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* AllThereInTheManual: the "extras" chapter includes in-depth explanations for the symbolism.
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* AllThereInTheManual: the The "extras" chapter includes in-depth explanations for the symbolism.
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* BattleAmongstTheFlames: Itachi's use of Amaterasu turns his confrontation with Sasuke into this.
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Justified in the case of Sasuke, as his ([[EyeScream horr]][[ColdBloodedTorture ific]]) injuries were healed so as to not leave scars.
** simultaneously justified and partially averted with [[spoiler:Itachi]]; the HealingFactor makes it not scar, although it doesn't restore [[spoiler:his vision or his fingers]], and years later the person is noted to be quite attractive regardless
* BetaCouple: Naruto and Hinata.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Kanaye, Sakura's older brother.
** simultaneously justified and partially averted with [[spoiler:Itachi]]; the HealingFactor makes it not scar, although it doesn't restore [[spoiler:his vision or his fingers]], and years later the person is noted to be quite attractive regardless
* BetaCouple: Naruto and Hinata.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Kanaye, Sakura's older brother.
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Justified in the case of Sasuke, as his ([[EyeScream horr]][[ColdBloodedTorture ific]]) injuries were healed so as to not leave scars.
** simultaneouslyscars. Simultaneously justified and partially averted with [[spoiler:Itachi]]; the HealingFactor makes it not scar, although it doesn't restore [[spoiler:his vision or his fingers]], and years later the person is noted to be quite attractive regardless
*regardless.
%%* BetaCouple: Naruto and Hinata.
* %%* BigBrotherInstinct: Kanaye, Sakura's older brother.
** simultaneously
*
%%* BetaCouple: Naruto and Hinata.
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* BlindfoldedVision: Sasuke can pull this off with [[spoiler:his chakra senses]].
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: Sasuke and Sakura, at first.
* CareerEndingInjury:
** Denied by Sasuke, who works to function as a ninja despite losing his sight.
** Invoked for [[spoiler:Itachi]].
* CareerEndingInjury:
** Denied by Sasuke, who works to function as a ninja despite losing his sight.
** Invoked for [[spoiler:Itachi]].
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*
**
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* CharacterDevelopment: Oh so, so very much for Sasuke; Sakura too, to a lesser extent.
* ChekhovsGun: Partial genjutsu; Sasuke's father's kunai.
* ChekhovsGun: Partial genjutsu; Sasuke's father's kunai.
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* DeathSeeker: Itachi, subconsciously.
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* EyeScream: only two instances, but they are both plot-vital and ''seriously'' cringe-inducing
* FinalBossPreview: the mid-story encounter with Itachi could be seen as this
* {{Fingore}}: can't form seals if you don't have any fingers on one hand, after all
* FirstSnow: almost kills Nariko
* FlashbackNightmare: Sasuke suffers regularly from these
* FinalBossPreview: the mid-story encounter with Itachi could be seen as this
* {{Fingore}}: can't form seals if you don't have any fingers on one hand, after all
* FirstSnow: almost kills Nariko
* FlashbackNightmare: Sasuke suffers regularly from these
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*
%%* FinalBossPreview:
*
%%* {{Fingore}}: can't form seals if you don't have any fingers on one hand, after
*
%%* FirstSnow:
*
%%* FlashbackNightmare: Sasuke suffers regularly from
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* FriendOrIdolDecision: invoked in [[spoiler:the [[LotusEaterMachine "interview"]] for the Chuunin Exam]]
* FriendsWithBenefits: Konan and Deidara; she and Itachi are just "benefits"
* FriendsWithBenefits: Konan and Deidara; she and Itachi are just "benefits"
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* FriendOrIdolDecision: invoked Invoked in [[spoiler:the [[LotusEaterMachine "interview"]] for the Chuunin Exam]]
Exam]].
* FriendsWithBenefits: Konan and Deidara; she and Itachi are just"benefits""benefits".
* FriendsWithBenefits: Konan and Deidara; she and Itachi are just
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* GirlsLoveChocolate: Ino brings chocolate bars to cheer Sakura up
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* GirlsLoveChocolate: Ino brings chocolate bars to cheer Sakura upup.
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%%* GoodAllAlong ((near the end))
* GratuitousJapanese: it gets better after a few chapters though
* GroinAttack: Sakura to a Sound ninja
--> "You forgot that girls fight dirty."
* GratuitousJapanese: it gets better after a few chapters though
* GroinAttack: Sakura to a Sound ninja
--> "You forgot that girls fight dirty."
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%%* GoodAllAlong ((near the end))
*GoodAllAlong
%%* GratuitousJapanese:it It gets better after a few chapters though
*though.
%%* GroinAttack: Sakura to a Soundninja
--> "Youninja.
%%-->"You forgot that girls fight dirty."
*
%%* GratuitousJapanese:
*
%%* GroinAttack: Sakura to a Sound
--> "You
%%-->"You forgot that girls fight dirty."
