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* KickTheSonOfABitch: When Nora defies RWBY's expectations and ''doesn't'' attack Mercury [[Recap/RWBYV3E6Fall like Yang did in canon]], the group decides to go through with their Plan B to draw Grimm towards the Vytal Festival by gathering the worst of the White Fang and Crimson Thorns ([[EvenEvilHasStandards particularly the child murderers and rapists]]) and terrorizing the shit out of them before killing them all.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: When Nora defies RWBY's expectations and ''doesn't'' attack Mercury [[Recap/RWBYV3E6Fall like Yang did in canon]], the group decides to go through with their Plan B to draw Grimm towards the Vytal Festival by gathering the worst of the White Fang and Crimson Thorns ([[EvenEvilHasStandards particularly the child murderers and rapists]]) and terrorizing the shit out of them before killing them all.
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* PandaingToTheAudience: The White Fang Lieutenant from the show? He's a panda faunus.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Blake and Velvet.
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* {{Kayfabe}}: In public, Blake Belladonna and Weiss Schnee are mortal enemies, whose groups - the Schnee Dust Company and the White Fang - hate each other to bits. In private, they're great friends and enjoy each other's company after having to deal with [[GenkiGirl Ruby]] and [[BloodKnight Yang]] all of the time.
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* MightyGlacier: Attention is drawn to exactly how ''tanky'' Jaune is, what with having a crazy amount of aura and wielding a shield. The glacier part comes in when you remember that his only offensive tool is a sword, and he really isn't all that fast. [[spoiler: During [=JNPR's=] fight with [=CVFY=], he takes enough gunfire from Coco to down a dozen Nevermores by her estimate, with practically no reaction.]]
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* NebulousEvilOrganization: The Commission, though not really all that nebulous. It's specifically made to counter Ozpin's AncientConspiracy, as they feel that he's been doing a piss-poor job of keeping the world safe, given the state it's in.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: After a racist waiter causes Velvet to storm out of a restaurant, his manager gives him a good dressing-down. After all, alienating the customers is bad for business.
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* RealityEnsues: After a racist waiter causes Velvet to storm out of a restaurant, his manager gives him a good dressing-down. After all, alienating the customers is bad for business.
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* BadassBisexual: Coco is the head badass in a team of badasses and will gladly ogle anyone that strikes her fancy but clearly has feelings for Velvet. The only thing stopping her is the fear of her family's toxicity possibly affecting Velvet.
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* MythologyGag: Yang mentions being hired by several companies that are [[IdiosyncraticShipNaming ship names]] for the RWBY fandom such as White Rose Shipping and Checkmate Enterprises.
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* OnceKilledAManWithANoodleImplement: Yang apparently killed ten men with a rusty spoon once.
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* {{Squee}}: Upon Yang offering her an autograph, Nora lets out a squeal that shatters every window within twenty meters of her.
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* HeroWorshipper: Nora for Yang due to the latter leading a rescue of the former's home town.
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* HeroWorshipper: TheGlomp: Yang's hugs are so strong that Weiss had steel rods put in her clothing to keep the other woman from crushing her and it still doesn't help.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11309716/1 The Commission]]'' is an AlternateUniverse ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'' fanfic co-authored by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4024697/CV12Hornet CV12Hornet]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4060717/Xomniac Xomniac]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11309716/1 The Commission]]'' is an AlternateUniverse ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'' fanfic co-authored by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4024697/CV12Hornet CV12Hornet]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4060717/Xomniac Xomniac]].
Xomniac]]. You'd probably heard the two from [[Fanfic/ThisBites their most popular work]].
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Needs More Love wick cleaning.
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Word of God says that it has been cancelled.
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[[DeadFic Word of God says that it has been cancelled.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: The members of RWBY are a group of collaborating criminal masterminds in this fic.
