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* After the above scene, Electo has Spidey at his mercy and preparing to finishes him off...
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* After the above scene, Electo Electro has Spidey at his mercy and preparing to finishes him off...
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** The sheer [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill amount of cop cars]] chasing after Aleksei in the same scene. It bears more resemblance to Film/TheBluesBrothers than Spider-Man.
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** Even better on a meta level; that was a happy accident on set as, according to the commentary, it wasn't scripted.
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** Even better on a meta level; [[ThrowItIn that was a happy accident on set as, according to the commentary, it wasn't scripted.scripted]].
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''[Gwen [[OhCrap promptly covers her mouth]] in an upon remembering he's trying to keep a secret identity]''
** Even better on a meta level, that was a happy accident on set as, according to the commentary, it wasn't scripted.
** Even better on a meta level, that was a happy accident on set as, according to the commentary, it wasn't scripted.
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''[Gwen [[OhCrap promptly covers her mouth]] in an upon remembering he's trying to keep a secret identity]''
** Even better on a metalevel, level; that was a happy accident on set as, according to the commentary, it wasn't scripted.
** Even better on a meta
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* Felicia Hardy, now going by the name Black Cat, calls Peter on the number he gave Whitney Chang. The way he ends the conversation is hysterical, given the [[FoeYay attitude]] she pulls off.
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* Felicia Hardy, now going by the name Black Cat, calls Peter on the number he gave Whitney Chang. The way he ends the conversation is hysterical, given the [[FoeYay attitude]] attitude she pulls off.
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--->'''May:''' No one washes a flag!\\
'''Peter:''' I do!
'''Peter:''' I do!
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** Peter's general ringtone: [[ThemeTuneCameo an 8-bit rendition of the Spider-Man theme.]]
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** Peter's general ringtone: [[ThemeTuneCameo [[DiegeticSoundtrackUsage an 8-bit rendition of the Spider-Man theme.]]
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'''Gwen:''' ''[hears sirens in the background]''... Are those sirens?\\
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'''Gwen:''' ''[hears sirens in the background]''...background]'' ... Are those sirens?\\
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-->'''Peter:''' I have no time to [[ThatCameOutWrong fool around with you]]--[[VerbalBackspace I-I mean play games with you]].
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-->'''Peter:''' I have no time to [[ThatCameOutWrong fool around with you]]--[[VerbalBackspace I-I mean play games with you]].
you.]]
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* After turning up at the 2011 San Diego Comic Con in a cheap Spider-Man costume and gushing about his love for the character, Andrew Garfield was unfortunately running late to the 2013 panel for the sequel. Thankfully, Spider-Man himself managed to make it instead, [[TheKnightsWhoSaySquee and promptly geeked out upon meeting Jamie Foxx]], but sadly had to leave before Mr Garfield could arrive to meet him. [[SarcasmMode Strange, isn't it?]]
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* After turning up at the 2011 San Diego Comic Con in a cheap Spider-Man costume and gushing about his love for the character, Andrew Garfield was unfortunately running late to the 2013 panel for the sequel. Thankfully, Spider-Man himself managed to make it instead, [[TheKnightsWhoSaySquee and promptly geeked out upon meeting Jamie Foxx]], but sadly had to leave before Mr Mr. Garfield could arrive to meet him. [[SarcasmMode Strange, isn't it?]]
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** In his final showdown with Electro, Electro proclaims that he will [[AGodAmI be worshipped as a god]].
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** In his final showdown with Electro, Electro proclaims that he will [[AGodAmI be worshipped as a god]].god.]]
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--> '''Peter:''' I'm all thumbs today!\\
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* Near the beginning, there is [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PJLShB1Vd2Q a montage]] of Peter repeatedly coming home to take off his suit after a day of crime-fighting. The suit is usually covered in some form of muck, grime or something ridiculous - at one point there is ''[[NoodleIncident feathers]]''.