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* HandicappedBadass: Sasuke, full stop. [[spoiler:Itachi]] in the sequel.
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* HealingFactor: the jinchuuriki, as in canon; this gets invoked to save a character's life
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Nariko]] saves [[spoiler:Itachi]] by [[spoiler: giving him her bijuu, knowing that it will kill her]]
* HidingTheHandicap: very rarely done by Sasuke, when he [[spoiler: encounters a bartender who knew him when he was still with Orochimaru]]
* HollywoodHealing: averted; [[HealingHands medical jutsu]] is not a simple cure-all
* HopeIsScary: why Sasuke doesn't want to think about his sight coming back, and Sakura doesn't want to imagine that he might love her
* HowManyFingers: Kanaye does this after Sasuke explains [[spoiler:how his chakra sense works]]; of course, the last corrrect answer is "[[FlippingTheBird one]]"
* IAmNotLeftHanded: [[spoiler:sorry Itachi, Sasuke isn't actually blind any more]]
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Sasuke and Sakura both experience this, even if not in so many words
* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: Sasuke gets this from both Naruto and Kanaye
* ImprobableAge: downplayed; at 17, Sakura is the youngest medic to graduate since the program started
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Nariko]] saves [[spoiler:Itachi]] by [[spoiler: giving him her bijuu, knowing that it will kill her]]
* HidingTheHandicap: very rarely done by Sasuke, when he [[spoiler: encounters a bartender who knew him when he was still with Orochimaru]]
* HollywoodHealing: averted; [[HealingHands medical jutsu]] is not a simple cure-all
* HopeIsScary: why Sasuke doesn't want to think about his sight coming back, and Sakura doesn't want to imagine that he might love her
* HowManyFingers: Kanaye does this after Sasuke explains [[spoiler:how his chakra sense works]]; of course, the last corrrect answer is "[[FlippingTheBird one]]"
* IAmNotLeftHanded: [[spoiler:sorry Itachi, Sasuke isn't actually blind any more]]
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Sasuke and Sakura both experience this, even if not in so many words
* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: Sasuke gets this from both Naruto and Kanaye
* ImprobableAge: downplayed; at 17, Sakura is the youngest medic to graduate since the program started
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* HealingFactor: the The jinchuuriki, as in canon; this gets invoked to save a character's life
life.
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Nariko]] saves [[spoiler:Itachi]] by [[spoiler: giving him her bijuu, knowing that it will killher]]
her]].
* HidingTheHandicap:very Very rarely done by Sasuke, when he [[spoiler: encounters a bartender who knew him when he was still with Orochimaru]]
* HollywoodHealing: averted; [[HealingHands medical jutsu]] is not a simple cure-all
Orochimaru]].
* HopeIsScary:why Why Sasuke doesn't want to think about his sight coming back, and Sakura doesn't want to imagine that he might love her
her.
* HowManyFingers: Kanaye does this after Sasuke explains [[spoiler:how his chakra sense works]]; of course, the last corrrect answer is "[[FlippingTheBirdone]]"
*one]]".
%%* IAmNotLeftHanded:[[spoiler:sorry [[spoiler:Sorry Itachi, Sasuke isn't actually blind any more]]
*more]].
%%* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Sasuke and Sakura both experience this, even if not in so manywords
*words.
%%* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: Sasuke gets this from both Naruto andKanaye
Kanaye.
* ImprobableAge:downplayed; Downplayed; at 17, Sakura is the youngest medic to graduate since the program startedstarted.
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Nariko]] saves [[spoiler:Itachi]] by [[spoiler: giving him her bijuu, knowing that it will kill
* HidingTheHandicap:
* HollywoodHealing: averted; [[HealingHands medical jutsu]] is not a simple cure-all
* HopeIsScary:
* HowManyFingers: Kanaye does this after Sasuke explains [[spoiler:how his chakra sense works]]; of course, the last corrrect answer is "[[FlippingTheBird
*
%%* IAmNotLeftHanded:
*
%%* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Sasuke and Sakura both experience this, even if not in so many
*
%%* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: Sasuke gets this from both Naruto and
* ImprobableAge:
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* IronicEcho: "Then go ahead and hate me, go ahead and despise me."
* {{Irony}}: lots of it, most explained in the "extras" chapter
* JustToyingWithThem: Sasuke vs Konohamaru in [[spoiler:the chuunin exam tournament]], because he wanted to show everyone what he was capable of
%% TheKlutz: (starts 54)
* LapPillow: the position they're in for Sasuke's healing sessions
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Sasuke's mind was wiped of any "important" details about Sound before being left for dead
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall:
--> '''Sakura''': Naruto, please. If this was a novel, I can see almost everything that comes out of your mouth ending in a question mark followed by an exclamation mark.
