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* HilariousInHindsight: In Chapter 32, Aisa mistakes Jones, Usopp, and Ruatha for Aztec gods. Jones, in particular, is mistaken for Nanahuatzin. Jones, of course, isn’t secretly a sun god. [[spoiler:But as revealed in the Wano arc, Luffy is.]]

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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The battle against Crocodile.
** The Straw Hats getting together with [[spoiler: Sabo, Ace, Marco, Haruta, and Namur]] to [[spoiler: take down Blackbeard on Jaya in a mess of a battle.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Luffy's reaction when he see Jones's One Piece pendant? He decides to take her into his crew: she ''chose'' to bear his flag, so she's ''his'' to help and protect, and he won't let anything or anyone stop him of doing it. Not even Jones herself.
** The entire crossover chapter with ''FanFic/ThisBites''.

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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The battle against Crocodile.
** The Straw Hats getting together with [[spoiler: Sabo, Ace, Marco, Haruta, and Namur]] to [[spoiler: take down Blackbeard on Jaya in a mess of a battle.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming:
SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Luffy's reaction when he see Jones's One Piece pendant? He decides to take her into his crew: she ''chose'' to bear his flag, so she's ''his'' to help and protect, and he won't let anything or anyone stop him of doing it. Not even Jones herself.
** The entire crossover chapter with ''FanFic/ThisBites''.''Fanfic/ThisBites''.



* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: The battle against Crocodile.
** The Straw Hats getting together with [[spoiler:Sabo, Ace, Marco, Haruta, and Namur]] to [[spoiler: take down Blackbeard on Jaya in a mess of a battle.]]



** When Ghin and Toma meet Merry's klabautermann, she tearfully confesses she's nearing her breaking point and isn't sure she can bear her crew to Grand Line's end. So she figured the best she can do is asking the Strawhats to bring a piece of her on their new ship, so to let her coming with them.

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** When Ghin and Toma meet Merry's klabautermann, she tearfully confesses she's nearing her breaking point and isn't sure she can bear her crew to Grand Line's end. So she figured the best she can do is asking the Strawhats to bring a piece of her on their new ship, so to let her coming with them.them.
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** Nami's utter horror when the Strawhats have to pay the toll for Heaven's Gate and don't have enough money even after scraping every beli - this is exactly how she lost her adoptive mother.

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** Nami's utter horror when the Strawhats have to pay the toll for Heaven's Gate and don't have enough money even after scraping every beli - this is exactly how she lost her adoptive mother.mother.
** When Ghin and Toma meet Merry's klabautermann, she tearfully confesses she's nearing her breaking point and isn't sure she can bear her crew to Grand Line's end. So she figured the best she can do is asking the Strawhats to bring a piece of her on their new ship, so to let her coming with them.
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** The subtle hints of ''Merry'''s sentience, like how the ship constantly raises the anchor to be quicker at Drum Island and get Jones the help she needs, or a cord falling on a crewmenber's shoulders in a semblance of a hug.



** Upon being told by Bentham that most people don't usually hurt those they care for, Sanji muses he doesn't actually have any experience with people who don't hurt those they care about - [[BigScrewedUpFamily or those they don't care about, but are supposed to.]]

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** Upon being told by Bentham that most people don't usually hurt those they care for, Sanji muses he doesn't actually have any experience with people who don't hurt those they care about - [[BigScrewedUpFamily or those they don't care about, but are supposed to.]]]]
** Nami's utter horror when the Strawhats have to pay the toll for Heaven's Gate and don't have enough money even after scraping every beli - this is exactly how she lost her adoptive mother.
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*** In Chapter 26, they're bickering while flying. Geier does a barrel roll to tease Drifter, who then casually lets go. Geier merely rolls her eyes and flies down to catxh him 'in a well-preacticed maneuver'.
--> '''Geier:''' One of these days I'm going to just let you fall when you do that.\\