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* Near the beginning, there is [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PJLShB1Vd2Q a montage]] of Peter repeatedly coming home to take off his suit after a day of crime-fighting. The suit is usually covered in some form of muck, grime or something ridiculous - at one point there is ''[[NoodleIncident feathers]]''.feathers.]]''
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* Spider-Man whistling the 60s Spider-Man theme song during his first fight with Alexsei. While tying him up with webs then ''[[ComedicUnderwearExposure pulling down his pants]]''.
* The scene where Harry and Electro torture Menken, complete with Harry calling Menken his "Fairy Godmother", whistling the Final Series/{{Jeopardy}} "Think" music (possibly unintentional ProductPlacement), Electro interrupting Menken by shocking him to near death, and then restarting his heart with another electric shock, complete with Harry saying "clear", was funny in [[BlackComedy a very twisted way]].
* The scene where Harry and Electro torture Menken, complete with Harry calling Menken his "Fairy Godmother", whistling the Final Series/{{Jeopardy}} "Think" music (possibly unintentional ProductPlacement), Electro interrupting Menken by shocking him to near death, and then restarting his heart with another electric shock, complete with Harry saying "clear", was funny in [[BlackComedy a very twisted way]].
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* Spider-Man whistling the 60s Spider-Man theme song during his first fight with Alexsei. While tying him up with webs then ''[[ComedicUnderwearExposure pulling down his pants]]''.
pants.]]''
* The scene where Harry and Electro torture Menken, complete with Harry calling Menken his "Fairy Godmother", whistling the Final Series/{{Jeopardy}} "Think" music (possibly unintentional ProductPlacement), Electro interrupting Menken by shocking him to near death, and then restarting his heart with another electric shock, complete with Harry saying "clear", was funny in [[BlackComedy a very twistedway]].way.]]
* The scene where Harry and Electro torture Menken, complete with Harry calling Menken his "Fairy Godmother", whistling the Final Series/{{Jeopardy}} "Think" music (possibly unintentional ProductPlacement), Electro interrupting Menken by shocking him to near death, and then restarting his heart with another electric shock, complete with Harry saying "clear", was funny in [[BlackComedy a very twisted
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--->'''Peter:''' Hey I'm-I'm sorry I'm running a bit late and I got stuck in some traffic.\\
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--->'''Peter:''' Hey Hey, I'm-I'm sorry sorry, I'm running a bit late and I got stuck in some traffic.\\
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-->'''Spider-Man:''' A god named [[ChekhovsGag Sparkles?]]
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--->'''Gwen:''' [[DeadpanSnarker I'm sorry, I didn't take us to the]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker Bahamas of hiding places]]''.
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--->'''Gwen:''' [[DeadpanSnarker I'm sorry, I didn't take us to the]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker Bahamas of hiding places]]''.places.]]''
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-->'''Electro''': Bet you never saw this coming?\\
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'''Peter''': ''[as the truck passes by the streets]'' 1st and Broadway. 2nd and Broadway. 3rd and Broadway. Five minutes, ten tops.\\
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'''Peter:''' [{{beat}}] [[BlatantLies No.]]\\
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'''Peter:''' [{{beat}}] ''[{{beat}}]'' [[BlatantLies No.]]\\
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'''Peter''': No.\\
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--> '''Aunt May:''' What happened to your face? It's filthy.\\
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'''Peter:''' [[BlatantLies Oh yeah, I was cleaning the chimney]].\\
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'''Peter:''' [[BlatantLies Oh yeah, I was cleaning the chimney]].\\chimney.]]\\
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** The tone just implies that Peter thinks she's getting absurdly controlling. After all, he was just washing [[BlatantLies his American flag]].
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** The tone just implies that Peter thinks she's getting absurdly controlling. After all, he was just washing [[BlatantLies his American flag]].flag.]]
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''As he walks down the hallway, Peter hops in the air and kicks his heels.''
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* The defeat of Electro in the Times Square showdown...is by Spider-Man in a fireman's helmet spraying him with the hose. Then thanking the other firefighters from the ladder company.