* LeftForDead: a variant, as Orochimaru wasn't actually ''trying'' to kill Sasuke, he just didn't care whether he lived or died
* LifeOrLimbDecision: if you count "eyes" as a limb and GrandTheftMe as "death"
* LoveEpiphany: it takes a ''long'' time for Sasuke to realize he loves Sakura, but it finally happens [[spoiler:at her birthday party]]
%% * LoveInformant ((early, about Hinata))
* {{Irony}}: lots of it, most explained in the "extras" chapter
* JustToyingWithThem: Sasuke vs Konohamaru in [[spoiler:the chuunin exam tournament]], because he wanted to show everyone what he was capable of
%% TheKlutz: (starts 54)
* LapPillow: the position they're in for Sasuke's healing sessions
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Sasuke's mind was wiped of any "important" details about Sound before being left for dead
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall:
--> '''Sakura''': Naruto, please. If this was a novel, I can see almost everything that comes out of your mouth ending in a question mark followed by an exclamation mark.
* LeftForDead: a variant, as Orochimaru wasn't actually ''trying'' to kill Sasuke, he just didn't care whether he lived or died
* LifeOrLimbDecision: if you count "eyes" as a limb and GrandTheftMe as "death"
* LoveEpiphany: it takes a ''long'' time for Sasuke to realize he loves Sakura, but it finally happens [[spoiler:at her birthday party]]
%% * LoveInformant ((early, about Hinata))
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* JustToyingWithThem: Sasuke vs Konohamaru in [[spoiler:the chuunin exam tournament]], because he wanted to show everyone what he was capable
%%
*
%%* LapPillow:
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Sasuke's mind was wiped of any "important" details about Sound before being left for
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall:
--> '''Sakura''':
%%* LeaningOnTheFourthWall:%%Quotes are not context.
%%-->'''Sakura''': Naruto, please. If this was a novel, I can see almost everything that comes out of your mouth ending in a question mark followed by an exclamation mark.
* LeftForDead:
*
%%* LifeOrLimbDecision:
* LoveEpiphany:
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* MillionToOneChance: four percent, actually. [[spoiler:It happens.]]
* MiseryPoker: Sakura does this to herself, trying to put things into "perspective", after hearing that [[spoiler:her father is mission in action]]
* MiseryPoker: Sakura does this to herself, trying to put things into "perspective", after hearing that [[spoiler:her father is mission in action]]
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* MiseryPoker: Sakura does this to herself, trying to put things into "perspective", after hearing that [[spoiler:her father is mission in
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* MoodWhiplash: on the journey back from [[spoiler:Kumogakure]], nice light team bonding; then all of a sudden Itachi
* MoralityPet: Nariko eventually becomes this to Itachi
* MovingTheGoalposts: when Sakura will move out of Sasuke's house
* NeverSayDie: played with: after a certain point, Sasuke resolves to "eliminate" Itachi; [[spoiler:he has a [[EyeScream different fate]] in mind for his brother, although we don't find out until later.]]
* TheNicknamer: Konan, and Kanaye
* NightmareSequence: in a departure from the [[FlashbackNightmare standard fare]], in chapter 35 we get to see what happens when Sasuke's growing care for Sakura combines with his... other issues
%% * NoMedicationForMe: averted; ((does she stay on it?))
* NoNameGiven: Sakura's mother
* NoPeriodsPeriod: averted; aside from [[NoSocialSkills Sai]] making a comment about somebody's menstrual cycle, Sasuke knows what brand of feminine hygiene products Sakura prefers
%%* ObfuscatingDisability ((near end))
* ObliviousToLove: Sasuke doesn't even register his ''own'' attraction to Sakura
* OfficialCouple: Sasuke and Sakura
* MoralityPet: Nariko eventually becomes this to Itachi
* MovingTheGoalposts: when Sakura will move out of Sasuke's house
* NeverSayDie: played with: after a certain point, Sasuke resolves to "eliminate" Itachi; [[spoiler:he has a [[EyeScream different fate]] in mind for his brother, although we don't find out until later.]]
* TheNicknamer: Konan, and Kanaye
* NightmareSequence: in a departure from the [[FlashbackNightmare standard fare]], in chapter 35 we get to see what happens when Sasuke's growing care for Sakura combines with his... other issues
%% * NoMedicationForMe: averted; ((does she stay on it?))
* NoNameGiven: Sakura's mother
* NoPeriodsPeriod: averted; aside from [[NoSocialSkills Sai]] making a comment about somebody's menstrual cycle, Sasuke knows what brand of feminine hygiene products Sakura prefers
%%* ObfuscatingDisability ((near end))
* ObliviousToLove: Sasuke doesn't even register his ''own'' attraction to Sakura
* OfficialCouple: Sasuke and Sakura
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*
%%* MoralityPet: Nariko eventually becomes this to
*
%%* MovingTheGoalposts:
* NeverSayDie:
*
%%* TheNicknamer:
* NightmareSequence:
%% * NoMedicationForMe: averted; ((does she stay on it?))
