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keerruhn 90s Pixel Mash-up from Level 10 Since: Jul, 2009
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#1: Mar 14th 2011 at 8:58:57 PM

When I started thinking about my project (an adventure series) I decided on three main characters - A timid hero named Theo, his girlfriend Aria and Mika, the outsider who pushes them out of their status quo and into adventure. However, as I've developed the story I've begun to have problems with the characters. Essentially it's a shonen project and I wanted to play with the archetypes (Theo's the hero who's too timid to act, Mika's the hero who's obssession with her goal often works to her detriment and Aria is the chick with the most common traits of the hero).

As the projects progressed I've realised that Aria hasn't got a real journey in the story. Theo's journey has him slowly growing into a not so typical heroic role. Mika's goal is the backbone of the story and her journey is defined by that. Aria however hasn't progressed much passed being Theo's girlfriend. When I first created the character I wanted her to be the most powerful member of the group and that's a trait I want to keep but I'm having trouble defining her role.

Aria travels alongside Theo because after growing up in an isolated village she has a yearning for adventure. As the story goes on we learn that the village's isolation is related to Aria's birth (they believe that her birth has ensured the village's survival and that if anything were to happen to her the good fortune would be reversed) and agents have been sent from the village to bring her back. At the moment she acts as a kind of middle ground between Theo & Mika, often quelling arguments between the two.

Any advice? I feel like as a character she's going to come off as kind of flat compared to the other two. I'm open to anything at the moment.

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Leradny Since: Jan, 2001
#2: Mar 14th 2011 at 9:58:48 PM

1) Have her decide to go back, willingly, either because she wants to change something about the isolation of her village and keep other people from feeling as stifled as her, or because she's had enough adventure to decide that it was exciting, but not something she felt like living for.

2) At the very least, write a few scenes where she goes off to do something without the other two. They don't need to go into the main story, it's just an exercise to see how she develops as a character.

Ettina Since: Apr, 2009
#3: Mar 15th 2011 at 7:35:05 AM

Well, you could do one of the two things I do to flesh out flat characters:

a) look at what I've had them doing and try to explain it from their perspective, based on their personality

b) take a character idea in search of a plot and see if it fits them

If I'm asking for advice on a story idea, don't tell me it can't be done.
SandJosieph Bigonkers! is Magic from Grand Galloping Galaday Since: Dec, 2009 Relationship Status: Brony
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#4: Mar 15th 2011 at 9:57:32 AM

If you hadn't started already I would have suggested combining the characters of Mika and Aria. The only advice I can offer at the moment is to have her get captured for the rest of the story so she's simply out of the way. That or kill her.

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RalphCrown Short Hair from Next Door to Nowhere Since: Oct, 2010
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#5: Mar 15th 2011 at 12:11:56 PM

One way to flesh out a character is to start looking at things from her viewpoint and then ask questions. Does she want to be the savior of her village? Does she want these powers? If so, why? If not, why not? What lies does she tell herself? What truths does she reveal to her companions? What does she expect to gain from her adventures? What is she willing to lose? How will she change, and what will cause those changes? What will she learn or unlearn?

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SandJosieph Bigonkers! is Magic from Grand Galloping Galaday Since: Dec, 2009 Relationship Status: Brony
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#6: Mar 15th 2011 at 12:15:58 PM

And most importantly, what is her favorite pizza topping!

What? Knowing what kind of pizza your character likes is a great way to build personality.

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keerruhn 90s Pixel Mash-up from Level 10 Since: Jul, 2009
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#7: Mar 18th 2011 at 8:06:57 AM

Thanks a lot for all of the advice, it's come in really handy. I decided to go with the very first suggestion but I'm going to make it last for the majority of the story. I like the idea of the world outside of her village being a lot different than she would've expected and kind of playing with what that does to morale.

Thanks again, you guys are awesome.

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chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#8: Mar 18th 2011 at 10:01:28 AM

[up][up]: Oh, and don't forget your character's perferred type of sleepwear! evil grin

SandJosieph Bigonkers! is Magic from Grand Galloping Galaday Since: Dec, 2009 Relationship Status: Brony
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#9: Mar 18th 2011 at 12:32:46 PM

[up] Like a full suit of armor?

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chihuahua0 Since: Jul, 2010
#10: Mar 18th 2011 at 1:06:49 PM

[up] [lol] You could say that, but someone would most likely take his/her armor off first...unless it's a Clingy Costume.

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