"You don't believe in monsters...do you?"
Deadtime Stories is a rejected pilot for MTV written by Breehn Burns and Michael Dougherty.
The 8-minute pilot follows a young girl named Ebola, who has just been released from an insane asylum and is allowed home. After talking to her own reflection for a bit, she discovers that the neighbors across the street are abusive to their young daughter. Her parents don't believe her, and send her over with a cookie to say hello and meet the family.
Then things get creepy. Well, creepier
It can be viewed here.
- Abusive Parents: Not only are the neighbors physically abusive and neglectful to their daughter (or are they?), but Ebola's parents are completely dismissive of her own worries, and bring up the fact she was diagnosed as insane in order to demean her further.
- Bedlam House: It's implied Ebola used to be in one of these.
- Black Eyes of Evil: While the “evil” part is a bit ambiguous, the little girl gets these before shifting to her true form.
- Catapult Nightmare: Ebola in the opening, though her reflection says it was a memory, not a nightmare.
- Creepy Child: Smirk. Ebola has shades of this but doesn't quite get there. Also, the little girl across the street.
- Cute Monster Girl: Horribly subverted with the little girl.
- Eerie Pale-Skinned Brunette: Ebola and Smirk
- Foreshadowing: On her way to the neighbors', Ebola runs into Smirk, who's holding a spider. He then releases it, saying that if a wild animal is tied down, they get vicious...
- Giant Spider: The little girl's true form.
- Last Note Nightmare: The pilot closes on a creepy, drawn-out note in the audio, with the sound of a door slamming and giggling at the cut to black.
- Lennon Specs: Ebola wears a pair of these.
- Limited Animation: Many say it doesn't hurt the pilot's quality though, instead adding to the feeling of uneasiness.
- Mind Screw: What would normally be a straight horror story becomes this too, taking Ebola's apparent insanity (and the pilot's last line) into account.
- Oh, Crap: The parents' reaction to seeing Ebola has unchained their daughter. Also Ebola's response to the aftermath.
- Offing the Offspring: According to Smirk, the little girl across the street used to have three sisters.
- Ebola also overhears the parents deciding to "get rid" of their daughter when she comes over.
- Or Was It A Delusion?: After returning home in the end of the pilot, Ebola questions whether what she was was a delusion or not, then asks her reflection if any of it was real.
- Precision F-Strike: Courtesy of Ebola. "Oh shit!"
- Self-Made Orphan: After she's free, the little girl murders and eats her parents.
- The Man in the Mirror Talks Back: Ebola has conversations with her reflection, who tells her never to mention this to her parents or she'll be sent back to the asylum.
- Unfortunate Names: Ebola. Ouch.
- There's also a neighbor boy named Smirk, but it's unknown as to whether that's his real name of not.
- Girl In White: The little girl wears a long white nightgown.