*
%%* NoNameGiven: Sakura's mother
*
%%* ObliviousToLove: Sasuke doesn't even register his ''own'' attraction to
*
%%* OfficialCouple: Sasuke and
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: it's a bad sign any time Naruto starts thinking about what he's saying
* OriginalCharacter: Sakura's family; Nariko the six-tails jinchuuriki.
* OutdoorBathPeeping: Sasuke accidentally walks in on Sakura bathing in a river; thankfully they're both reasonable about it, and he couldn't see her anyways
* TheParalyzer: lightning chakra is useful for this, and [[spoiler:immobilizes Itachi while he's being "dealt with"]]
* PersonalEffectsReveal: a variation in that Itachi isn't dead, but still won't be coming back to his former home; nothing in any of his belongings suggests the person who killed his entire clan
* PowerCopying: Subverted; when copying fighting styles, Sasuke had also copied the users' mistakes, and has to unlearn them to improve
* PowerStrainBlackout: if Sakura overexerts herself from healing when she's already tired
* RealMenHateSugar: Sasuke only hates sweet things because they remind him of relatives who died in the massacre
* RestrainedRevenge: [[spoiler:Sasuke [[CruelMercy doesn't kill]] Itachi]]
* OriginalCharacter: Sakura's family; Nariko the six-tails jinchuuriki.
* OutdoorBathPeeping: Sasuke accidentally walks in on Sakura bathing in a river; thankfully they're both reasonable about it, and he couldn't see her anyways
* TheParalyzer: lightning chakra is useful for this, and [[spoiler:immobilizes Itachi while he's being "dealt with"]]
* PersonalEffectsReveal: a variation in that Itachi isn't dead, but still won't be coming back to his former home; nothing in any of his belongings suggests the person who killed his entire clan
* PowerCopying: Subverted; when copying fighting styles, Sasuke had also copied the users' mistakes, and has to unlearn them to improve
* PowerStrainBlackout: if Sakura overexerts herself from healing when she's already tired
* RealMenHateSugar: Sasuke only hates sweet things because they remind him of relatives who died in the massacre
* RestrainedRevenge: [[spoiler:Sasuke [[CruelMercy doesn't kill]] Itachi]]
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: it's It's a bad sign any time Naruto starts thinking about what he's saying
*saying.
%%* OriginalCharacter: Sakura's family; Nariko the six-tails jinchuuriki.
* OutdoorBathPeeping: Sasuke accidentally walks in on Sakura bathing in a river; thankfully they're both reasonable about it, and he couldn't see heranyways
anyways.
* TheParalyzer:lightning Lightning chakra is useful for this, and [[spoiler:immobilizes Itachi while he's being "dealt with"]]
with"]].
* PersonalEffectsReveal:a A variation in that Itachi isn't dead, but still won't be coming back to his former home; nothing in any of his belongings suggests the person who killed his entire clan
clan.
* PowerCopying: Subverted; when copying fighting styles, Sasuke had also copied the users' mistakes, and has to unlearn them toimprove
improve.
* PowerStrainBlackout:if If Sakura overexerts herself from healing when she's already tired
tired.
* RealMenHateSugar: Sasuke only hates sweet things because they remind him of relatives who died in themassacre
massacre.
* RestrainedRevenge: [[spoiler:Sasuke [[CruelMercy doesn't kill]]Itachi]]Itachi]].
*
%%* OriginalCharacter: Sakura's family; Nariko the six-tails jinchuuriki.
* OutdoorBathPeeping: Sasuke accidentally walks in on Sakura bathing in a river; thankfully they're both reasonable about it, and he couldn't see her
* TheParalyzer:
* PersonalEffectsReveal:
* PowerCopying: Subverted; when copying fighting styles, Sasuke had also copied the users' mistakes, and has to unlearn them to
* PowerStrainBlackout:
* RealMenHateSugar: Sasuke only hates sweet things because they remind him of relatives who died in the
* RestrainedRevenge: [[spoiler:Sasuke [[CruelMercy doesn't kill]]
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* RuleOfSymbolism: oh so much! To say that the last chapter is wholly dedicated to explaining the symbolism used throughout the story.
* SecretTestOfCharacter: only to be expected with [[spoiler:the Chuunin Exam]]
* SecretTestOfCharacter: only to be expected with [[spoiler:the Chuunin Exam]]
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* RuleOfSymbolism: oh so much! To say that the last chapter is wholly dedicated to explaining the symbolism used throughout the story.
* %%* SecretTestOfCharacter: only Only to be expected with [[spoiler:the Chuunin Exam]]Exam]].
