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** [[spoiler: Willa and Luke, when they're together anyway.]]
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* TheChosenOne: Holden is actually called that in-universe by Hidden Sky members.
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* TheChosenOne: Holden is actually called that the Chosen One in-universe by Hidden Sky members.
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** Miss Shoemacher comes off much like [[DarkerAndEdgier an upgraded version of]] [[Film/SupermanTheMovie Eve Tessmacher]].
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** Miss Shoemacher comes off much like [[DarkerAndEdgier an upgraded version of]] version]] of [[Film/SupermanTheMovie Eve Tessmacher]].
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* EyelessFace: The beings in the Realm.
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* EyelessFace: The beings in the Realm.Realm are eyeless.
* GriefInducedSplit: Tom and Diane's marriage became angry after Holden fell comatose. Eleven years later, they finally separated. It's in the twelfth year that Holden wakes up and has to adjust to his parents no longer being together and his now-religious mother dating a pastor.
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* HiddenDepths: Oh, so very much.
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* HiddenDepths: Oh, so very much.HiddenDepths:
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* ImprobablyQuickComaRecovery: Holden recovers from his twelve year long coma in miracle-like fashion (it's even called "phenomenal", in-universe). This is possibly justified due to the superpowers he gains, and is likely meant to hint at the supernatural elements of them and his coma.
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* ImprobablyQuickComaRecovery: Holden recovers from his twelve year long twelve-year-long coma in miracle-like fashion (it's even called "phenomenal", in-universe). This is possibly justified due to the superpowers he gains, and is likely meant to hint at the supernatural elements of them and his coma.
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* TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: Why 'Holden and Jaime' was never going to be a thing.
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* MistakenForAfterlife: How everyone seems to misinterpret the Realm.
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* MistakenForAfterlife: How everyone Everyone seems to misinterpret the Realm.Realm as an afterlife.
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* PowerFloats: When Holden starts to actively use his powers in the real world, this happens.
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* PowerFloats: When Holden starts to actively use his powers in the real world, this happens.he floats.
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* TooDumbToLive: Oh, Holden. [[StealthPun At least you have a reason for lacking real-world experience.]]
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* TooDumbToLive: Oh, Holden. [[StealthPun At Holden at least you have has a reason for lacking real-world experience.]]
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* YourMindMakesItReal: This appears to be the basis of Holden's ture abilities within the Realm.
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* YourMindMakesItReal: This appears to be the basis of Holden's ture true abilities within the Realm.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Holden's dog. We know that he died, but you'd think that there would be more of a mention than [[NotSoDifferent from Churchill]].
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Holden's dog. We know that he died, but you'd think that there would be more of a mention than [[NotSoDifferent from Churchill]].Churchill.
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* AffablyEvil: Almost a prerequisite for being involved with Hollow Sky. Miss Shoemacher, Churchill, Pastor Ian, Frost...
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Hi, Luke!
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* TheAtoner: Jeff seems to be on this path.
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* BadDate: Holden's date with Jaime.
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* BadassPreacher: Pastor Ian seems to be skewed towards this.
* BattleCouple: Holden and [[spoiler: Charlie.]]
* BattleCouple: Holden and [[spoiler: Charlie.]]
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* BenevolentConspiracy: How Hollow Sky sees itself.
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* BigBrotherBully: Jeff was this to Kevin.
* BrainyBrunette: Willa has serious science skills.
* BrainyBrunette: Willa has serious science skills.
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* TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: And how!
* CallingTheOldManOut: Willa, to both Arthur (her grandfather) and Frost (her father).
* CallingTheOldManOut: Willa, to both Arthur (her grandfather) and Frost (her father).
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* CoolCar: Jeff's car.
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* DatingCatwoman: Diane and Pastor Ian. [[TranquilFury Tom is not amused by her choice.]]
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* {{Expy}}: Jeff comes across much like [[Franchise/StarWars Han Solo]].
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* {{Expy}}: {{Expy}}:
** Jeff comes across much like [[Franchise/StarWars Han Solo]].
** Jeff comes across much like [[Franchise/StarWars Han Solo]].
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* FirstGirlWins: Willa [[spoiler: she just doesn't win Holden.]]
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* MoralityChain: Charlie's little sister.
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* RomanticWingman: Charlie comes across as this for Holden.
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* BlackBestFriend: Kevin was one to Holden before his coma, in a literal sense.
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In early January 2017, Freeform announced that they had renewed the show for a second season. The entire first season is available to watch on {{Creator/Hulu}}.
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In early January 2017, Freeform announced that they had renewed the show for a second season. The entire first season is available to watch on {{Creator/Hulu}}. It was canceled after Season 2 in early 2018.