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* The defeat of Electro in the Times Square showdown... is by Spider-Man in a fireman's helmet spraying him with the hose. Then thanking the other firefighters from the ladder company.
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-->'''Electro''': Bet you never saw this coming?
-->''([[BigDamnHeroes Cue Gwen arriving in a police car,]] [[CarFu slamming into Electro and knocking him away from Spider-Man]])''
-->''([[BigDamnHeroes Cue Gwen arriving in a police car,]] [[CarFu slamming into Electro and knocking him away from Spider-Man]])''
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-->'''Electro''': Bet you never saw this coming?
-->''([[BigDamnHeroescoming?\\
''[[[BigDamnHeroes Cue Gwen arriving in a police car,]] [[CarFu slamming into Electro and knocking him away fromSpider-Man]])''Spider-Man]]]''
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-->'''Peter''': Hey I'm..I'm sorry I'm running a bit late and I got stuck in some traffic.
-->'''Gwen''': Your timing is terrible. It started already.
-->'''Peter''': Yeah, I know, I'm sorry.
-->'''Gwen''': Where are you?
-->'''Peter''': ''(As the truck passes by the streets)'' 1st and Broadway. 2nd and Broadway. 3rd and Broadway. Five minutes, Ten tops.
-->'''Gwen''': ''(Hears sirens in the background)''...Are those sirens?
-->'''Peter''': ({{Beat}}) [[BlatantLies No.]]
-->'''Gwen''': ''(stern)'' Peter...
-->'''Peter''': No.
-->'''Gwen''': ''(more stern)'' Peter...
-->'''Peter''': No! No sirens!
-->'''Gwen''': Your timing is terrible. It started already.
-->'''Peter''': Yeah, I know, I'm sorry.
-->'''Gwen''': Where are you?
-->'''Peter''': ''(As the truck passes by the streets)'' 1st and Broadway. 2nd and Broadway. 3rd and Broadway. Five minutes, Ten tops.
-->'''Gwen''': ''(Hears sirens in the background)''...Are those sirens?
-->'''Peter''': ({{Beat}}) [[BlatantLies No.]]
-->'''Gwen''': ''(stern)'' Peter...
-->'''Peter''': No.
-->'''Gwen''': ''(more stern)'' Peter...
-->'''Peter''': No! No sirens!
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-->'''Gwen''':
'''Gwen:''' Your timing is terrible. It started
-->'''Peter''':
'''Peter:''' Yeah, I know, I'm
-->'''Gwen''':
'''Gwen:''' Where are
-->'''Peter''': ''(As
'''Peter''': ''[as the truck passes by the
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'''Gwen:''' ''[hears sirens in the
-->'''Peter''': ({{Beat}})
'''Peter:''' [{{beat}}] [[BlatantLies No.
-->'''Gwen''': ''(stern)'' Peter...
-->'''Peter''': No.
-->'''Gwen''': ''(more stern)'' Peter...
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'''Gwen:''' ''[stern]'' Peter...\\
'''Peter''': No.\\
'''Gwen:''' ''[more stern]'' Peter...\\
'''Peter:''' No! No sirens!
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--> "AM I TALKING LOUDER THAN I USUALLY TALK RIGHT NOW?!"
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* Combined with [=CMoH=], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VflasoWmuoA the audacity]] of Peter to web an "I LOVE YOU" to Gwen on the side of the Brooklyn Bridge.
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* The scene where Peter delays the security guards from reaching Gwen, acting like a complete klutz, before leaving after he knows they didn't catch Gwen, topped off with the end of the sequence.
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* The scene where [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mNUnCTKwS8Q Peter delays the security guards from reaching Gwen, Gwen]], acting like a complete klutz, before leaving after he knows they didn't catch Gwen, topped off with the end of the sequence.
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** Not only that, but while he was klutzing, he tied together one person's shoes, stole another's taser, and flipped a cart on top of the third.
* Peter teasing Gwen over choosing "[[ClosetShuffle the most clichéd hiding place]]" of all time.
* Peter teasing Gwen over choosing "[[ClosetShuffle the most clichéd hiding place]]" of all time.