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* SensorCharacter: Sasuke develops into this
* SharingABody: how the author writes Tobi; Uchiha Madara's soul was attached to that brain-damaged body but can't always control it because of the damage
* SharingABody: how the author writes Tobi; Uchiha Madara's soul was attached to that brain-damaged body but can't always control it because of the damage
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* SharingABody:
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* ShoutOut: the Raikage's introduction, to that of King Bradley from Manga/FullmetalAlchemist
* SingleTargetSexuality: Sakura for Sasuke
* SingleTargetSexuality: Sakura for Sasuke
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*
%%* SingleTargetSexuality: Sakura for
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Everybody who died in canon after the divergence point of the story, [[spoiler:including Itachi]].
* StepfordSmiler: Sakura when depressed
* SurvivalMantra: "kai" for Sasuke, while trying to escape genjutsu
* TakeOffYourClothes: Sakura to Sasuke, when they're both soaked and cold after a battle
* TapOnTheHead: literally; works well if it's used to apply genjutsu directly to the brain
* StepfordSmiler: Sakura when depressed
* SurvivalMantra: "kai" for Sasuke, while trying to escape genjutsu
* TakeOffYourClothes: Sakura to Sasuke, when they're both soaked and cold after a battle
* TapOnTheHead: literally; works well if it's used to apply genjutsu directly to the brain
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%%* SurvivalMantra:
*
%%* TakeOffYourClothes: Sakura to Sasuke, when they're both soaked and cold after a
*
%%* TapOnTheHead:
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* ThrowingOffTheDisability: averted. [[spoiler:Sasuke's sight recovers gradually, and only after intense effort on Sakura's part]]
* TitleDrop: common with chapter titles
* TokenGoodTeammate: Nariko really does not belong with the Akatsuki
* TitleDrop: common with chapter titles
* TokenGoodTeammate: Nariko really does not belong with the Akatsuki
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*
%%* TokenGoodTeammate: Nariko really does not belong with the
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Sakura and Ino
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* WhatDidIDoLastNight: preemptively denied by Sasuke
--> It was then that he swore that even when he was the legal age to be drinking, he would never do so, because [[LaserGuidedAmnesia losing your memory]] ''against'' your will was bad enough.
* WhatDoesSheSeeInHim: why would a talented medic care for someone who betrayed the village?
* WildChild: Nariko; she had essentially no human interaction from the time the bijuu was put in her as a little girl, to when Itachi "rescued" her
--> It was then that he swore that even when he was the legal age to be drinking, he would never do so, because [[LaserGuidedAmnesia losing your memory]] ''against'' your will was bad enough.
* WhatDoesSheSeeInHim: why would a talented medic care for someone who betrayed the village?
* WildChild: Nariko; she had essentially no human interaction from the time the bijuu was put in her as a little girl, to when Itachi "rescued" her
to:
--> It
-->''It was then that he swore that even when he was the legal age to be drinking, he would never do so, because [[LaserGuidedAmnesia losing your memory]] ''against'' your will was bad
* WhatDoesSheSeeInHim:
* WildChild: Nariko; she had essentially no human interaction from the time the bijuu was put in her as a little girl, to when Itachi "rescued"
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* YourDaysAreNumbered: Nariko doesn't know it yet, but she's going to die once her body is strong enough
to:
* YourDaysAreNumbered: Nariko doesn't know it yet, but she's going to die once her body is strong enoughenough.
----
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** DisabledLoveInterest: Of course Sasuke.
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Nariko.
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* OverprotectiveDad: Sakura's father
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* InnocentCohabitation: Sakura moves in with Sasuke to help his rehabilitation
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* OriginalCharacter: Sakura's family; Nariko the [[{{Jossed}} six-tails jinchuuriki]]
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* OriginalCharacter: Sakura's family; Nariko the [[{{Jossed}} six-tails jinchuuriki]]jinchuuriki.
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* OutdatedByCanon: given the date of writing, it was inevitable; the most notable (and spoiler-free) include the gender and identity of the six- and seven-tails jinchuuriki
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: pretty much everybody who died in canon after the divergence point of the story, [[spoiler:including Itachi]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: pretty much everybody Everybody who died in canon after the divergence point of the story, [[spoiler:including Itachi]]Itachi]].
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* IllGirl: Nariko's body is weak due to earlier neglect; ironically enough this saves her life, as the bijuu can't be safely extracted (killing her) until she's healthy
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* [[ManChild Womanchild]]: Nariko is 16 or 17, but acts like she's 8 because of no human interaction since then
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* [[ManChild Womanchild]]: WomanChild: Nariko is 16 or 17, but acts like she's 8 because of no human interaction since thenthen.
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* PowerCopying: Subverted; when copying fighting styles, Sasuke had also copied the users' mistakes, and has to unlearn them to improve
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* RealityEnsues: when copying fighting styles, Sasuke had also copied the users' mistakes, and has to unlearn them to improve
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* OutdatedByCanon: given the date of writing, it was inevitable; the most notable (and spoiler-free) include the gender and identity of the six- and seven-tails jinchuuriki
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* OutdatedByCanon: given the date of writing, it was inevitable; the most notable (and spoiler-free) include the gender and identity of the six- and seven-tails jinchuuriki
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* {{Jossed}}: OutdatedByCanon: given the date of writing, it was inevitable; the most notable (and spoiler-free) include the gender and identity of the six- and seven-tails jinchuuriki
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* UnfamiliarCeiling: Aside from that Sasuke can't see the ceiling (because he's blind), played straight with his awakening in Konoha
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* BadDreams: Triggered by being back in the Uchiha manor.