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*** In Chapter 26, they're bickering while flying. Geier does a barrel roll to tease Drifter, who then casually lets go. Geier merely rolls her eyes and flies down to catxh catch him 'in a well-preacticed well-practiced maneuver'.
--> ---> '''Geier:''' One of these days I'm going to just let you fall when you do that.\\
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** Drifter and Geier's relationship with each other. In any section where their conversations are translated, their [[TrueCompanions True Companionship]] shines amazingly bright.
*** In Chapter 26, they're bickering while flying. Geier does a barrel roll to tease Drifter, who then casually lets go. Geier merely rolls her eyes and flies down to catxh him 'in a well-preacticed maneuver'.
--> '''Geier:''' One of these days I'm going to just let you fall when you do that.\\
'''Drifter:''' You won't. You love me too much.\\
'''Geier:''' The gods only know why...
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** The Straw Hats getting together with [[spoiler: Sabo, Ace, Marco, Haruta, and Namur]] to [[spoiler: take down Blackbeard on Jaya in a mess of a battle.]]
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'''Luffy:''' [[spoiler: You're wrong, but that's okay. Everyone's wrong sometimes. [[PlatonicDeclarationOfLove You're mine and I love you, just like I love Chopper or nami or Johnny or Yosaku or Sanji or Jones or Ghin or Zoro or Ruatha or Usopp or Merry.]] Someday you'll get it. But until then...at least come meet everyone with me. ''(gently guides a stunned Robin towards the palace)'']]

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'''Luffy:''' [[spoiler: You're wrong, but that's okay. Everyone's wrong sometimes. [[PlatonicDeclarationOfLove You're mine and I love you, just like I love Chopper or nami Nami or Johnny or Yosaku or Sanji or Jones or Ghin or Zoro or Ruatha or Usopp or Merry.]] Someday you'll get it. But until then...at least come meet everyone with me. ''(gently guides a stunned Robin towards the palace)'']]
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** After the Straw Hats stop Crocodile and Baroque Works, Robin confronts Luffy. She never got to see the Poneglyph, and as everything falls down around her she hits a HeroicBSOD and tries to kill him. ''But'' [[spoiler: Luffy has figured out by Jones' behavior that she's going to be on his crew, so in response he carefully disarms her, gives her a CooldownHug, and claims her as one of his own.]]
--> '''Robin:''' [[spoiler: You said I was yours...you're wrong. I belong to no one.]]\\
'''Luffy:''' [[spoiler: You're wrong, but that's okay. Everyone's wrong sometimes. [[PlatonicDeclarationOfLove You're mine and I love you, just like I love Chopper or nami or Johnny or Yosaku or Sanji or Jones or Ghin or Zoro or Ruatha or Usopp or Merry.]] Someday you'll get it. But until then...at least come meet everyone with me. ''(gently guides a stunned Robin towards the palace)'']]
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** Upon being told by Bentham that usually people don't usually hurt those they care for, Sanji muses he doesn't actually have any experience with people who don't hurt those they care about - [[BigScrewedUpFamily or those they don't care about, but are supposed to.]]

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** Upon being told by Bentham that usually most people don't usually hurt those they care for, Sanji muses he doesn't actually have any experience with people who don't hurt those they care about - [[BigScrewedUpFamily or those they don't care about, but are supposed to.]]
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** Jones' complete and utter ''bafflement'' when the crew is livid with Ace when [[spoiler: his hotheadedness and misunderstanding of the situation leads to him attacking and burning her.]] It takes her several minutes to even understand ''why'' they're angry.

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** Jones' complete and utter ''bafflement'' when the crew is livid with Ace when [[spoiler: his hotheadedness and misunderstanding of the situation leads to him attacking and burning her.]] It takes her several minutes to even understand ''why'' they're angry.angry.
** Upon being told by Bentham that usually people don't usually hurt those they care for, Sanji muses he doesn't actually have any experience with people who don't hurt those they care about - [[BigScrewedUpFamily or those they don't care about, but are supposed to.]]
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** Jones' complete and utter ''bafflement'' when the crew is livid with Ace for [[spoiler: his hotheadedness and misunderstanding of the situation leads to him attacking and burning her.]] It takes her several minutes to even understand ''why'' they're angry.