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** Not only that, but while he was he's klutzing, he tied ties together one person's shoes, stole another's taser, and flipped a cart on top of the third.
* ** Before this, Peter teasing Gwen over choosing "[[ClosetShuffle the most clichéd hiding place]]" of all time.
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* Near the beginning, there is a montage of Peter repeatedly coming home to take off his suit after a day of crime-fighting. The suit is usually covered in some form of muck, grime or something ridiculous - at one point there is ''[[NoodleIncident feathers]]''.
** Then there's the time where Peter inexplicably has an entire dead fish.
*** And then there's him picking up some cold and flu meds for a bad cold, only for the store to be held up by an armed gunmen, who Peter has to deal with after a quick off-screen change, before trying to buy his medication, while still in the costume. Bonus points for his awkward sneeze ''[[{{squick}} inside]]'' his mask.
** Then there's the time where Peter inexplicably has an entire dead fish.
*** And then there's him picking up some cold and flu meds for a bad cold, only for the store to be held up by an armed gunmen, who Peter has to deal with after a quick off-screen change, before trying to buy his medication, while still in the costume. Bonus points for his awkward sneeze ''[[{{squick}} inside]]'' his mask.
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* Near the beginning, there is [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PJLShB1Vd2Q a montage montage]] of Peter repeatedly coming home to take off his suit after a day of crime-fighting. The suit is usually covered in some form of muck, grime or something ridiculous - at one point there is ''[[NoodleIncident feathers]]''.
**Then there's the time where One of those times, Peter inexplicably has [[NoodleImplements an entire dead fish.
***fish]].
** And then there's him picking up some cold and flu meds for a bad cold, only for the store to be held up by an armed gunmen, who Peter has to deal with after a quick off-screen change, before trying to buy his medication, while still in the costume. Bonus points for his awkward sneeze ''[[{{squick}} inside]]'' his mask.
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** And then there's him picking up some cold and flu meds for a bad cold, only for the store to be held up by an armed gunmen, who Peter has to deal with after a quick off-screen change, before trying to buy his medication, while still in the costume. Bonus points for his awkward sneeze ''[[{{squick}} inside]]'' his mask.
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* The scene where Harry and Electro torture Menken, complete with Harry calling Menken his "Fairy Godmother", whistling the tune of Final Series/{{Jeopardy}} (possibly unintentional ProductPlacement), Electro interrupting Menken by shocking him to near death, and then restarting his heart with another electric shock, complete with Harry saying "clear", was funny in [[BlackComedy a very twisted way]].
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* The scene where Harry and Electro torture Menken, complete with Harry calling Menken his "Fairy Godmother", whistling the tune of Final Series/{{Jeopardy}} "Think" music (possibly unintentional ProductPlacement), Electro interrupting Menken by shocking him to near death, and then restarting his heart with another electric shock, complete with Harry saying "clear", was funny in [[BlackComedy a very twisted way]].
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* The whole chase sequence at the beginning, from Spider-Man dealing with the robbers, as mentioned catching all the radioactive canisters while bouncing around the truck, then having to go after one that managed to escape his grasp. He manages to retrieve it, only to be hit by an incoming police truck (complete with GirlyScream) and stuck to the fender.
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* The whole chase sequence at the beginning, from Spider-Man dealing with the robbers, as mentioned catching all the radioactive canisters while bouncing around the truck, then having to go after one that managed to escape his grasp. He manages to retrieve it, only to be hit by an incoming police the ESU truck (complete with GirlyScream) and stuck to the fender.
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* Spider-Man in a fireman's helmet. That is all.
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* The defeat of Electro in the Times Square showdown...is by Spider-Man in a fireman's helmet. That is all.helmet spraying him with the hose. Then thanking the other firefighters from the ladder company.
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* Rhino mocking the kid dressed up as Spider-Man.
-->'''Rhino''': [[IShallTauntYou Look New York! Spider-Man is back!]]
-->'''Rhino''': [[IShallTauntYou Look New York! Spider-Man is back!]]