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Set up in an alternate continuity; Sasuke decides to take matters into his own hands before Orochimaru takes his body completely. Left to dead close to the Country of Fire he´s he's returned to Konoha and the people he tried to cut out of his life in his search for power. During this time he has to learn once more how to manage himself in the world, and also the importance of bonds.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3371184/1/Blind Blind]] is a [[FanficRecs/{{Naruto}} recommended]] Manga/{{Naruto}} fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/563067/ObsidianSickle ObsidianSickle]].
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* UnfamiliarCeiling: aside from that Sasuke can't see the ceiling ([[CaptainObvious because he's blind]]), played straight with his awakening in Konoha
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A sequel, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6433132/1/Fidelis Fidelis]], has been posted, last updated 2011 with only two chapters; a good authority says that the third chapter had been written but ended on a cliffhanger, and the author was unable to write the next chapter, so decided to be merciful.
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A sequel, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6433132/1/Fidelis Fidelis]], has been posted, last updated 2011 with only two chapters; a good authority says that the third chapter had been written but ended on a cliffhanger, and the author was unable to write the next chapter, so he decided to be merciful.
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* AGlitchInTheMatrix: Why is [[spoiler:Itachi]] lacking a chakra signature?
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* AlmightyJanitor: Sasuke: last of the Uchiha, former S-ranked criminal; still technically a genin [[spoiler:until the Chuunin Exam]]
* AmnesiaDanger: Sasuke still has the skills, but because of the mind wipe he doesn't know that [[spoiler: the village the team rested at is one of Oto's strongholds, and the townspeople recognize him from back then]]
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* AlmightyJanitor: Sasuke: last of the Uchiha, former S-ranked criminal; still technically a genin [[spoiler:until the Chuunin Exam]]
Exam]].
* AmnesiaDanger: Sasuke still has the skills, but because of the mind wipe he doesn't know that [[spoiler: the village the team rested at is one of Oto's strongholds, and the townspeople recognize him from backthen]]then]].
* AmnesiaDanger: Sasuke still has the skills, but because of the mind wipe he doesn't know that [[spoiler: the village the team rested at is one of Oto's strongholds, and the townspeople recognize him from back
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* AttackReflector: the Chakra Oscillation Project reverses someone's chakra, so their own attacks are used against them
* BadDreams: triggered by being back in the Uchiha manor
* BattleAmongstTheFlames: Itachi's use of Amaterasu turns his confrontation with Sasuke into this
* BearerOfBadNews: Kakashi tells Sakura that [[spoiler:her father is MIA]]
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: justified in the case of Sasuke, as his ([[EyeScream horr]][[ColdBloodedTorture ific]]) injuries were healed so as to not leave scars
* BadDreams: triggered by being back in the Uchiha manor
* BattleAmongstTheFlames: Itachi's use of Amaterasu turns his confrontation with Sasuke into this
* BearerOfBadNews: Kakashi tells Sakura that [[spoiler:her father is MIA]]
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: justified in the case of Sasuke, as his ([[EyeScream horr]][[ColdBloodedTorture ific]]) injuries were healed so as to not leave scars
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* AttackReflector: the The Chakra Oscillation Project reverses someone's chakra, so their own attacks are used against them
them.
* BadDreams:triggered Triggered by being back in the Uchiha manor
manor.
* BattleAmongstTheFlames: Itachi's use of Amaterasu turns his confrontation with Sasuke intothis
this.
* BearerOfBadNews: Kakashi tells Sakura that [[spoiler:her father isMIA]]
MIA]].
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished:justified Justified in the case of Sasuke, as his ([[EyeScream horr]][[ColdBloodedTorture ific]]) injuries were healed so as to not leave scarsscars.
* BadDreams:
* BattleAmongstTheFlames: Itachi's use of Amaterasu turns his confrontation with Sasuke into
* BearerOfBadNews: Kakashi tells Sakura that [[spoiler:her father is
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished:
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* BetaCouple: Naruto and Hinata
* BigBrotherInstinct: Kanaye, Sakura's older brother
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* BlindfoldedVision: Sasuke can pull this off with [[spoiler:his chakra senses]]
* BookEnds:
** Itachi's first and last on-screen appearances are both [[spoiler:in Nariko's hometown]]
** A character being blinded with a kunai both begins and ends the plot
* BigBrotherInstinct: Kanaye, Sakura's older brother
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* BlindfoldedVision: Sasuke can pull this off with [[spoiler:his chakra senses]]
* BookEnds:
** Itachi's first and last on-screen appearances are both [[spoiler:in Nariko's hometown]]
** A character being blinded with a kunai both begins and ends the plot
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* BetaCouple: Naruto and Hinata
Hinata.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Kanaye, Sakura's olderbrother
brother.
