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ZCE comment-outs.
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''Da ivy cuvrd wals uv higwsrts'', also known as ''de iby covred wallss of hpgwarts'', also known as ''[[SpellMyNameWithAnS TE OVY COVEERED WALLLS OV [=HOGWrts=]]]'', or, more correctly, ''The Ivy-Covered Walls of Hogwarts'', is a Literature/HarryPotter fanfic by [=SallyAnne=] Avery, which features [[RougeAnglesOfSatin horrible spelling and grammar.]] It is about [[OverlyLongName Ivy Caroline Celestia Allison Marissa Claire Bieber]], a 15-year-old girl who transfers to Hogwarts, gets sorted in Gryffindor, and becomes Harry's girlfriend.
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''Da ivy cuvrd wals uv higwsrts'', also known as ''de iby covred wallss of hpgwarts'', also known as ''[[SpellMyNameWithAnS TE OVY COVEERED WALLLS OV [=HOGWrts=]]]'', or, more correctly, ''The Ivy-Covered Walls of Hogwarts'', is a Literature/HarryPotter ''Literature/HarryPotter'' fanfic by [=SallyAnne=] Avery, which features [[RougeAnglesOfSatin horrible spelling and grammar.]] It is about [[OverlyLongName Ivy Caroline Celestia Allison Marissa Claire Bieber]], a 15-year-old girl who transfers to Hogwarts, gets sorted in Gryffindor, and becomes Harry's girlfriend.
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* AlphaBitch: Ivy.
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* AuthorAvatar: Ivy.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Oh God, yes.
* SelfInsert: Ivy.
* SelfInsert: Ivy.
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* StatuesqueStunner: Ivy.
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* TheXOfY: The Ivy-Covered Walls of Hogwarts.
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* TheXOfY: The Ivy-Covered Walls '''Ivy-Covered Walls''' of Hogwarts.
'''Hogwarts'''.
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Doesn't establish that big breasts are preferred by the characters.
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* BuxomIsBetter: Ivy is said to have big breasts.
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Shes Got Legs is currently a disambiguation
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* ShesGotLegs: Ivy has long legs.
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* AuthorAppeal: The fanfic has the heroine last name as [[Music/JustinBieber Bieber]], fashion brands such as Abercrombie and American Eagle Outfitters, and the heroine getting paired with [[TheHero Harry Potter.]]
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* AuthorAppeal: The fanfic has the heroine heroine's last name as [[Music/JustinBieber Bieber]], fashion brands such as Abercrombie and American Eagle Outfitters, and the heroine getting paired with [[TheHero Harry Potter.]]
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Compare ''FanFic/OneLessLonelyGurl'', which is the WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants equivalent, with superior spelling and an insane sci-fi plot intertwined with the same preppiness of this fanfic. Compare and contrast ''FanFic/MyImmortal'', ''FanFic/JoBekkeAtHugwrts'', and ''FanFic/ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen.''
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Compare ''FanFic/OneLessLonelyGurl'', which is the WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants ''WesternAnimation/SpongeBobSquarePants'' equivalent, with superior spelling and an insane sci-fi plot intertwined with the same preppiness of this fanfic. Compare and contrast ''FanFic/MyImmortal'', ''FanFic/JoBekkeAtHugwrts'', and ''FanFic/ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen.''
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* CostumePorn: The fanfic describes all the clothes that they are wearing, so much like a preppy version of My Immortal. Ivy even mentions the brand of [[TooMuchInformation underwear]] that she wears.
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* CostumePorn: The fanfic describes all the clothes that they are wearing, so much like a preppy version of My Immortal.''My Immortal''. Ivy even mentions the brand of [[TooMuchInformation underwear]] that she wears.
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* DarkSkinnedBlonde: Ivy
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* RapunzelHair: Ivy has hair that goes until her knees.
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* AuthorAppeal: The fanfic has the MarySue's last name as [[Music/JustinBieber Bieber]], fashion brands such as Abercrombie and American Eagle Outfitters, and the MarySue getting paired with [[TheHero Harry Potter.]]
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* AuthorAppeal: The fanfic has the MarySue's heroine last name as [[Music/JustinBieber Bieber]], fashion brands such as Abercrombie and American Eagle Outfitters, and the MarySue heroine getting paired with [[TheHero Harry Potter.]]
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* OverlyLongName: The MarySue has five middle names.
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* OverlyLongName: The MarySue heroine has five middle names.