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* RealityEnsues: After a racist waiter causes Velvet to storm out of a restaurant, his manager gives him a good dressing-down. After all, alienating the customers is bad for business.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: When Nora defies RWBY's expectations and ''doesn't'' attack Mercury [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/RWBYV3E6Fall like Yang did in canon]], the group decides to go through with their Plan B to draw Grimm towards the Vytal Festival by gathering the worst of the White Fang and Crimson Thorns ([[EvenEvilHasStandards particularly the child murderers and rapists]]) and terrorizing the shit out of them before killing them all.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: When Nora defies RWBY's expectations and ''doesn't'' attack Mercury [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/RWBYV3E6Fall [[Recap/RWBYV3E6Fall like Yang did in canon]], the group decides to go through with their Plan B to draw Grimm towards the Vytal Festival by gathering the worst of the White Fang and Crimson Thorns ([[EvenEvilHasStandards particularly the child murderers and rapists]]) and terrorizing the shit out of them before killing them all.
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* TheAce: Pyrrha, obviously. [[Spoiler:Becomes an even bigger one when she single-handedly secures victory against Team CFVY in the Vytal Festival after the rest of her team goes down.]]
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* TheAce: Pyrrha, obviously. [[Spoiler:Becomes [[spoiler:Becomes an even bigger one when she single-handedly secures victory against Team CFVY in the Vytal Festival after the rest of her team goes down.]]
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* TheAce: Pyrrha, obviously. [[Spoiler:Becomes an even bigger one when she single-handedly secures victory against Team CFVY in the Vytal Festival after the rest of her team goes down.]]
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* TheDreaded: The girls consider Qrow as one guy who will be the biggest wrench in their plans.
* KickTheSonOfABitch: When Nora defies RWBY's expectations and ''doesn't'' attack Mercury [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Recap/RWBYV3E6Fall like Yang did in canon]], the group decides to go through with their Plan B to draw Grimm towards the Vytal Festival by gathering the worst of the White Fang and Crimson Thorns ([[EvenEvilHasStandards particularly the child murderers and rapists]]) and terrorizing the shit out of them before killing them all.
* LetsGetDangerous: After Qrow hands Ruby her ass, [[spoiler:she busts out her Spring Maiden powers.]]
* LetsGetDangerous: After Qrow hands Ruby her ass, [[spoiler:she busts out her Spring Maiden powers.]]
* NaiveNewcomer: Jaune's an obvious one, but there's also Haruko Miki, the Spring Maiden. She introduces herself to Ruby by barging into her office, declaring her a villain and generally acting like a Toku hero, then she gets offended when Ruby interrupts her speech.
* SpiderSense: Qrow's Semblance here is some really short-term precognition that he uses to match Ruby's SuperSpeed.
* TimeForPlanB: Half the time, the plans in motion by Team RWBY don't always pan out, but they tend to be prepared for when things do go wrong.
* TimeForPlanB: Half the time, the plans in motion by Team RWBY don't always pan out, but they tend to be prepared for when things do go wrong.
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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler:Chapter 13 shows Ruby to be the Spring Maiden after killing the last one.]]
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I realize it might seem suspicious, me editing myself in, but it's true. CV 12 and I are co-authors, I even publish the story on SB for him. If you have any doubts, ask him on FF.Net.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11309716/1 The Commission]]'' is an AlternateUniverse ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'' fanfic co-authored by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4024697/CV12Hornet CV12Hornet]].
CV12Hornet]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4060717/Xomniac Xomniac]].
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* AmbiguouslyGay: The girls of Team RWBY, considering that Blake thanks Ruby's supply of weapons and MiniMecha with tongue while Weiss and Yang's idea of waiting for further developments involves a pajama party date night. Nothing definitive, though.
* BadassCrew: Teams JNPR and CVFY are noted to be among the top percentile of hunters, even while in training. During initiation, the two groups banded together to take down a Goliath.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Ruby and Blake have interesting things responses when it comes to racism: they hand over some mooks from each other groups that started a fight over race issues and subjected said mooks to {{Cruel And Unusual Death}}s. Later, when Blake nails the casually racist Cardin to a wall and proceeds to speak with Velvet while her hands are still slick with blood.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Ruby and Blake have interesting things responses when it comes to racism: they hand over some mooks from each other groups that started a fight over race issues and subjected said mooks to {{Cruel And Unusual Death}}s. Later, when Blake nails the casually racist Cardin to a wall and proceeds to speak with Velvet while her hands are still slick with blood.him just bleeding out.