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* BlindfoldedVision: Sasuke can pull this off with [[spoiler:his chakrasenses]]
senses]].
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{{Bookends}}:
** Itachi's first and last on-screen appearances are both [[spoiler:in Nariko'shometown]]
hometown]].
** A character being blinded with a kunai both begins and ends theplotplot.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Kanaye, Sakura's older
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** denied by Sasuke, who works to function as a ninja despite losing his sight
** invoked for [[spoiler:Itachi]]
* CatsAreMagic: the two-tailed cat Nekomata has power over the dead, which even for the setting is rather supernatural
* CelibateHero: Sasuke; despite his goal to restore his clan, he felt he couldn't while Itachi was still around to threaten any family he started
* CharacterDevelopment: oh so, so very much for Sasuke; Sakura too, to a lesser extent
* ChekhovsGun: partial genjutsu; Sasuke's father's kunai
** invoked for [[spoiler:Itachi]]
* CatsAreMagic: the two-tailed cat Nekomata has power over the dead, which even for the setting is rather supernatural
* CelibateHero: Sasuke; despite his goal to restore his clan, he felt he couldn't while Itachi was still around to threaten any family he started
* CharacterDevelopment: oh so, so very much for Sasuke; Sakura too, to a lesser extent
* ChekhovsGun: partial genjutsu; Sasuke's father's kunai
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** denied Denied by Sasuke, who works to function as a ninja despite losing his sight
sight.
**invoked Invoked for [[spoiler:Itachi]]
[[spoiler:Itachi]].
* CatsAreMagic:the The two-tailed cat Nekomata has power over the dead, which even for the setting is rather supernatural
supernatural.
* CelibateHero: Sasuke; despite his goal to restore his clan, he felt he couldn't while Itachi was still around to threaten any family hestarted
started.
* CharacterDevelopment:oh Oh so, so very much for Sasuke; Sakura too, to a lesser extent
extent.
* ChekhovsGun:partial Partial genjutsu; Sasuke's father's kunaikunai.
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* CatsAreMagic:
* CelibateHero: Sasuke; despite his goal to restore his clan, he felt he couldn't while Itachi was still around to threaten any family he
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* ChekhovsGun:
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** the drunk Itachi killed when he went to retrieve the six-tails jinchuuriki. [[spoiler:He's Nariko's biological father.]]
* ChekhovsSkill: Sasuke training to break out of genjutsu; of course, that was the whole point of it
** the drunk Itachi killed when he went to retrieve the six-tails jinchuuriki. [[spoiler:He's Nariko's biological father.]]
* ChekhovsSkill: Sasuke training to break out of genjutsu; of course, that was the whole point of it
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** the The abnormally-large chakra signature. [[spoiler:She's Sasuke's teammate for the Chuunin Exam.]]
**the The drunk Itachi killed when he went to retrieve the six-tails jinchuuriki. [[spoiler:He's Nariko's biological father.]]
* ChekhovsSkill: Sasuke training to break out of genjutsu; of course, that was the whole point ofitit.
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* TheCoatsAreOff: before their fight, Sasuke takes off his raincoat and Itachi takes off his Akatsuki cloak
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* CruelMercy: the aptly-given title of chapter [[spoiler:sixty-nine]]
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* CruelMercy: the The aptly-given title of chapter [[spoiler:sixty-nine]][[spoiler:sixty-nine]].
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* DeadPersonConversation: Sasuke with [[spoiler:his mother]], courtesy of [[spoiler:Nekomata]]
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* DeadPersonConversation: Sasuke with [[spoiler:his mother]], courtesy of [[spoiler:Nekomata]][[spoiler:Nekomata]].
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* DeathSeeker: Itachi, subconsciously
* DeliberateInjuryGambit: Nariko keeps getting into "accidents", to keep her body weak, after finding out what will happen to her once she's stronger
* DisabilitySuperpower: downplayed and justified with [[spoiler:Sasuke's chakra sense]]
* DisabilityImmunity: being blinded will protect you from:
** Orochimaru wanting to steal your body; invoked by Sasuke in the first chapter
** the effects of most genjutsu, including the [[HypnoticEyes Mangekyo Sharingan]]
** [[spoiler: it also removes the control of Madara's Sharingan]]
* DeliberateInjuryGambit: Nariko keeps getting into "accidents", to keep her body weak, after finding out what will happen to her once she's stronger
* DisabilitySuperpower: downplayed and justified with [[spoiler:Sasuke's chakra sense]]
* DisabilityImmunity: being blinded will protect you from:
** Orochimaru wanting to steal your body; invoked by Sasuke in the first chapter
** the effects of most genjutsu, including the [[HypnoticEyes Mangekyo Sharingan]]
** [[spoiler: it also removes the control of Madara's Sharingan]]
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* DeathSeeker: Itachi, subconsciously
subconsciously.
