Fanfic / The Light in the Darkness
A My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic Fanfic
written by zaptiftun.
After spending the day in Cloudsdale at a Wonderbolts air show and even getting to spend some time with her heroes, Rainbow Dash heads home content that she'd had one of the best days of her life. That is until she hears a terrible scream coming from her friend Pinkie Pie's house and enters to find the pink Earth Pony nearly broken by a horrific nightmare. Rainbow Dash must now help one of her best friends overcome some serious inner demons and get back to her happy, normal self.The Light In The Darkness
on Fimfiction.net) is considered by many to be one of the most heartwarming fanfics in the fandom and quickly became extremely popular on both DeviantArt
and Equestria Daily. Despite being a one shot and relatively short, it's gained a reputation for being heartwarming enough to neutralize reading the infamous Cupcakes
fanfic. It was originally intended to be another Alternate Ending
but was revised to be more of a stand alone story though there's enough vagueness with Pinkie Pie's nightmare to still consider it as one or just a stand alone. It's also considered a great example of a "Friendshipping" story, depicting the characters' love for each other as completely platonic but still very real.
A live reading can be found here
- Adult Fear: Rainbow Dash trying to find Pinkie Pie, believing someone has broken into her house and may have done something to her.
- All Just a Dream: If you consider this an Alternate Ending to Cupcakes, then the events of that fic. Regardless it begins with Pinkie Pie suffering a horrible nightmare.
- Alternate Ending: Was originally concieved as one to Cupcakes. It was changed when the writer realized just how many of those were around, but the events of the nightmare are vague enough to still view it as one if you want to.
- Ax-Crazy: Pinkie Pie is terrified this may be true of her. Ultimately averted.
- Break the Cutie: Pinkie Pie's nightmare pretty successfully did this to her. She gets better.
- Cool Down Hug: When Pinkie Pie starts to slip back into her Heroic B.S.O.D., Rainbow Dash uses this and some words to pull her out of it.
- Enemy Within: Pinkie Pie believes this may be true of her. It turns out it's not but it takes a lot of convincing.
- A Friend in Need: The premise of the story; Pinkie Pie needs cheering up and Rainbow Dash is there to help.
- Gosh Dang It to Heck!:
Rainbow Dash: Why the hay does a bakery have a cleaver?!
- Have I Mentioned I Am Heterosexual Today?:
Rainbow Dash: Come on, Pinkie, you know I like stallions!
- Heroic B.S.O.D.: Rainbow Dash comes upon Pinkie Pie in the midst of very serious one. Rainbow Dash uses this to convince Pinkie Pie that she's not psychotic because she had this reaction to the dream.
- Madness Mantra:
Pinkie Pie: Can't let it happen…have to protect friends…won't let them die.
- Noodle Incident: Apparently the Cakes are not at Sugercube Corner because they're on vacation to help Mr. Cake recover from getting a Twitchy Eye in response to Pinkie Pie performing an experiment involving pies and popcorn.
- OOC Is Serious Business: It doesn't take long for Rainbow Dash to realize Pinkie's in a bad way. And when she realizes just how bad Pinkie's nightmare was...
- Paranoia Fuel: In-Universe, her nightmare and the existence of "Pinkamena" are this for Pinkie Pie.
- Recursive Fan Fiction: A fanfic known as Waking Nightmares treats this as taking place before it, and treats Cupcakes as a nightmare by extension.
- Shout-Out: Pinkie Pie is a fan of the Marx Brothers.
- Show Within a Show: Pinkie Pie's favorite show is explained to be My Little People.
- Take Our Word for It: We never learn the full truth about just what happened in Pinkie Pie's nightmare, but considering what is said and how it sent her spiraling into a serious Heroic B.S.O.D., it's much scarier that way.
- We also know that the story was supposed to be an alternate ending to Cupcakes, so we can make some guesses...
- Thousand-Yard Stare: Rainbow Dash finds Pinkie Pie in this state, noting her eyes are glazed over and, while she's focused on what she's doing, she just looks like she's in blind terror.
- True Companions: Considered one of the best examples in the fandom for depicting the heroes' relationship thusly.
- WAFF: There's a reason this is known as the antithesis of Cupcakes.
- Wham Line: Rainbow Dash, at least, gets completely blindsided by it. "Dashie, I KILLED you! I killed EVERYPONY!"
- Who Would Want to Watch Us?: Pinkie Pie mentions she likes a show called My Little People. Rainbow Dash is amused that Pinkie Pie has an obsession with a "little filly's show".
- You Have Got to Be Kidding Me!: Rainbow Dash has this reaction (at first) when she is told a nightmare was the cause of Pinkie Pie's Heroic B.S.O.D.. That changes very quickly when she learns just a little bit of what that nightmare was about. She also has this reaction due to the fact that the bakery for some reason has a meat cleaver.
- My God, You Are Serious: Once Rainbow Dash finds out the nightmare was from Pinkie killing everypony, including Rainbow Dash's dream self, she's a lot more understanding about Pinkie's Heroic B.S.O.D..