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* ChekhovsGun: When Thorn and Shimmer pursue Civet after she [[spoiler:floods the city that had taken the place of her beloved forest]], Monkey gives them a single hair from his tail, telling them that when they tell it to change, it will become an unbreakable chain to hold the sorceress. [[spoiler:Thorn puts the hair in soup he makes for Civet, and as soon as it's in her mouth, he activates the spell, leaving Civet in too much pain to fight back.]]
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** Shimmer's dream pearl - a magical artifact that enhances magic powers and creates illusions.
** The blue pebble - an enchanted pebble that holds all the waters of the Inland Sea
** The mist stone - a rock that allows the user to transform into a cloud and back again.
** The blue pebble - an enchanted pebble that holds all the waters of the Inland Sea
** The mist stone - a rock that allows the user to transform into a cloud and back again.
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** Shimmer's dream pearl - a pearl--a magical artifact that enhances magic powers and creates illusions.
** The bluepebble - an pebble--an enchanted pebble that holds all the waters of the Inland Sea
** The miststone - a stone--a rock that allows the user to [[SuperSmoke transform into a cloud and back again.again]].
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: The once-human Civet is over a ''thousand''. That's pretty old, even for a dragon, but she's stuck in the body of a teenager for the rest of her life... or unlife, if you want to get technical.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: The once-human Civet is over a ''thousand''. That's pretty old, even for a dragon, but she's stuck in the body of a teenager for the rest of her life... or life (or unlife, if you want to get technical.technical).
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I Ate What clean up. The trope is when a character eats something, unaware of what they are consuming, and then reacts in disgust after they find out what it is. Misuse will be deleted or moved to another trope when applicable. Administrivia.Zero Context Examples will be removed or commented out depending on the amount of context within the entry. Also, I Ate What is not a character trope.
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* IAteWhat: Thorn persuades Civet into letting him cook a meal for her and he hides one of Monkey's hairs in her bowl of noodles. [[spoiler: And after she eats them, he speaks the magic words that cause the hair to change into an unbreakable chain]].
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not sure that\'s an instance
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* HarmlessLadyDisguise: Subverted. While Shimmer is ''actually'' female, she's not human, and disguises herself as an old woman to appear harmless.
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Together, Shimmer and Thorn travel towards where they believe Civet might be headed, meeting up with the mischievous [[JourneyToTheWest Monkey]], who both hinders and aids them on their quest.
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Together, Shimmer and Thorn travel towards where they believe Civet might be headed, meeting up with the mischievous [[JourneyToTheWest [[Literature/JourneyToTheWest Monkey]], who both hinders and aids them on their quest.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Monkey, who is based off the Monkey King from ''JourneyToTheWest''. He's infamous for being a trickster and causing all sorts of trouble, and initially he drugs both Shimmer and Thorn so they can't interfere with his plans. However, he does end up helping the two in the end, and in subsequent books, joins them in their journey.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Monkey, who is based off the Monkey King from ''JourneyToTheWest''.''Literature/JourneyToTheWest''. He's infamous for being a trickster and causing all sorts of trouble, and initially he drugs both Shimmer and Thorn so they can't interfere with his plans. However, he does end up helping the two in the end, and in subsequent books, joins them in their journey.
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The first book of [[LaurenceYep Laurence Yep's]] ''Literature/DragonSeries'', followed by ''Literature/DragonSteel'', ''Literature/DragonCauldron'' and ''Literature/DragonWar''. It was first published in 1982.
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* [[ABoyAndHisX A Dragon And Her Boy]]: LaurenceYep said that the idea of a dragon and her pet boy stole the show from a story that was originally supposed to be all about Monkey.
* [[ABoyAndHisX A Dragon And Her Boy]]: LaurenceYep said that the idea of a dragon and her pet boy stole the show from a story that was originally supposed to be all about Monkey.
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* [[ABoyAndHisX A Dragon And Her Boy]]: LaurenceYep said that the idea of a dragon and her pet boy stole the show from a story that was originally supposed to be all about Monkey.
* [[ABoyAndHisX A Dragon And Her Boy]]: Creator/LaurenceYep said that the idea of a dragon and her pet boy stole the show from a story that was originally supposed to be all about Monkey.
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* AMythologyIsTrue: Debuting in this book are [[JourneyToTheWest The Monkey King]], The Old Mother of the Waters (Civet), and the King Within the River.
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* AMythologyIsTrue: Debuting in this book are [[JourneyToTheWest [[Literature/JourneyToTheWest The Monkey King]], The Old Mother of the Waters (Civet), and the King Within the River.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Poor Civet. She was [[ArrangedMarriage forced to marry]] the powerfully magical AnthropomorphicPersonification of a river when she was just [[DangerousSixteenthBirthday a teenager]]. Then, the river spirit drowned her and preserved her body at that moment of death for all of eternity and confined her to his palace for a thousand years in a completely loveless marriage. By the time she managed to escape, her former home was completely changed, all the people she knew had died long ago, and she couldn't even recognize the place. At that point she snaps and decides to take revenge.
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* {{Revenant}}: Civet, Technically. She was drowned by the King Within the River, her husband, so that she could join him under the waters. Her body was preserved as it was at that moment for the rest of eternity, and practically all she's done since then is seek vengeance.
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Zero Context Example of a highly misused trope; please check definition at Adorably Precocious Child before re-adding
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It starts off with Shimmer, the [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot exiled dragon princess]] roaming ancient China in the form of an old human woman. She meet the kindhearted kitchen boy, [[CuteShotaroBoy Thorn]], who is mistreated by his caretaker. The two form an unlikely friendship, and after saving his life from an enchanted paper servant, Shimmer decides to take him under her wing.
