losing her best friend, making it impossible for her to fully concentrate. Ever think of that?
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#3: Apr 3rd 2011 at 2:54:40 PM
Er, why can't the bounty hunter be a magic user as well?
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#4: Apr 3rd 2011 at 7:27:55 PM
Due to fantastic racism. Sorry for not making it clear.
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#5: Apr 3rd 2011 at 7:40:14 PM
Glacia has a good point. I'd run with that.
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The protagonist, Luna finds her best friend, Lily about to get killed by a bounty hunter and buys her time so she can escape, at the cost of her own life. The problem is that Lily is a witch and in the world my story is set witches only need concentration to cast their spells. So how could she do that, exactly? Maybe if I change this for Taking the Bullet?
It's set in an steampunkish time, and both Lily and Luna are in their teens. Luna has some fighting training. I didn't decide which weapon the bounty hunter would use, but considering he's a fairly talented bounty hunter, maybe a gun?
Magic users are victims of fantastic racism. Unless the guy was a mage hunter and hunter of his own kind.
edited 3rd Apr '11 7:29:07 PM by risingdreams