A male gaze has the author focusing on women
— their jiggling breasts, their asses and their sensuous curves. If you want for more depth from the male viewpoint, to make it appeal for the ladies too, I suppose you can add a degree of sensitivity to what they say. A bit of romanticism. I find it dull if this male character is all testosterone-pumping MANLINESS. These dudes are made for action movies.
But you also want to appeal to the men also, and so I would suggest showing what the men do, as truthfully as you can. Remember that men can be as diverse as pencils. Some like pursuing after ladies. Some like video games and cars more than anything else.. (c.f. Crysis
Some have this cold, hardened wall they project, if only because they're so soft on the inside. Trust your imagination.
edited 26th Mar '11 9:45:11 AM by QQQQQ