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* CliffHanger: [[spoiler: Season 2 ends on this as the mysterious fake FBI kidnap Willa. As plans for a Season 3 were cancelled, it seems more than likely to remain that way.]]
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* AwesomeByAnalysis: Charlie's coma-induced ability. [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome She was able to stand up against a bad guy because she could tell his assistant's gun was unloaded - simply because of his stance.]]
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* AwesomeByAnalysis: Charlie's coma-induced ability. [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome She was able to stand up against a bad guy because she could tell his assistant's gun was unloaded - simply because of his stance.]]
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* BattleCouple: Holden and [[spoiler: Charlie.]]
** [[spoiler: Willa and Luke, when they're together anyway.]]
** [[spoiler: Willa and Luke, when they're together anyway.]]
* BetterAsFriends: [[spoiler: Willa realizes this about her and Holden at the end of season 2. She and Holden were on the phone agreeing completely and about to part amicably, [[HopeSpot right before she gets kidnapped by the fake FBI]].]]
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* FirstGirlWins: Willa.
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* FirstGirlWins: Willa.Willa [[spoiler: she just doesn't win Holden.]]
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* {{Expy}}: Jeff comes across much like [[StarWars Han Solo]].
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* {{Expy}}: Jeff comes across much like [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars Han Solo]].
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** Miss Shoemacher comes off much like [[DarkerAndEdgier an upgraded version of]] [[SupermanTheMovie Eve Tessmacher]].
** [[{{Heroes}} Churchill is basically Noah Bennett without charm or taste in clothes.]]
** [[{{Heroes}} Churchill is basically Noah Bennett without charm or taste in clothes.]]
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** Miss Shoemacher comes off much like [[DarkerAndEdgier an upgraded version of]] [[SupermanTheMovie [[Film/SupermanTheMovie Eve Tessmacher]].
**[[{{Heroes}} [[Series/{{Heroes}} Churchill is basically Noah Bennett without charm or taste in clothes.]]
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*** Hollow Sky and ''[[HeroesReBorn Renautas]]'' sure do [[RuleOfThree walk a lot alike, talk a lot alike, quack a lot alike...]]
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*** Hollow Sky and ''[[HeroesReBorn ''[[Series/HeroesReBorn Renautas]]'' sure do [[RuleOfThree walk a lot alike, talk a lot alike, quack a lot alike...]]
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* HeroesLoveDogs: Holden really loved his dog. [[InvertedTrope Inverted]] with Churchill, who really seems to love his dog as well.
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* HeroesLoveDogs: Holden really loved his dog. [[InvertedTrope Inverted]] {{Inverted|Trope}} with Churchill, who really seems to love his dog as well.
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: probably the main arc of a Season Two, as Holden's destruction of The Bridge seems to have turned the Realm into a FireAndBrimstoneHell.
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: probably Probably the main arc of a Season Two, as Holden's destruction of The Bridge seems to have turned the Realm into a FireAndBrimstoneHell.
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** Holden himself is very much like [[AvatarTheLastAirbender Aang]].
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** Holden himself is very much like [[AvatarTheLastAirbender [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Aang]].
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* TheirFirstTime: Holden's first time happens with Charlie in a moment of passion. It's possible he'd already had sex with Willa in the Realm, though he doesn't remember it and it's unclear whether this would "count".
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* LifeDrinker: The beings in the Realm appear to feed this way, as Frost ages rapidly when touched by one.
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* VampiricDraining: The beings in the Realm appear to feed this way, as Frost ages rapidly when touched by one.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: While Frost has built up Hidden Sky as a way to prove the existence of life after death and help other people reconnect with dead relatives & loved ones, he's really doing it just to see his deceased wife Celeste again. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard This comes back to bite him hard]]. He also claims to understand the importance of family, having abandoned his daughter.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: While Frost has built up Hidden Sky as a way to prove the existence of life after death and help other people reconnect with dead relatives & loved ones, he's really doing it just to see his deceased wife Celeste again. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard This comes back to bite him hard]]. He also claims to understand the importance of family, having though he'd also abandoned his daughter.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: While Frost has built up Hidden Sky as a way to prove the existence of life after death and help others reconnect with dead relatives & loved ones, he's really doing it just to see his deceased wife Celeste again. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard This comes back to bite him hard]]. He also claims to understand the importance of family, having abandoned his daughter.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: While Frost has built up Hidden Sky as a way to prove the existence of life after death and help others other people reconnect with dead relatives & loved ones, he's really doing it just to see his deceased wife Celeste again. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard This comes back to bite him hard]]. He also claims to understand the importance of family, having abandoned his daughter.
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* Expy: Jeff comes across much like [[StarWars Han Solo]].
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* Expy: {{Expy}}: Jeff comes across much like [[StarWars Han Solo]].