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It starts off with Shimmer, the [[NinjaPirateZombieRobot exiled dragon princess]] roaming ancient China in the form of an old human woman. She meet the kindhearted kitchen boy, [[CuteShotaroBoy Thorn]], Thorn, who is mistreated by his caretaker. The two form an unlikely friendship, and after saving his life from an enchanted paper servant, Shimmer decides to take him under her wing.
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* [[{{Ptitle4yh5d50x}} I Ate What?]]: Thorn persuades Civet into letting him cook a meal for her and he hides one of Monkey's hairs in her bowl of noodles. [[spoiler: And after she eats them, he speaks the magic words that cause the hair to change into an unbreakable chain]].
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* [[{{Ptitle4yh5d50x}} I Ate What?]]: IAteWhat: Thorn persuades Civet into letting him cook a meal for her and he hides one of Monkey's hairs in her bowl of noodles. [[spoiler: And after she eats them, he speaks the magic words that cause the hair to change into an unbreakable chain]].
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* {{Revenant}: Civet, Technically. She was drowned by the King Within the River, her husband, so that she could join him under the waters. Her body was preserved as it was at that moment for the rest of eternity, and practically all she's done since then is seek vengeance.
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* {{Revenant}: {{Revenant}}: Civet, Technically. She was drowned by the King Within the River, her husband, so that she could join him under the waters. Her body was preserved as it was at that moment for the rest of eternity, and practically all she's done since then is seek vengeance.
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* Revenant: Civet, Technically. She was drowned by the King Within the River, her husband, so that she could join him under the waters. Her body was preserved as it was at that moment for the rest of eternity, and practically all she's done since then is seek vengeance.
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* Revenant: {{Revenant}: Civet, Technically. She was drowned by the King Within the River, her husband, so that she could join him under the waters. Her body was preserved as it was at that moment for the rest of eternity, and practically all she's done since then is seek vengeance.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Civet is over a ''thousand''. That's pretty old, even for a dragon, but she's stuck in the body of a teenager for the rest of her life... or unlife, if you want to get technical.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: The once-human Civet is over a ''thousand''. That's pretty old, even for a dragon, but she's stuck in the body of a teenager for the rest of her life... or unlife, if you want to get technical.
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The first book of [[LaurenceYep Laurence Yep's]] ''Literature/DragonSeries''. It was first published in 1982.
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The first book of [[LaurenceYep Laurence Yep's]] ''Literature/DragonSeries''.''Literature/DragonSeries'', followed by ''Literature/DragonSteel'', ''Literature/DragonCauldron'' and ''Literature/DragonWar''. It was first published in 1982.
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* AMythologyIsTrue: Debuting in this book are [[JourneyToTheWest The Monkey King]], The Old Mother of the Waters (Civet), and the King Within the River.
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* JerkWithAheartOfGold: Monkey, who is based off the Monkey King from ''JourneyToTheWest''. He's infamous for being a trickster and causing all sorts of trouble, and initially he drugs both Shimmer and Thorn so they can't interfere with his plans. However, he does end up helping the two in the end, and in subsequent books, joins them in their journey.
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* JerkWithAheartOfGold: JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Monkey, who is based off the Monkey King from ''JourneyToTheWest''. He's infamous for being a trickster and causing all sorts of trouble, and initially he drugs both Shimmer and Thorn so they can't interfere with his plans. However, he does end up helping the two in the end, and in subsequent books, joins them in their journey.
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* HarmlessLadyDisguise: Subverted. While Shimmer is ''actually'' female, she's not human, and disguises herself as an old woman to appear harmless.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Upon escaping her arranged marriage (after a thousand years, mind you), and seeing her former home completely changed, Civet decides that dragons are responsible, and destroys the Inland Sea where the Inland dragons live.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Upon escaping her arranged marriage (after a thousand years, mind you), and seeing her former home completely changed, had industrialized, Civet is overcome by loss and decides that dragons are responsible, and responsible. She destroys the Inland Sea where the Inland dragons live.live, by taking away all the water, and then uses the water to destroy River Glen, her former village.
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* MarsNeedsWomen: The King Within the River, a river spirit, demands Civet as a bride.
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: The premise of the book was initially an adaptation of the story about the [[JourneyToTheWest Monkey King]] defeating a river spirit. Judging by the final published version, however, Shimmer and Thorn's story is what comes to the forefront instead.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Civet is over a ''thousand''. That's pretty old, even for a dragon, but she's stuck in the body of a teenager for the rest of her life... or unlife, if you want to get technical.
* Revenant: Civet, Technically. She was drowned by the King Within the River, her husband, so that she could join him under the waters. Her body was preserved as it was at that moment for the rest of eternity, and practically all she's done since then is seek vengeance.
* Revenant: Civet, Technically. She was drowned by the King Within the River, her husband, so that she could join him under the waters. Her body was preserved as it was at that moment for the rest of eternity, and practically all she's done since then is seek vengeance.
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* MacGuffin: In addition to the listed MineralMacGuffins, there's also Baldy's Bowl/Cauldron, another artifact that can boil away and hold large amounts of water, similar to Civet's blue pebble, but can be used more than once.
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* MacGuffin: In addition to the listed MineralMacGuffins, [[MineralMacGuffin Mineral Mac Guffins]], there's also Baldy's Bowl/Cauldron, another artifact that can boil away and hold large amounts of water, similar to Civet's blue pebble, but can be used more than once.