* EliteMooks: The Exo-7. A team of seven PoweredArmor-wearing {{Boxed Crook}}s with [[BadassNormal piddly-to-nonexistent aura]] that are able to match up against JNPR and CFVY together, completing most of their objectives save one and [[KnowWhenToFoldEm only retreating when Glynda and Oobleck arrive.]]
* EliteMooks: The Exo-7. A team of seven PoweredArmor-wearing {{Boxed Crook}}s with [[BadassNormal piddly-to-nonexistent aura]] that are able to match up against JNPR and CFVY together, completing most of their objectives save one and [[KnowWhenToFoldEm only retreating when Glynda and Oobleck arrive.]]
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** Pyrrha has a more subtle one for Weiss as the latter sponsored her personally when she was just starting out.
* MakeAnExampleOfThem: When Blake goes to visit Velvet in an attempt to recruit her to the girls' conspiracy, which the former was certain the latter wouldn't agree to owing to their past and Velvet's feelings on faunus rights and the White Fang, she first finds Cardin and nails him to a wall. Velvet notes that Blake's hands were slick with blood when they had their talk.
* MakeAnExampleOfThem: When Blake goes to visit Velvet in an attempt to recruit her to the girls' conspiracy, which the former was certain the latter wouldn't agree to owing to their past and Velvet's feelings on faunus rights and the White Fang, she first finds Cardin and nails him to a wall. Velvet notes that Blake's hands were slick with blood when they had their talk.
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** Pyrrha has is a more subtle one for Weiss as the latter sponsored her personally when she was just starting out.
* MakeAnExampleOfThem: When Blake goes to visit Velvet in an attempt to recruit her to the girls' conspiracy, which the former was certain the latter wouldn't agree to owing to their past and Velvet's feelings on faunus rights and the White Fang, she first finds Cardin and nails him to awall. Velvet notes that Blake's hands were slick with blood when wall.
* NGOSuperpower: The titular Commission. Simply put, theyhad have the resources and influence of [[MegaCorp the Schnee Dust Company]], the military power of the Dust Devils which rival any of the kingdoms' own armies and the underground reach of the White Fang and Crimson Thorns. If that's not enough, their talk.R&D outstrips even Atlas' own with their PoweredArmor development shown to be years ahead [[spoiler:along with robotics and artificial Aura development, considering that Penny is with them instead of Atlas.]]
* MakeAnExampleOfThem: When Blake goes to visit Velvet in an attempt to recruit her to the girls' conspiracy, which the former was certain the latter wouldn't agree to owing to their past and Velvet's feelings on faunus rights and the White Fang, she first finds Cardin and nails him to a
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* PandaingToTheAudience: The White Fang Lieutenant from the show? He's a panda faunus.
* PrivateMilitaryContractor: Yang's Dust Devils. It's essentially an answer to[[VideoGame/CallOfDutyAdvancedWarfare Atlas]].[[NGOSuperpower Atlas]] from ''VideoGame/CallOfDutyAdvancedWarfare''.
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* BadassBisexual: Coco will gladly ogle anyone that strikes her fancy but clearly has feelings for Velvet. The only thing stopping her is the fear of her family's toxicity possibly affecting Velvet.
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Weiss, thanks to her changing up the Schnee Dust Company after their horrid treatment of their faunus workers come to light (and simply exiling her family rather than killing them outright). Also, Yang's rise to power involving the rescue of outlying villages from Grimm attacks.
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* WeWillNotUsePhotoshopInTheFuture: After Pyrrha seeks Weiss out for help when Teams JNPR and CFVY are investigating the White Fang, Winter tries to turn her against her sister with pictures that show that Weiss hasn't really improved faunus working conditions in Schnee Dust. This shakes her [[spoiler:until she shows it to Velvet on a hunch, with the latter girl commenting that while the picture is real, the time stamp has been doctored.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11309716/1 The Commission]]'' is an AlternateUniverse ''WebAnimation/RWBY'' ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4024697/CV12Hornet CV12Hornet]] wherein the titular team .