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-->'''Rhino''': [[IShallTauntYou Look New York! Spider-Man is back!]]
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* Rhino mocking the kid dressed up as Spider-Man.
-->'''Rhino''': [[IShallTauntYou Look New York! Spider-Man is back!]]
-->'''Rhino''': [[IShallTauntYou Look New York! Spider-Man is back!]]
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-->'''Rhino''': [[IShallTauntYou Look New York! Spider-Man is back!]]
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-->'''Gwen:''' [[DeadpanSnarker I'm sorry, I didn't take us to the ''Bahamas of hiding places]]''.
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-->'''Gwen:''' [[DeadpanSnarker I'm sorry, I didn't take us to the ''Bahamas the]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker Bahamas of hiding places]]''.
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* Near the beginning, there is a montage of Peter repeatedly coming home to take off his suit after a day of crime-fighting. The suit is usually covered in some form of muck, grime or something ridiculous - at one point there is]] ''[[NoodleIncident feathers]]''.
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* Near the beginning, there is a montage of Peter repeatedly coming home to take off his suit after a day of crime-fighting. The suit is usually covered in some form of muck, grime or something ridiculous - at one point there is]] is ''[[NoodleIncident feathers]]''.
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-->'''Gwen:''' [[DeadpanSnarker I'm sorry, I didn't take us to the ''Bahamas of hiding places.]]''
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-->'''Gwen:''' [[DeadpanSnarker I'm sorry, I didn't take us to the ''Bahamas of hiding places.]]''places]]''.
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* Near the beginning, there is a montage of Peter repeatedly coming home to take off his suit after a day of crime-fighting. The suit is usually covered in some form of muck, grime or something ridiculous - [[NoodleIncident at one point there is]] ''[[NoodleIncident feathers]]''.
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* Near the beginning, there is a montage of Peter repeatedly coming home to take off his suit after a day of crime-fighting. The suit is usually covered in some form of muck, grime or something ridiculous - [[NoodleIncident at one point there is]] ''[[NoodleIncident feathers]]''.
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* The scene where Harry and Electro torture Menken, complete with Harry calling Menken his "Fairy Godmother", humming the tune of Final Series/{{Jeopardy}} (possibly unintentional ProductPlacement), Electro interrupting Menken by shocking him to near death, and then restarting his heart with another electric shock, complete with Harry saying "clear", was funny in [[BlackComedy a very twisted way]].
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* The scene where Harry and Electro torture Menken, complete with Harry calling Menken his "Fairy Godmother", humming whistling the tune of Final Series/{{Jeopardy}} (possibly unintentional ProductPlacement), Electro interrupting Menken by shocking him to near death, and then restarting his heart with another electric shock, complete with Harry saying "clear", was funny in [[BlackComedy a very twisted way]].
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--> '''Aunt May:''' What happened to your face, it's filthy.\\
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--> '''Aunt May:''' What happened to your face, it's face? It's filthy.\\
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'''Peter:''' [[BlatantLies Y'know, I was cleaning the chimney]].\\
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'''Peter:''' [[BlatantLies Y'know, Oh yeah, I was cleaning the chimney]].\\
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-->'''Gwen:''' [[DeadpanSnarker I'm sorry I didn't take us to the ''Bahamas of hiding places.]]''
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-->'''Gwen:''' [[DeadpanSnarker I'm sorry sorry, I didn't take us to the ''Bahamas of hiding places.]]''
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''[Gwen [[OhCrap promptly [[OhCrap covers her mouth]] in an upon remembering he's trying to keep a secret identity]''
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''[Gwen promptly [[OhCrap covers her mouth mouth]] in an upon remembering he's trying to keep a secret identity]]''identity]''
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''[Gwen promptly [[OhCrap]] [[OhCrap covers her mouth in an upon remembering he's trying to keep a secret identity]''identity]]''
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''[Gwen [[OhCrap promptly [[OhCrap]] covers her mouth in an upon remembering he's trying to keep a secret identity]''