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** Jones' complete and utter ''bafflement'' when the crew is livid with Ace for when [[spoiler: his hotheadedness and misunderstanding of the situation leads to him attacking and burning her.]] It takes her several minutes to even understand ''why'' they're angry.
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** When Jones almost gets killed by a T-Rex, Luffy is brutally reminded the world is not a nice place, and even if he ''did'' get stronger after Sabo's supposed death, ''it's still not enough to protect his crew''.

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** When Jones almost gets killed by a T-Rex, Luffy is brutally reminded the world is not a nice place, and even if he ''did'' get stronger after Sabo's supposed death, ''it's still not enough to protect his crew''.crew''.
** Jones' complete and utter ''bafflement'' when the crew is livid with Ace for [[spoiler: his hotheadedness and misunderstanding of the situation leads to him attacking and burning her.]] It takes her several minutes to even understand ''why'' they're angry.

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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: When Jones introduces herself as a dimension traveler to the Strawhats, they realistically refuse to believe her. She asks Luffy if he has heard about Ace or Dadan lately. Luffy accepts "mystery worlds" as a thing.
-->'''Nami:''' HOW CAN YOU ACCEPT THAT SO EASILY?!
** Jones's status as a CordonBleughChef. Everyone constantly reminds her that not even ''Luffy'' was able to stand her cooking.
** Her BreakingTheFourthWall as a matter of fact. Johnny and Yosaku outright tell her it's freaky.
** [[BadassGrandpa Garp]] meets the crew in the East Blue while going collect Morgan for his trial. Poor Luffy immediately goes into hiding, fearing the possibility of being kidnapped and made into a marine.
*** After learning Luffy is Garp's grandson, Sabo's brother and ''Dragon's'' son, Usopp freaks out and asks if Luffy is hiding something else, such as his other brother being the Pirate King's secret son.
-->'''Jones:''' No, I haven't told him anything about Ace.
** Also, Luffy claims that Zoro has NoSenseOfDirection because of quantum mechanics - which he calls quantum mechs and associates with ''cola'', of all things.
** Wapol's minion announces a royal decree which forbids the playing of hockey in front of a bunch of rabid Drum natives. '''Big mistake'''.
** When they see "Fire Fist" Ace's bounty poster, Yosaku dismisses the possibility of Whitebeard's subordinate being related to Luffy in spite of the smile and the looks ([[JustifiedTrope because Ace is named ''Portgas'', not ''Monkey'']]). Fast-forward to Nanohana, where Ace introduces himself to the Strawhats as Luffy's older brother, [[BrickJoke and Johnny delivers a]] DopeSlap [[BrickJoke to his partner]].
** Ghin is so CrazyPrepared he anticipated Jones forgetting to buy tuna and yarn for a sea cat and took on himself to buy it.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The battle against Crocodile.

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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Jones's status as a CordonBleughChef. Everyone constantly reminds her that not even ''Luffy'' was able to stand her cooking.

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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: When Jones introduces herself as a dimension traveler to the Strawhats, they realistically refuse to believe her. She asks Luffy if he has heard about Ace or Dadan lately. Luffy accepts "mystery worlds" as a thing.
-->'''Nami:''' HOW CAN YOU ACCEPT THAT SO EASILY?!
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Jones's status as a CordonBleughChef. Everyone constantly reminds her that not even ''Luffy'' was able to stand her cooking.
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*** After learning Luffy is Garp's grandson, Sabo's brother and ''Dragon's'' son, Usopp freaks out and asks if Luffy is hiding something else, such as [[AccidentallyAccurate his other brother being the Pirate King's secret son]].

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*** After learning Luffy is Garp's grandson, Sabo's brother and ''Dragon's'' son, Usopp freaks out and asks if Luffy is hiding something else, such as [[AccidentallyAccurate his other brother being the Pirate King's secret son]].son.
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** [[BilingualBonus For those who understand it]], Chopper and Kureha's [[GratuitousFrench farewell]].

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** [[BilingualBonus For those who understand it]], it]] [[spoiler:([[StatingTheSimpleSolution or pull up a online translater]])]], Chopper and Kureha's [[GratuitousFrench farewell]].