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* AgeLift: Team RWBY's aged up in relation to everyone else. Notable effects in this fic include: Having the girls be in separate teams, Blake formerly being Velvet's friend and mentor and Weiss having sponsored Pyrrha in Mistral when the latter was just starting out.
* BadassBisexual: Coco will gladly ogle anyone that strikes her fancy but clearly has feelings for Velvet. The only thing stopping her is the fear of her family's toxicity possibly affecting Velvet.
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* HeroWorshipper: Nora for Yang due to the latter leading a rescue of the former's home town.
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At the flip of a coin, good can become evil... Right can become wrong... Light can turn to dark... And the mightiest of heroes... can become the greatest of villains...
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11309716/1 The Commission]]'' is an AlternateUniverse ''WebAnimation/RWBY'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4024697/CV12Hornet CV12Hornet]] wherein the titular team .
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!!''The Commission'' contains the following tropes:
* AdaptationalBadass: Team RWBY. While the girls are decent fighters in canon, but they're still NewMeat. In this fic, Blake and Ruby are the two most feared and wanted criminals on the planet, Weiss rules the corporate world with such ruthlessness that chills Cinder and Yang is at the head of a mercenary company on par with any of the kingdoms' armies and delivers a CurbStompBattle on Neo when they first meet.
* AgeLift: Team RWBY's aged up in relation to everyone else.
* TheCoup: How the girls acquire power, they go to their respective groups and blackmail, intimidate or otherwise muscle their way to leadership.
* CoverBlowingSuperpower: Roman's dust store robbery has Ruby covering his escape instead of Cinder, being that the latter is with Weiss as her secretary. Unfortunately, Ruby's incredible rifle marksmanship clues Glynda in to her being in Vale due to no one else being that good with that particular weapon-type.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Jaune and Pyrrha, Coco and Velvet, Ren and Nora. People who have just met them tend to assume them all to be couples, only to be surprised when it's cleared up that they aren't (until the former two couples do get together, the latter two have an understanding).
* OnlySaneMan: Fox for Team CVFY.
* PrivateMilitaryContractor: Yang's Dust Devils. It's essentially an answer to [[VideoGame/CallOfDutyAdvancedWarfare Atlas]].
* VillainProtagonist: Team RWBY.
* YouAllMeetInAnInn: The girls of Team RWBY weren't actually together in a team when they were in Beacon. Instead, they met in a bar, bond over a plate of cookies and work their way up from there.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11309716/1 The Commission]]'' is an AlternateUniverse ''WebAnimation/RWBY'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4024697/CV12Hornet CV12Hornet]] wherein the titular team .
NeedsMoreLove.
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!!''The Commission'' contains the following tropes:
* AdaptationalBadass: Team RWBY. While the girls are decent fighters in canon, but they're still NewMeat. In this fic, Blake and Ruby are the two most feared and wanted criminals on the planet, Weiss rules the corporate world with such ruthlessness that chills Cinder and Yang is at the head of a mercenary company on par with any of the kingdoms' armies and delivers a CurbStompBattle on Neo when they first meet.
* AgeLift: Team RWBY's aged up in relation to everyone else.
* TheCoup: How the girls acquire power, they go to their respective groups and blackmail, intimidate or otherwise muscle their way to leadership.
* CoverBlowingSuperpower: Roman's dust store robbery has Ruby covering his escape instead of Cinder, being that the latter is with Weiss as her secretary. Unfortunately, Ruby's incredible rifle marksmanship clues Glynda in to her being in Vale due to no one else being that good with that particular weapon-type.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Jaune and Pyrrha, Coco and Velvet, Ren and Nora. People who have just met them tend to assume them all to be couples, only to be surprised when it's cleared up that they aren't (until the former two couples do get together, the latter two have an understanding).
* OnlySaneMan: Fox for Team CVFY.
* PrivateMilitaryContractor: Yang's Dust Devils. It's essentially an answer to [[VideoGame/CallOfDutyAdvancedWarfare Atlas]].
* VillainProtagonist: Team RWBY.
* YouAllMeetInAnInn: The girls of Team RWBY weren't actually together in a team when they were in Beacon. Instead, they met in a bar, bond over a plate of cookies and work their way up from there.
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