* DeliberateInjuryGambit: Nariko keeps getting into "accidents", to keep her body weak, after finding out what will happen to her once she'sstronger
stronger.
* DisabilitySuperpower:downplayed Downplayed and justified with [[spoiler:Sasuke's chakra sense]]
sense]].
* DisabilityImmunity:being Being blinded will protect you from:
** Orochimaru wanting to steal your body; invoked by Sasuke in the firstchapter
chapter.
**the The effects of most genjutsu, including the [[HypnoticEyes Mangekyo Sharingan]]
Sharingan]].
** [[spoiler:it It also removes the control of Madara's Sharingan]]Sharingan.]]
* DeliberateInjuryGambit: Nariko keeps getting into "accidents", to keep her body weak, after finding out what will happen to her once she's
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Nariko
* {{Doorstopper}}: at over 500,000 words and 72 chapters (plus extras)
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Nariko
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* EyeColorChange: [[spoiler:after being blinded, Itachi's turn pale brown, the colour of Nariko's eyes]]
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* EyeColorChange: [[spoiler:after [[spoiler:After being blinded, Itachi's turn pale brown, the colour of Nariko's eyes]]eyes.]]
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* GroupHug: Sakura's family ([[AndZoidberg and Naruto]]) when [[spoiler:her father returns]]
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Set up in an alternate continuity. Sasuke decides to take matters into his own hands before Orochimaru takes his body completely. Left to dead close to the Country of Fire he´s returned to Konoha and the people he tried to cut out of his life in his search of power. Blind hilarity ensues.
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Set up in an alternate continuity. continuity; Sasuke decides to take matters into his own hands before Orochimaru takes his body completely. Left to dead close to the Country of Fire he´s returned to Konoha and the people he tried to cut out of his life in his search of for power. Blind hilarity ensues.
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* AmnesiaDanger: Sasuke still has the skills, but because of the mind wipe he doesn't know that [[spoiler: The the village the team rested at is one of Oto's strongholds, and the townspeople recognize him from back then]]
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Set up in an alternate continuity. Sasuke decides to take matters into his own hands before Orochimaru takes his body completely. Left to dead close to the Country of Fire he´s returned to Konoha and the people he tried to cut out of his life in his search of power. Blind hilarity ensues.
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* AGlitchInTheMatrix: why is [[spoiler:Itachi]] lacking a chakra signature?
* AdaptationalVillainy: Pain is kind of a dick in this story
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* AGlitchInTheMatrix: why Why is [[spoiler:Itachi]] lacking a chakra signature?
* AdaptationalVillainy: Pain is kind of a dick in thisstorystory.
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* AmnesiaDanger: Sasuke still has the skills, but because of the mind wipe he doesn't know that [[spoiler: the village the team rested at is one of Oto's strongholds, and the townspeople recognize him from back then]]
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* AmnesiaDanger: Sasuke still has the skills, but because of the mind wipe he doesn't know that [[spoiler: the The village the team rested at is one of Oto's strongholds, and the townspeople recognize him from back then]]
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%%I have now finished my reread of the story! I'm keeping my notes on here; if you can fill out the trope better, do so. (If you're Russell can't-remember-the-name-you-go-by-online-and-I-just-checked-my-Skype-to-see-what-your-name-actually-is, hi there! Thanks for working on it!)
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* ChekhovsGunman: the abnormally-large chakra signature. [[spoiler:She's Sasuke's teammate for the Chuunin Exam.]]
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* ChekhovsGunman: ChekhovsGunman:
** the abnormally-large chakra signature. [[spoiler:She's Sasuke's teammate for the Chuunin Exam.]]
** the drunk Itachi killed when he went to retrieve the six-tails jinchuuriki. [[spoiler:He's Nariko's biological father.]]
** the abnormally-large chakra signature. [[spoiler:She's Sasuke's teammate for the Chuunin Exam.]]
** the drunk Itachi killed when he went to retrieve the six-tails jinchuuriki. [[spoiler:He's Nariko's biological father.]]
%% ChildrenAreInnocent Nariko
%%* CryIntoChest
%% ? DealWithTheDevil Raijuu
%%? DisabledLoveInterest
%% * ExactWords: "I will have you gone from me before the end of the year." -> "I'm letting you go, but I didn't say where."
%% HeadbuttOfLove
* HopeIsScary: why Sasuke doesn't want to think about his sight coming back, and Sakura doesn't want to imagine that he might love her
%% TheKlutz: (starts 54)
%% * LoveInformant ((early, about Hinata))
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%% ? MakeItLookLikeAnAccident Nariko
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* SurvivalMantra: "kai" for Sasuke, while trying to escape genjutsu