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** [[spoiler: After ten years apart, Sabo finds his brothers back: Luffy in Loguetown, than Ace in Nanohana.]]

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** [[spoiler: After ten years apart, Sabo finds reunites with his brothers back: brothers- Luffy in Loguetown, than then Ace in Nanohana.]]]]
** [[BilingualBonus For those who understand it]], Chopper and Kureha's [[GratuitousFrench farewell]].



** When Jones almost gets killed by a T-rex, Luffy is brutally reminded the world is not a nice place, and even if he ''did'' get stronger after Sabo's supposed death, ''it's still not enough to protect his crew''.

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** When Jones almost gets killed by a T-rex, T-Rex, Luffy is brutally reminded the world is not a nice place, and even if he ''did'' get stronger after Sabo's supposed death, ''it's still not enough to protect his crew''.
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** Wapol's minion announces a royal decree which forbids to play hockey in front of a bunch of rabid Drum natives. '''Big mistake'''.

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** Wapol's minion announces a royal decree which forbids to play the playing of hockey in front of a bunch of rabid Drum natives. '''Big mistake'''.
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** When they see "Fire Fist" Ace's bounty poster, Yosaku dismisses the possibility of Whitebeard's subordinate being related to Luffy in spite of the smile and the looks ([[JustifiedTrope because Ace is named ''Portgas'', not ''Monkey'']]). Fast-forward to Nanohana, where Ace introduces himself to the Strawhats as Luffy's older brother, [[BrickJoke and Johnny delivers a]] DopeSlap [[BrickJoke to his partner]].
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** Luffy does not agree with Jones pulling the MoreExpendableThanYou card and lets her know it, after using a Fist of Love on her.
-->'''Luffy:''' You're not allowed to die - captain's orders. And stop saying you're not important. I don't care what your story says, whether you're ''supposed'' to be here... You ''are'' here, you ''are'' one of us. You ''are'' important - to ''us''. Next time, find a way to save the princess ''and stay alive while doing it''.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Jones's status as a CordonBleughChef. Everyone constantly reminds her that not even ''Luffy'' was able to stand her cooking.
** Her BreakingTheFourthWall as a matter of fact. Johnny and Yosaku outright tell her it's freaky.
** [[BadassGrandpa Garp]] meets the crew in the East Blue while going collect Morgan for his trial. Poor Luffy immediately goes into hiding, fearing the possibility of being kidnapped and made into a marine.
*** After learning Luffy is Garp's grandson, Sabo's brother and ''Dragon's'' son, Usopp freaks out and asks if Luffy is hiding something else, such as [[AccidentallyAccurate his other brother being the Pirate King's secret son]].
-->'''Jones:''' No, I haven't told him anything about Ace.
** Also, Luffy claims that Zoro has NoSenseOfDirection because of quantum mechanics - which he calls quantum mechs and associates with ''cola'', of all things.
** Wapol's minion announces a royal decree which forbids to play hockey in front of a bunch of rabid Drum natives. '''Big mistake'''.
** Ghin is so CrazyPrepared he anticipated Jones forgetting to buy tuna and yarn for a sea cat and took on himself to buy it.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Luffy's reaction when he see Jones's One Piece pendant? He decides to take her into his crew: she ''chose'' to bear his flag, so she's ''his'' to help and protect, and he won't let anything or anyone stop him of doing it. Not even Jones herself.
** The entire crossover chapter with ''FanFic/ThisBites''.
** Ghin singing to calm Laboon.
** After being treated as a real little girl by Jones, Lisa decides to stick with the Strawhats and grows to like them.
** [[spoiler: After ten years apart, Sabo finds his brothers back: Luffy in Loguetown, than Ace in Nanohana.]]
* {{Tearjerker}}: Jones's backstory. It was so bad she was DrivenToSuicide, setting her depart for ''One Piece''.
** When Jones almost gets killed by a T-rex, Luffy is brutally reminded the world is not a nice place, and even if he ''did'' get stronger after Sabo's supposed death, ''it's still not enough to protect his crew''.

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